Defiant vs. Unfukwitable* [Unfukwitable Wins]

BROKE LESNAR · 10-24-2014, 05:46 PM

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

*Contendership Match ramifications

Unfukwitable · 10-25-2014, 06:23 PM

check.

Defiant · 10-28-2014, 12:51 AM

never be hens, orc or hush, youre 1 of the worse in here
Only time your bars come from some1 legendary, is if u took jiltis finals verse idea

Unfukwitable · 10-28-2014, 02:45 AM

You don't wanna go against me, stop, I'll send 3 shots;
That'll remind'ya of Shawshank Redemption...
this hammer will leave ya chess-piece rocked.

El Muffin · 10-28-2014, 07:06 AM

unfuks bar was creative buf just had a messy execution

i mean i get it.

he used a hammer to chisel a chess piece out of rock

but saying chess piece rocked wuth that in mind is forced imho

its one of those concepts that seem to work when you give it a cursory glance byt jusf fails to coagulate if u get wut im saying.

i hate when that happens to me.

defiants may not be true but its funny

v defiant

Kin · 10-28-2014, 09:11 AM

Def...pretty tight..wording wasnt great tho

Un..thought this was hardbody..that punch was a heavy hitter...the rock/hammer shit from the movie worded to match the 3 shots in set up/hammer

Yea thats dope

Vote ...UN won

fresh · 10-28-2014, 09:32 AM

Defiant wording killed it for me. the "only time ur bars come from someone legendary" seems out of place. Wasn't feeling it

I feel the chess piece rocked is worded strangely. I think "rock a chess-piece" may have worked better. Still more creative tho and I enjoyed it more so..

v/Un

BROKE LESNAR · 10-28-2014, 12:19 PM

I thought Defiant had better execution. Which is strange to say, lmao. I liked the concept he used. Fuk's seemed like if I had heard him say his bar in an acapella battle then it would of came off hard. But reading it felt choppy.

v-Defiant

Spoken · 10-28-2014, 10:43 PM

Un had an impact for a crowd... kind of thing I'd cheer for ya know pull an ohhhh out of me but in text it has to be more clean cut really and defiant had that in my eyes felt it came more straight forward

V/defiant

~RustyGunZ~ · 10-29-2014, 04:01 PM

def had an okay current event line with a pretty used approach

unfuk had a cool wordplay with eh wording

close but i gotta go with v/un

Persist · 10-30-2014, 12:14 AM

Felt Unfukwitable Came A lot More Creative & I Thought The Wording Was Good.

Defiant Felt Basic An It Also Didn't Connect For Me.

Vote: Unfukwitable

Destroyer · 10-30-2014, 10:23 AM

I got un here
I just didn't like defs approach at all

v/un

Tazz · 10-31-2014, 08:51 AM

Vote: Unfukwitable. His bar was more solid & had alil swag in it. Plus I thought the rhyming was off in Defs bar. Here & Idea ? Besides that, his bar didnt hit as hard imo.

10-24-2014, 05:46 PM	#1
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	*Defiant vs. Unfukwitable [Unfukwitable Wins]** Rebuttal Option ▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in ▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar) Due Monday 12am PST *Contendership Match ramifications

10-25-2014, 06:23 PM	#2
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	check. __________________ WICKeD

10-28-2014, 02:45 AM	#4
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	You don't wanna go against me, stop, I'll send 3 shots; That'll remind'ya of Shawshank Redemption... this hammer will leave ya chess-piece rocked. __________________ WICKeD

10-28-2014, 07:06 AM	#5
El Muffin DOHpe since 02' Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Surrounded by white ppl Posts: 14,690 Battle Record: 43-24 Champed - Netcees Battle League - 1-2 Punch Onslaught - 1-2 Punch League - Hot or Thot Roast - Hot or Thot 2018 - Fight Night 11 - NPL Roast Rep Power: 34230535	unfuks bar was creative buf just had a messy execution i mean i get it. he used a hammer to chisel a chess piece out of rock but saying chess piece rocked wuth that in mind is forced imho its one of those concepts that seem to work when you give it a cursory glance byt jusf fails to coagulate if u get wut im saying. i hate when that happens to me. defiants may not be true but its funny v defiant __________________ It’s like weed in Highschool- w/ the cans I’ll smoke you Bitch I floss . I Got the chain out to see like Constantinople

10-28-2014, 10:43 PM	#9
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	Un had an impact for a crowd... kind of thing I'd cheer for ya know pull an ohhhh out of me but in text it has to be more clean cut really and defiant had that in my eyes felt it came more straight forward V/defiant __________________ WP Po'ethics

10-28-2014, 12:51 AM	#3
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442247	never be hens, orc or hush, youre 1 of the worse in here Only time your bars come from some1 legendary, is if u took jiltis finals verse idea

10-28-2014, 09:11 AM	#6
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	Def...pretty tight..wording wasnt great tho Un..thought this was hardbody..that punch was a heavy hitter...the rock/hammer shit from the movie worded to match the 3 shots in set up/hammer Yea thats dope Vote ...UN won

10-28-2014, 09:32 AM	#7
fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	Defiant wording killed it for me. the "only time ur bars come from someone legendary" seems out of place. Wasn't feeling it I feel the chess piece rocked is worded strangely. I think "rock a chess-piece" may have worked better. Still more creative tho and I enjoyed it more so.. v/Un

10-28-2014, 12:19 PM	#8
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	I thought Defiant had better execution. Which is strange to say, lmao. I liked the concept he used. Fuk's seemed like if I had heard him say his bar in an acapella battle then it would of came off hard. But reading it felt choppy. v-Defiant

10-29-2014, 04:01 PM	#10
~RustyGunZ~ (ง'̀-'́)ง Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 15,844 Battle Record: 52-28 Accomplishments -50+ wins Champed -Summer Classic VIII -Netcees Battle League -BA Picture -BA TagTeam -Fight Night Cypher I -Fight Night XXXV -Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 Rep Power: 85899406	def had an okay current event line with a pretty used approach unfuk had a cool wordplay with eh wording close but i gotta go with v/un

10-30-2014, 12:14 AM	#11
Persist Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 23 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 0	Felt Unfukwitable Came A lot More Creative & I Thought The Wording Was Good. Defiant Felt Basic An It Also Didn't Connect For Me. Vote: Unfukwitable

10-31-2014, 08:51 AM	#13
Tazz Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2014 Posts: 22 Battle Record: 0-2 Rep Power: 90564	Vote: Unfukwitable. His bar was more solid & had alil swag in it. Plus I thought the rhyming was off in Defs bar. Here & Idea ? Besides that, his bar didnt hit as hard imo.