Week 2: Adverse 1-0 vs FGR 1-0 - FGR WINS
 

Week 2

You all know the rules, but if you need reminding go look at the rule thread.

DUE MONDAY,

@Adverse @FGR

*The 1-2 league is one bar VS one bar.*

Check. Good luck.

Same

You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!"
But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived

FGR's bar

No free pass on the acronym bar although i appreciate the effort. Adjuring works pretty well i like it

FGR

Got FGR

felt like adverse got tangled a bit with the FAG flip. Tbh I liked the effort and the bar was decent but when taking a leap there always a chance you might slip. Adverse slipped a bit this week and FGR took advantage. Good battle

FGR

Nameplay was smooth on FGRs end. Adverse with two subject matters here threw me off a bit. Not usually a big deal but you got two lines to kill making them relate as much as possibly is key. Try thinking outside the box. Vote - FGR

F a G I thought was a cool angle but it was too long winded imo....an easy more succinct reworded and this would've been a funny solid np

Adjurin works well in slang and k like the wp....punch was formulated well to the setup...nice bar

Got FGR in this one...props to both

Adverse:

You're predictable as a hot summer, "I'll spray this glock, bustin' at your ribs!"
But only time they see you as 'F, a G' is when they're erecting a statue for the greatest cocksucker that's ever lived

Very creative but poorly worded. Liked the EFFIGY wordplay I don't think people with high enough IQ's got that part


FGR :

Thinking your gonna win? You must not know who you sparring wit
Everyone here saying adjuring trouble, u should urge them to stop starting shit

I have a problem with adjuring trouble as a stand alone and I don't think this is very creative. Anyone can put Ad in front of a word and try to make it work.



My votes goes to ADVERSE

4-1. Uppplp
@Witty @Obey @Cashius @NYCSPITZ @Em Kay Gee

Got adverse here. F a G is actually a very clever nameplay, definitely could of been done alot better then a statue of the greatest cock sucker that ever lived. That shits on some school yard bad man level lingo not to mention wordy as fuck. FGR knows the score and I like his adjusting trouble, it was alot more crisp and direct and clean. But I had to scroll up twice to remind me which name play you used where F a G got my own creative thoughts bubbling on how id flip it etc an on that basis

Vote Adverse

Adverse bar was a good attempt it just felt a little long winded compared to fgr who had a better name play imo

FGR