Week 2: Adverse 1-0 vs FGR 1-0 - FGR WINS

Saint · 01-22-2020, 03:54 PM

Week 2

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the rule thread.

DUE MONDAY,

@Adverse @FGR

*The 1-2 league is one bar VS one bar.*

Adverse · 01-22-2020, 04:26 PM

Check. Good luck.

FGR · 01-22-2020, 06:54 PM

Same

Adverse · 01-23-2020, 06:46 PM

You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!"
But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived

Saint · 01-23-2020, 06:48 PM

FGR's bar

Quote:

Originally Posted by FGR

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Thinking your gonna win? You must not know who you sparring wit
Everyone here saying adjuring trouble, u should urge them to stop starting shit

bleak · 01-24-2020, 09:05 PM

No free pass on the acronym bar although i appreciate the effort. Adjuring works pretty well i like it

FGR

Inno · 01-27-2020, 09:30 AM

Got FGR

felt like adverse got tangled a bit with the FAG flip. Tbh I liked the effort and the bar was decent but when taking a leap there always a chance you might slip. Adverse slipped a bit this week and FGR took advantage. Good battle

FGR

Incredible · 01-27-2020, 10:32 PM

Nameplay was smooth on FGRs end. Adverse with two subject matters here threw me off a bit. Not usually a big deal but you got two lines to kill making them relate as much as possibly is key. Try thinking outside the box. Vote - FGR

Blue Bayou · 01-28-2020, 04:16 PM

F a G I thought was a cool angle but it was too long winded imo....an easy more succinct reworded and this would've been a funny solid np

Adjurin works well in slang and k like the wp....punch was formulated well to the setup...nice bar

Got FGR in this one...props to both

Aero · 01-28-2020, 08:22 PM

Adverse:

You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!"
But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived

Very creative but poorly worded. Liked the EFFIGY wordplay I don't think people with high enough IQ's got that part

FGR :

Thinking your gonna win? You must not know who you sparring wit
Everyone here saying adjuring trouble, u should urge them to stop starting shit

I have a problem with adjuring trouble as a stand alone and I don't think this is very creative. Anyone can put Ad in front of a word and try to make it work.

My votes goes to ADVERSE

Saint · 01-28-2020, 09:46 PM

4-1. Uppplp
@Witty @Obey @Cashius @NYCSPITZ @Em Kay Gee

Flow · 01-29-2020, 03:03 AM

Got adverse here. F a G is actually a very clever nameplay, definitely could of been done alot better then a statue of the greatest cock sucker that ever lived. That shits on some school yard bad man level lingo not to mention wordy as fuck. FGR knows the score and I like his adjusting trouble, it was alot more crisp and direct and clean. But I had to scroll up twice to remind me which name play you used where F a G got my own creative thoughts bubbling on how id flip it etc an on that basis

Vote Adverse

Obey · 01-29-2020, 05:15 AM

Adverse bar was a good attempt it just felt a little long winded compared to fgr who had a better name play imo

FGR

01-22-2020, 03:54 PM	#1
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	Week 2: Adverse 1-0 vs FGR 1-0 - FGR WINS Week 2 You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the rule thread. DUE MONDAY, @Adverse @FGR The 1-2 league is one bar VS one bar. Last edited by Saint; 01-29-2020 at 05:22 AM.

01-23-2020, 06:46 PM	#4
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!" But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived Last edited by Saint; 01-23-2020 at 06:58 PM. Reason: Edit: typo

01-28-2020, 04:16 PM	#9
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,098 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502335	F a G I thought was a cool angle but it was too long winded imo....an easy more succinct reworded and this would've been a funny solid np Adjurin works well in slang and k like the wp....punch was formulated well to the setup...nice bar Got FGR in this one...props to both __________________ "I shit myself I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip

01-28-2020, 08:22 PM	#10
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,826 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Adverse: You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!" But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived Very creative but poorly worded. Liked the EFFIGY wordplay I don't think people with high enough IQ's got that part FGR : Thinking your gonna win? You must not know who you sparring wit Everyone here saying adjuring trouble, u should urge them to stop starting shit I have a problem with adjuring trouble as a stand alone and I don't think this is very creative. Anyone can put Ad in front of a word and try to make it work. My votes goes to ADVERSE __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

01-28-2020, 09:46 PM	#11
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	4-1. Uppplp @Witty @Obey @Cashius @NYCSPITZ @Em Kay Gee Last edited by Saint; 01-28-2020 at 09:53 PM.

01-22-2020, 04:26 PM	#2
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Check. Good luck.

01-22-2020, 06:54 PM	#3
FGR Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 564 Battle Record: 16-17 Rep Power: 8596598	Same

01-27-2020, 09:30 AM	#7
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,025 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Got FGR felt like adverse got tangled a bit with the FAG flip. Tbh I liked the effort and the bar was decent but when taking a leap there always a chance you might slip. Adverse slipped a bit this week and FGR took advantage. Good battle FGR

01-27-2020, 10:32 PM	#8
Incredible Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2016 Posts: 1,484 Battle Record: 6-15 Rep Power: 25972895	Nameplay was smooth on FGRs end. Adverse with two subject matters here threw me off a bit. Not usually a big deal but you got two lines to kill making them relate as much as possibly is key. Try thinking outside the box. Vote - FGR

01-29-2020, 05:15 AM	#13
Obey Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 718 Battle Record: 2-4 Rep Power: 1236368	Adverse bar was a good attempt it just felt a little long winded compared to fgr who had a better name play imo FGR