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http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=149737
I appreciate all the thoughts you have to dedicate something to me, I'd normally say I am flattered. But in this case it fuckin sucked so I responded with how you should be able to write. You can thank me later I won't be held accountable for your actions after you read your eulogy. Maybe you can make YouTube video about it so no one can watch it |
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I mean honestly man not a single punchline connected. LGI Trolling, just gassing you up.
Punches are structured way different now. Might have to switch some stuff up a little bro. Most of, if not all, honestly would have to double check, your punches are way too much of a statement punch. And unless it's a super Haymaker the voters don't go for it and it's too simple. Has to have complex schemes to complete with the best here. Lars didn't do much better. And I am no top tier expert but I can tell you that verse would get zero votes in a battle here. I'd like to see if you can develop a new style, structure better, etc. Good luck |
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I have no idea who you are man
Nor do I care for whether anything connected lmao, I've seen the lvls here and your gassing yourselfes, I am not looking for constructive feedback on something wrote up literally off the top of my head in 20 mins. So unless you're referring to yourself and this a baron or Lars alias trying to be smart plz just stfu |
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Bro are you kidding me? I only gave my opinion because you said "so I responded with how you should be able to write" And you are way off by a huge margin for how you should write. I literally just gave my thoughts on it. But figures another textcee who gets offended when you say something bad about their verses. Barc is that you? P.S. everyone on this website knows that I'm not Lars. |
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http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=142606
what really? here's you talking to yourself in the mag acting as if you're best friend with Lars, and there is Lars asking as Diablo his alias, which he's made known in this thread then asking to tag himself in it as Lars as he was the one being interviewed. LMAO wtf? So either lars is constantly using aliases to build his credibility Or you two are actually best of friends in which case the same still applies stfu |
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Incredible isn’t Lars idiot Why are you so paranoid? Drugs or do you have legit mental problems |
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Man I haven't read a text verse since 2007 But bobby definitely won |
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Nah, he’s def right.
I won that exchange too. 2-0
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What you're agreeing that you suck?
2 and 0 Yes you keep typing out the shape of your body and head together it's great way to abbreiviate Thumbs up for you baron |
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Bobby D trash
this the guy claiming Prowlers? |
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lmao Bobby went off at the end.. on a complete nonsensical tangent
hot garbage |
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Lmao how many aliases do you have baron?
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absolutely god awful response by Bobby D
lol @ claiming he wrote in 20 mins |
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Now we know how you won all your battles, by copying cane and creating aliases
Lmao you're the worst |
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Baron 6 alises over 6 years ?
You're literally the saddest of all men ive come across on a message board I'm literally dying in laughter |
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lmao they were just throwaways i had from the night before tbh
i won’t use them elsewhere so just dropped them for you anyway
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Lol just realized everyone in here is Lars
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