Milli Vanilli, Willie & Chillie, Billie Idol on Weed

Mr. J · 11-10-2014, 02:03 AM

I mean lyrically to mimic me just sickens me
a hit a weed I'm pennin' these wizardries
listening to 9th Wonder spinnin cuts from the.70's
memory quadrant envisionin' words so heavenly
Wrote seven scriptures rode lines like 7 seas
vent a piece send a creature to his death
the feature, the teacher there to keep correct
I defeat ya set I lift ya bars like weaker reps
don't lie...I complete ya breath, keep ya head
I'm the reason sleep helps these dreamers step
I'm mean, I'm best kept in ya deepest secrets...
breh! No need to sweat I'm ya solar plexus
call me Atlas that's how I roll, hold a second..
these bold discretions can all get blown relentless
I ain't braggin' bout cannons, Hulk Hogan..impression
I'm known to perplex those old contestants
Arose to perfection...a blunt tightly rolled, ascension
I got to leave it alone but I just broke the tension
Packed a bowl I crept in...Galaxies that hold dimensions
I make an illusion of it all, then I awoke the senses
And whispered your meaning in a broken message
.....huh?

CopyPat · 11-10-2014, 02:12 AM

hahahaha

Dope.

Witty · 11-11-2014, 08:04 AM

@Mr J If I haven't got to this by tomorrow send me a reminder plz, I definitely will tho unless it slips my mind.

Mr. J · 11-15-2014, 09:47 PM

@Witty

Witty · 11-16-2014, 05:10 AM

This was a dope piece my friend, it started a little slow, the first 4 lines felt a little disjointed like you weee trying to find a rhythm to roll with, that happens to me often, but once you found it the shit was seamless dude, some very clever and witty (ahem) lines and the flow was smooth as silk bytter on a baby's bottom. Sometimes there is a criticism aimed at pieces like this which are so rhyme focused that they can be lacking in content but that does not apply here, great rhymes, great content, great piece. Thanks for the read bro.

Exis · 11-16-2014, 08:42 AM

First half was anal, no hate...second half was dope...take from that what you will.

Coup · 11-20-2014, 07:38 PM

This was like walking into a conversation halfway through

11-10-2014, 02:03 AM	#1
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Milli Vanilli, Willie & Chillie, Billie Idol on Weed I mean lyrically to mimic me just sickens me a hit a weed I'm pennin' these wizardries listening to 9th Wonder spinnin cuts from the.70's memory quadrant envisionin' words so heavenly Wrote seven scriptures rode lines like 7 seas vent a piece send a creature to his death the feature, the teacher there to keep correct I defeat ya set I lift ya bars like weaker reps don't lie...I complete ya breath, keep ya head I'm the reason sleep helps these dreamers step I'm mean, I'm best kept in ya deepest secrets... breh! No need to sweat I'm ya solar plexus call me Atlas that's how I roll, hold a second.. these bold discretions can all get blown relentless I ain't braggin' bout cannons, Hulk Hogan..impression I'm known to perplex those old contestants Arose to perfection...a blunt tightly rolled, ascension I got to leave it alone but I just broke the tension Packed a bowl I crept in...Galaxies that hold dimensions I make an illusion of it all, then I awoke the senses And whispered your meaning in a broken message .....huh? __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

11-10-2014, 02:12 AM	#2
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	hahahaha Dope. __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

11-11-2014, 08:04 AM	#3
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	@Mr J If I haven't got to this by tomorrow send me a reminder plz, I definitely will tho unless it slips my mind. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

11-15-2014, 09:47 PM	#4
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	@Witty __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

11-16-2014, 05:10 AM	#5
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	This was a dope piece my friend, it started a little slow, the first 4 lines felt a little disjointed like you weee trying to find a rhythm to roll with, that happens to me often, but once you found it the shit was seamless dude, some very clever and witty (ahem) lines and the flow was smooth as silk bytter on a baby's bottom. Sometimes there is a criticism aimed at pieces like this which are so rhyme focused that they can be lacking in content but that does not apply here, great rhymes, great content, great piece. Thanks for the read bro. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

11-16-2014, 08:42 AM	#6
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	First half was anal, no hate...second half was dope...take from that what you will.

11-20-2014, 07:38 PM	#7
Coup Don't believe the hype Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 572 Battle Record: 4-5 Rep Power: 0	This was like walking into a conversation halfway through