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![]() The Fall Brawl Line Limits - 10 Min / 20 Max If not agreed upon in check ins, you must match the first drop. All other rules apply (biting/feeding/recycling/yadayada) Any and all swaying will be promptly deleted, and you will lose 3 votes for every offence. You have ONE second chance to stop being a bitch, then you're banned from every tourney I run from here on out. You'll also lose your spot in this one. DUE DATE IS 10/15/15 @ 11:59 PCT / 2:59 EST Need anything, let me know. @Resin M-I-C @Greed |
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12. early u cunt
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Sent 12 @Resin M-I-C
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Aiyyo
ffff outta my face, the grave is where i'm sending em in now ur only recognized as a headstone ur basically benjamin grimm. ur a loser.. there's a punishment for this kid's actions.. see a little Greed get shut down, i'm a fuckin small business sanction. yousa pansy, hands on ur hips is how ur standing cuz shiiiiiiit he's known for being a-sissy longer than st francis was. aka gay pryde.. maan what u sent aint shit.. this is murder she wrote, i jotted down my verse in ur penmanship. lars said i'm catchin an L? pleeease.. this an easy out from the start i'll only cough it up in here if i try to cover the sound of my fart. got 2 glocks.. one in the left, the bigger one in the other pocket i will open up a round and expose ur face.. that's ya mother's locket. Mahfucka. Last edited by Resin M-I-C; 10-15-2015 at 03:22 AM. |
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I hear you talk like you with it, but u aint shit wit a pen
Only thing that resin aided from that conversation is @sraL prediction i'd win Ya friends say u a legend o' rap but really i think you wack Rescue to jump in a cypher always lead him to immediately needing that Kidnap yo girl, game got her, mouthpiece super strong Got her so hiatus a handful of drugs then fucked longer then you been gone Nah All yo 'partners' dogs, hairy.. n u barely bout 2 steps away from a fairy Any pussy that wanted resurrection clearly means to be buried in a pet cemetary Only u think yo bitch is fine.. ya need to curb those written rhymes Connections on line so rare.. punches would just be better off if u dial up mo'dem bitten lines To say that you and AK biters.. probably isnt fair at all But i will say that verse wasn't bad guys.. it was absolutely TERRIBLE |
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Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
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Seems like a very lazy verse, but u had some shit. Also action & sanction don't rhyme, bruh.
Tbh dude, everything was played imo, that drop would've killed shit in the RBL '03. Yea RESIN half-assed his way to a W, Greed just freshen up those concepts & u'll be well.
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ffff outta my face, the grave is where i'm sending em in
now ur only recognized as a headstone ur basically benjamin Grimm interesting concept but didn't like the execution ur a loser.. there's a punishment for this kid's actions.. see a little Greed get shut down, i'm a fuckin small business sanction. ehhh yousa pansy, hands on ur hips is how ur standing cuz shiiiiiiit he's known for being a-sissy longer than st francis was. lol'd aka gay pryde.. maan what u sent aint shit.. this is murder she wrote, i jotted down my verse in ur penmanship. took me a minute but alright lars said i'm catchin an L? pleeease.. this an easy out from the start i'll only cough it up in here if i try to cover the sound of my fart. nah got 2 glocks.. one in the left, the bigger one in the other pocket i will open up a round and expose ur face.. that's ya mother's locket. Mahfucka. light but ok Vs I hear you talk like you with it, but u aint shit wit a pen Only thing that resin aided from that conversation is @sraL prediction i'd win decent punch, cool wp Ya friends say u a legend o' rap but really i think you wack Rescue to jump in a cypher always lead him to immediately needing that forced wp, weak punch Kidnap yo girl, game got her, mouthpiece super strong Got her so hiatus a handful of drugs then fucked longer then you been gone dawg what? Nah Nah All yo 'partners' dogs, hairy.. n u barely bout 2 steps away from a fairy Any pussy that wanted resurrection clearly means to be buried in a pet cemetery this was nice Only u think yo bitch is fine.. ya need to curb those written rhymes Connections on line so rare.. punches would just be better off if u dial up mo'dem bitten lines playeddddd To say that you and AK biters.. probably isnt fair at all But i will say that verse wasn't bad guys.. it was absolutely TERRIBLE nah This shit was pretty even, a lot of misses from both ends. Resin either didn't care about this and keyed up something quick or just idk. Greed had some weak misses but also had some cool concepts, wp/np, he also had LOTB with pet Semetery. In going with greed Vote greed |
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baz∞ka
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yousa pansy, hands on ur hips is how ur standing cuz
shiiiiiiit he's known for being a-sissy longer than st francis was. lars said i'm catchin an L? pleeease.. this an easy out from the start i'll only cough it up in here if i try to cover the sound of my fart. got 2 glocks.. one in the left, the bigger one in the other pocket i will open up a round and expose ur face.. that's ya mother's locket. vs. Ya friends say u a legend o' rap but really i think you wack Rescue to jump in a cypher always lead him to immediately needing that felt this was a dull battle alot of lines that seemed dated & not much effort was put forth here in my opinion, one got this easy tho. vote: Resin MIC
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got 2 glocks.. one in the left, the bigger one in the other pocket
i will open up a round and expose ur face.. that's ya mother's locket. vs. Ya friends say u a legend o' rap but really i think you wack Rescue to jump in a cypher always lead him to immediately needing that I got resin slightly don't think either tried to hard here seen both come waaaay better |
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LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS
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lmao resin got it
i mistook cred for greed, my bad LOL @ a-sissy though, not sure if i like that or loathe it but the rest was fire with mothers locket and so forth good job!
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Vote resin for the overall better verse stronger hits and fresher concepts.
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Resin had the better verse, consistent... Greed has gotten better but this verse did not showcase that, too many things I've seen before
A-sissy was funny and locket was good V res
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Greed had cool concepts. just didnt shape them the opener could have been a good personal . just didnt.
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opener, st.francis, closer
vs closer maybe? this was pretty one-sided to me. the hiatus wp hurt greed badly cause it barely worked the one way v/res |
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