God is Home.

Geno · 10-11-2013, 07:09 PM

Model flow, I write rock and roll like cobblestone
God is home, if yours the one and only -he's not alone
I'm a gospel qoute from ressurection day
Ull see history repeat, none is left to make
ill place you in the wild west today, ridin' spurs
Cause I'm wyatt earp when it comes to violent words
Use your brain while it works to start gettin paid
And stop living life the peasant way, in section 8
Too many beds been made at young ages in life
That's why gamble knows what the medication is like
Paeganist type, stupid human nature all I see anymore
And a good conversation's what my demons are for
Only the good die young, but those people were born
Fucked my life -made a baby, do I keep or abort
Preacher of war, never made the word peace a resort
Unless we're talkin piece like the heater, a torch
I have stripes like a zebra, or a beetlejuice coat
I've seen life, seen death, i'm micheal keaton -a ghost

Mr. J · 10-11-2013, 07:18 PM

This was dope, I would have liked to see a little bit more
you have a great grasp of technicality with your rhymes
the first half was nice, the second part was dope
the whole Michael Keaton thing was raw...Batman...

Geno · 10-11-2013, 07:20 PM

Thanks. Keaton was beetlejuice also

Mr. J · 10-11-2013, 07:33 PM

I know that breh...

Geno · 10-11-2013, 07:36 PM

Oh. GOod shit

CopyPat · 10-12-2013, 06:37 PM

hahaha dude this was super sick. fuckin awesome. had everything. this shit is easy for u and it shows. there is not a single thing i can critique about this, just dopeness.

beatlejuice coat scheme was retarded, and then to tie it in with the movie actor references at the end just killed it. make this little beaut into an little audio blurb thatd be sick

Mike Wrecka · 10-12-2013, 06:54 PM

ya dope shit geno. you really do make this look effortless brah. I picture you writing a verse like this in ten minutes and it comes out insane. good drop I liked it

Zen · 10-12-2013, 07:06 PM

This was pretty sick. Very creative especially the fucked my life line. Only complaint is the length of this. We needa collab man.

Geno · 10-12-2013, 10:48 PM

I'm down @Zenland. Get a verse to me

10-11-2013, 07:09 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	God is Home. Model flow, I write rock and roll like cobblestone God is home, if yours the one and only -he's not alone I'm a gospel qoute from ressurection day Ull see history repeat, none is left to make ill place you in the wild west today, ridin' spurs Cause I'm wyatt earp when it comes to violent words Use your brain while it works to start gettin paid And stop living life the peasant way, in section 8 Too many beds been made at young ages in life That's why gamble knows what the medication is like Paeganist type, stupid human nature all I see anymore And a good conversation's what my demons are for Only the good die young, but those people were born Fucked my life -made a baby, do I keep or abort Preacher of war, never made the word peace a resort Unless we're talkin piece like the heater, a torch I have stripes like a zebra, or a beetlejuice coat I've seen life, seen death, i'm micheal keaton -a ghost __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

10-11-2013, 07:18 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	This was dope, I would have liked to see a little bit more you have a great grasp of technicality with your rhymes the first half was nice, the second part was dope the whole Michael Keaton thing was raw...Batman... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

10-11-2013, 07:20 PM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Thanks. Keaton was beetlejuice also __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

10-11-2013, 07:33 PM	#4
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	I know that breh... __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

10-11-2013, 07:36 PM	#5
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Oh. GOod shit __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

10-12-2013, 06:37 PM	#6
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	hahaha dude this was super sick. fuckin awesome. had everything. this shit is easy for u and it shows. there is not a single thing i can critique about this, just dopeness. beatlejuice coat scheme was retarded, and then to tie it in with the movie actor references at the end just killed it. make this little beaut into an little audio blurb thatd be sick __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

10-12-2013, 06:54 PM	#7
Mike Wrecka WOW Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,591 Battle Record: 29-25 Champed - Writing Challenge League I Rep Power: 82779338	ya dope shit geno. you really do make this look effortless brah. I picture you writing a verse like this in ten minutes and it comes out insane. good drop I liked it __________________ A.bove T.he R.est

10-12-2013, 07:06 PM	#8
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	This was pretty sick. Very creative especially the fucked my life line. Only complaint is the length of this. We needa collab man.

10-12-2013, 10:48 PM	#9
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	I'm down @Zenland. Get a verse to me __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*