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Camp Bell 05-15-2013 08:59 PM

allow me to reintroduce myself...
 
My tiger stripes faded into a life of pi greatness..
so i went on a typing hiatus into a jedi knight chamber
now i drive a nice spaceship from designing light sabers
time wasting, try wasted. my hype is high maintenance
hi haters, i like hatred. mike myers vibe wit a slight jason
wax has mastered line basics plus past his prime, face it
my passion of christ, satan, is he passing me by blatant?
i'm back an quite angered wit ecstatic rhyme statements
respect my aggressive styled mangas, i do rec in wild asia
you should check ya clouds for threats from the ground later
what you expect from the foul natured, extra noun blazer?..


...tryna heat up, fuck wit me...

Dove Dozer 05-15-2013 09:06 PM

Dude this was nice on many levels. Intricate wording and superb syllables.


Props.

Holler

Fig 05-15-2013 09:23 PM

Good to see you back camp

This was a cool flex to come back on. Your rhyme scheme is awesome, as always. I cant say much else because I can tell this is something to get you warmed up, and that's great. We gotta collab though for sure. Anyways, These lines stood out to me

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i'm back an quite angered wit ecstatic rhyme statements
respect my aggressive styled mangas, i do rec in wild asia
you should check ya clouds for threats from the ground later
what you expect from the foul natured, extra noun blazer?..
nice drop man

Just Write 05-15-2013 09:44 PM

First four lines were bananas to me, definitely was smooth as shit to read, enjoyed this very much just wish it was a little longer. Stay up man n keep posting, ill def be on the lookout

Zen 05-17-2013 02:24 PM

Camp where the fuck have you been!? Its ZenLand haha.
Well this was some shit as always. Short and sweet. Nicely done man. Get back and stay active holmes.

Camp Bell 05-17-2013 04:57 PM

lmaooo @ zen, waaaat up faaaam!!!

man i caught a sick ass case of writers block, i think i may be good now
ill be in 1-2, OM and the Swag and Flow leagues, fuck wit cha boi!! but
thanks for all the love tho!!!

EndSane 05-18-2013 12:22 AM

This had some swag too it lol...I like the Jesus/satan for some reason...hated the closer tho...thought it could of been worded much better tbh...

Welcome back man...Im back too bro...Good seeing u back and this was pretty good bro...So lol since this is short I will give small feed...

Mr. J 05-18-2013 12:32 AM

This was pretty clean cut, I was digging the vibe
the word usage was nice as hell, short and sweet
just how I like my women


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