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![]() Young thug This kid was smart, had good grades but didn't feel protected
He wants a family, 'cuz at home he feels neglected When he was young, his dad left and it still effects him So now he hangs with bad kids hopin he'll forget it He no longer cares about his real fam cuz they're his family now They taught him things his dad didn't like standing his ground Now he's doing drugs, his father never taught him right from wrong His nights are long, stayin up from drugs and writin songs And once his high is gone, he's deeply depressed Now he's sleeping in class, cuz he desperately needed to rest His grades are dropping, the bright future he had drifts away And he miss behaves, trying to fit in with the kids today It's a shame, this young kid had it made Now he's a young thug, this happened once all the sadness came It changed his whole point of view, he hates his life He thinks bringing pain to others will make it right The gang asked him to shoot in a drive by he hesitated a bit But once he got in the car he didn't think about shit So when they spotted the victims, his gun started to bust It gave him a rush, and his heart started to pump He loved this feeling, and couldn't help but do it again He didn't care if doing it meant losing a friend till one day he was driving by some kids and his tires were popped He hopped out of the car, pulled his gun out and lined up the glock He was out numbered, he couldn't shoot cuz he was tired and shocked That's when a kid aimed at him and fired a shot........ |
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Yo feed some stuff man
I always see your pieces but never see you feeding? Spread the love
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& by "love" he means "butt cheeks"
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And by "butt cheeks" he means just the brown eye
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Emotion was cool here...could hear this as an audio joint, wouldn't cop it but you know that's just me.Thought you could have used better word choices in a few parts yet it is what it is and that was an ok read in my book.
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