allow me to reintroduce myself...

Camp Bell · 05-15-2013, 08:59 PM

My tiger stripes faded into a life of pi greatness..
so i went on a typing hiatus into a jedi knight chamber
now i drive a nice spaceship from designing light sabers
time wasting, try wasted. my hype is high maintenance
hi haters, i like hatred. mike myers vibe wit a slight jason
wax has mastered line basics plus past his prime, face it
my passion of christ, satan, is he passing me by blatant?
i'm back an quite angered wit ecstatic rhyme statements
respect my aggressive styled mangas, i do rec in wild asia
you should check ya clouds for threats from the ground later
what you expect from the foul natured, extra noun blazer?..

...tryna heat up, fuck wit me...

Dove Dozer · 05-15-2013, 09:06 PM

Dude this was nice on many levels. Intricate wording and superb syllables.

Props.

Holler

Fig · 05-15-2013, 09:23 PM

Good to see you back camp

This was a cool flex to come back on. Your rhyme scheme is awesome, as always. I cant say much else because I can tell this is something to get you warmed up, and that's great. We gotta collab though for sure. Anyways, These lines stood out to me

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i'm back an quite angered wit ecstatic rhyme statements
respect my aggressive styled mangas, i do rec in wild asia
you should check ya clouds for threats from the ground later
what you expect from the foul natured, extra noun blazer?..

nice drop man

Just Write · 05-15-2013, 09:44 PM

First four lines were bananas to me, definitely was smooth as shit to read, enjoyed this very much just wish it was a little longer. Stay up man n keep posting, ill def be on the lookout

Zen · 05-17-2013, 02:24 PM

Camp where the fuck have you been!? Its ZenLand haha.
Well this was some shit as always. Short and sweet. Nicely done man. Get back and stay active holmes.

Camp Bell · 05-17-2013, 04:57 PM

lmaooo @ zen, waaaat up faaaam!!!

man i caught a sick ass case of writers block, i think i may be good now
ill be in 1-2, OM and the Swag and Flow leagues, fuck wit cha boi!! but
thanks for all the love tho!!!

EndSane · 05-18-2013, 12:22 AM

This had some swag too it lol...I like the Jesus/satan for some reason...hated the closer tho...thought it could of been worded much better tbh...

Welcome back man...Im back too bro...Good seeing u back and this was pretty good bro...So lol since this is short I will give small feed...

Mr. J · 05-18-2013, 12:32 AM

This was pretty clean cut, I was digging the vibe
the word usage was nice as hell, short and sweet
just how I like my women

05-15-2013, 08:59 PM	#1
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	allow me to reintroduce myself... My tiger stripes faded into a life of pi greatness.. so i went on a typing hiatus into a jedi knight chamber now i drive a nice spaceship from designing light sabers time wasting, try wasted. my hype is high maintenance hi haters, i like hatred. mike myers vibe wit a slight jason wax has mastered line basics plus past his prime, face it my passion of christ, satan, is he passing me by blatant? i'm back an quite angered wit ecstatic rhyme statements respect my aggressive styled mangas, i do rec in wild asia you should check ya clouds for threats from the ground later what you expect from the foul natured, extra noun blazer?.. ...tryna heat up, fuck wit me... __________________ get high. write rhymes.

05-15-2013, 09:06 PM	#2
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	Dude this was nice on many levels. Intricate wording and superb syllables. Props. Holler __________________

05-15-2013, 09:44 PM	#4
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	First four lines were bananas to me, definitely was smooth as shit to read, enjoyed this very much just wish it was a little longer. Stay up man n keep posting, ill def be on the lookout __________________

05-17-2013, 04:57 PM	#6
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	lmaooo @ zen, waaaat up faaaam!!! man i caught a sick ass case of writers block, i think i may be good now ill be in 1-2, OM and the Swag and Flow leagues, fuck wit cha boi!! but thanks for all the love tho!!! __________________ get high. write rhymes.

05-18-2013, 12:22 AM	#7
EndSane Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 88 Battle Record: 0-1 Champed Challenge Week I Challenge Week II Challenge Week III Challenge Week IV Challenge Week V Challenge Week VI Challenge Week VII Challenge Week VIII Challenge Week IX Challenge Week X Rep Power: 38	This had some swag too it lol...I like the Jesus/satan for some reason...hated the closer tho...thought it could of been worded much better tbh... Welcome back man...Im back too bro...Good seeing u back and this was pretty good bro...So lol since this is short I will give small feed... __________________ Delirious Nomads

05-17-2013, 02:24 PM	#5
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Camp where the fuck have you been!? Its ZenLand haha. Well this was some shit as always. Short and sweet. Nicely done man. Get back and stay active holmes.

05-18-2013, 12:32 AM	#8
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	This was pretty clean cut, I was digging the vibe the word usage was nice as hell, short and sweet just how I like my women