Defiant vs. Unfukwitable* [Unfukwitable Wins]
 

Rebuttal Option

▪both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
▪format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

Due Monday 12am PST

*Contendership Match ramifications

check.

never be hens, orc or hush, youre 1 of the worse in here
Only time your bars come from some1 legendary, is if u took jiltis finals verse idea

You don't wanna go against me, stop, I'll send 3 shots;
That'll remind'ya of Shawshank Redemption...
this hammer will leave ya chess-piece rocked.

unfuks bar was creative buf just had a messy execution

i mean i get it.

he used a hammer to chisel a chess piece out of rock



but saying chess piece rocked wuth that in mind is forced imho

its one of those concepts that seem to work when you give it a cursory glance byt jusf fails to coagulate if u get wut im saying.

i hate when that happens to me.

defiants may not be true but its funny

v defiant

Def...pretty tight..wording wasnt great tho

Un..thought this was hardbody..that punch was a heavy hitter...the rock/hammer shit from the movie worded to match the 3 shots in set up/hammer

Yea thats dope

Vote ...UN won

Defiant wording killed it for me. the "only time ur bars come from someone legendary" seems out of place. Wasn't feeling it

I feel the chess piece rocked is worded strangely. I think "rock a chess-piece" may have worked better. Still more creative tho and I enjoyed it more so..

v/Un

I thought Defiant had better execution. Which is strange to say, lmao. I liked the concept he used. Fuk's seemed like if I had heard him say his bar in an acapella battle then it would of came off hard. But reading it felt choppy.

v-Defiant

Un had an impact for a crowd... kind of thing I'd cheer for ya know pull an ohhhh out of me but in text it has to be more clean cut really and defiant had that in my eyes felt it came more straight forward


V/defiant

def had an okay current event line with a pretty used approach

unfuk had a cool wordplay with eh wording

close but i gotta go with v/un

Felt Unfukwitable Came A lot More Creative & I Thought The Wording Was Good.

Defiant Felt Basic An It Also Didn't Connect For Me.

Vote: Unfukwitable

I got un here
I just didn't like defs approach at all

v/un

Vote: Unfukwitable. His bar was more solid & had alil swag in it. Plus I thought the rhyming was off in Defs bar. Here & Idea ? Besides that, his bar didnt hit as hard imo.