Fracture I gave you some feedback on your Open Mic
 

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=149737

I appreciate all the thoughts you have to dedicate something to me, I'd normally say I am flattered. But in this case it fuckin sucked so I responded with how you should be able to write.

You can thank me later

I won't be held accountable for your actions after you read your eulogy. Maybe you can make YouTube video about it so no one can watch it

I mean honestly man not a single punchline connected. LGI Trolling, just gassing you up.

Punches are structured way different now. Might have to switch some stuff up a little bro. Most of, if not all, honestly would have to double check, your punches are way too much of a statement punch. And unless it's a super Haymaker the voters don't go for it and it's too simple. Has to have complex schemes to complete with the best here.

Lars didn't do much better. And I am no top tier expert but I can tell you that verse would get zero votes in a battle here. I'd like to see if you can develop a new style, structure better, etc. Good luck

I have no idea who you are man

Nor do I care for whether anything connected lmao, I've seen the lvls here and your gassing yourselfes, I am not looking for constructive feedback on something wrote up literally off the top of my head in 20 mins.

So unless you're referring to yourself and this a baron or Lars alias trying to be smart plz just stfu

Nah, he’s def right.

I won that exchange too. 2-0

Bobby D trash

this the guy claiming Prowlers?

What you're agreeing that you suck?

2 and 0

Yes you keep typing out the shape of your body and head together it's great way to abbreiviate

Thumbs up for you baron

lmao Bobby went off at the end.. on a complete nonsensical tangent

hot garbage

I would trash your existence if I ever I saw such a deadbeat persona

Lmao how many aliases do you have baron?

absolutely god awful response by Bobby D

lol @ claiming he wrote in 20 mins

Now we know how you won all your battles, by copying cane and creating aliases


Lmao you're the worst

Man I haven't read a text verse since 2007

But bobby definitely won

Baron 6 alises over 6 years ?


You're literally the saddest of all men ive come across on a message board

I'm literally dying in laughter

lmao they were just throwaways i had from the night before tbh

i won’t use them elsewhere so just dropped them for you anyway

Just baron talking to himself lgi I wouldn't even sweat it

Lol just realized everyone in here is Lars

Lmao Is this behaviour normal for him or have I finally made him crack!? Lmao

Hard to say. Every time I try to find out who someone is it ends up being Lars, though.

LMAO

netcees is 3 active guys


The rest just baron aliases, he probably giving himself feedback on his own verses and replying to his own threads on a distant internet board far away

I'm starting to think I'm larz to


I'm off to write a poem about the tragedy of not using proper grammar