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Clayray 08-18-2013 11:34 AM

Throwaways Pt.2
 
This that post dramatic suicide attempt shit
Competition should slit wrist before comin against this kid
A baker carrying oven trays, bitch we holdin biscuits
This new whip got mysterious colors, that rasputin tint
I'll move a brick before I ooze a clip
I got Hoover crips that'll make you lose your grip
Got pirus they tough guys too
Martha Stuart sellin kitchen supplys, we making pyrex moves
Leave all the bitchin aside if you not built for the ride
This life will beat you up inside, it might hurt a rib
Seen a kid only 4ft die, so his life was short lived

Peace.

Mr. J 08-18-2013 05:09 PM

This was cute....needs more metaphors

PancakeBrah 08-18-2013 06:03 PM

I didn't like this.

Eŋg 08-21-2013 08:14 PM

i suggest you go to whatever trashcan you put this and take it out.

read it. then put it back in.

and set it on fire! FIRE!

nah4realztho

A baker carrying oven trays, bitch we holdin biscuits

Seen a kid only 4ft die, so his life was short lived


mah nigga. shit is deep. 6 feet.


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