Throwaways Pt.2

Clayray · 08-18-2013, 11:34 AM

This that post dramatic suicide attempt shit
Competition should slit wrist before comin against this kid
A baker carrying oven trays, bitch we holdin biscuits
This new whip got mysterious colors, that rasputin tint
I'll move a brick before I ooze a clip
I got Hoover crips that'll make you lose your grip
Got pirus they tough guys too
Martha Stuart sellin kitchen supplys, we making pyrex moves
Leave all the bitchin aside if you not built for the ride
This life will beat you up inside, it might hurt a rib
Seen a kid only 4ft die, so his life was short lived

Peace.

Mr. J · 08-18-2013, 05:09 PM

This was cute....needs more metaphors

PancakeBrah · 08-18-2013, 06:03 PM

I didn't like this.

Eŋg · 08-21-2013, 08:14 PM

i suggest you go to whatever trashcan you put this and take it out.

read it. then put it back in.

and set it on fire! FIRE!

nah4realztho

A baker carrying oven trays, bitch we holdin biscuits

Seen a kid only 4ft die, so his life was short lived

mah nigga. shit is deep. 6 feet.

08-18-2013, 11:34 AM	#1
Clayray 6ft of Seperation Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 1,541 Battle Record: 3-5 Champed - Faggot of the Year (2015) Rep Power: 0	Throwaways Pt.2 This that post dramatic suicide attempt shit Competition should slit wrist before comin against this kid A baker carrying oven trays, bitch we holdin biscuits This new whip got mysterious colors, that rasputin tint I'll move a brick before I ooze a clip I got Hoover crips that'll make you lose your grip Got pirus they tough guys too Martha Stuart sellin kitchen supplys, we making pyrex moves Leave all the bitchin aside if you not built for the ride This life will beat you up inside, it might hurt a rib Seen a kid only 4ft die, so his life was short lived Peace.

08-18-2013, 05:09 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	This was cute....needs more metaphors __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

08-18-2013, 06:03 PM	#3
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	I didn't like this. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

08-21-2013, 08:14 PM	#4
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	i suggest you go to whatever trashcan you put this and take it out. read it. then put it back in. and set it on fire! FIRE! nah4realztho A baker carrying oven trays, bitch we holdin biscuits Seen a kid only 4ft die, so his life was short lived mah nigga. shit is deep. 6 feet.