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Geno 10-11-2013 07:09 PM

God is Home.
 
Model flow, I write rock and roll like cobblestone
God is home, if yours the one and only -he's not alone
I'm a gospel qoute from ressurection day
Ull see history repeat, none is left to make
ill place you in the wild west today, ridin' spurs
Cause I'm wyatt earp when it comes to violent words
Use your brain while it works to start gettin paid
And stop living life the peasant way, in section 8
Too many beds been made at young ages in life
That's why gamble knows what the medication is like
Paeganist type, stupid human nature all I see anymore
And a good conversation's what my demons are for
Only the good die young, but those people were born
Fucked my life -made a baby, do I keep or abort
Preacher of war, never made the word peace a resort
Unless we're talkin piece like the heater, a torch
I have stripes like a zebra, or a beetlejuice coat
I've seen life, seen death, i'm micheal keaton -a ghost

Mr. J 10-11-2013 07:18 PM

This was dope, I would have liked to see a little bit more
you have a great grasp of technicality with your rhymes
the first half was nice, the second part was dope
the whole Michael Keaton thing was raw...Batman...

Geno 10-11-2013 07:20 PM

Thanks. Keaton was beetlejuice also

Mr. J 10-11-2013 07:33 PM

I know that breh...

Geno 10-11-2013 07:36 PM

Oh. GOod shit

CopyPat 10-12-2013 06:37 PM

hahaha dude this was super sick. fuckin awesome. had everything. this shit is easy for u and it shows. there is not a single thing i can critique about this, just dopeness.

beatlejuice coat scheme was retarded, and then to tie it in with the movie actor references at the end just killed it. make this little beaut into an little audio blurb thatd be sick

Mike Wrecka 10-12-2013 06:54 PM

ya dope shit geno. you really do make this look effortless brah. I picture you writing a verse like this in ten minutes and it comes out insane. good drop I liked it

Zen 10-12-2013 07:06 PM

This was pretty sick. Very creative especially the fucked my life line. Only complaint is the length of this. We needa collab man.

Geno 10-12-2013 10:48 PM

I'm down @Zenland. Get a verse to me


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