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Clayray · 08-18-2013, 02:55 AM

I'm second guessin my adolescents, yeah its in question
Because in my past my fuckin father was not present
So refreshin to see where I'm at now in life & I'm not stressin
Smoke good weed, known to keep a pound or two
Got packs to move, and Bitches? Yeah I found a few
& Where I'm from shottas will blast your face
Kid 9 years old with a gun half his age
It was a 4-5, this ain't yo average place
A world where you can't even day dream
Watched a nigga pull out 2 9's an shoot 8 teens
but we whippin over the stove, as the fumes hit the skys
I use to sell 3.14's .. that's the formula for pie
I'm warning all you guys don't take it as no surprise
I'm here to rise and formulate the plot for your demise
Got ya girls hangin off my wood like she bout to be crucified
Who am I? Sickest nigga with illest lyrics
I'm meek mill witha megaphone imma so make sure you hear this.

Fuck this an fuck that, kick raps till your spinal cords rips out your back.

Peace

Clayray · 08-18-2013, 02:20 PM

Up

Certain · 08-18-2013, 02:35 PM

No one is going to respond until you feed a few yourself. Do that, and I'll drop you a few lines.

Mr. J · 08-18-2013, 05:12 PM

Just put it together and make a track I suppoze

PancakeBrah · 08-18-2013, 06:02 PM

I didn't like this.

dead man · 08-18-2013, 06:09 PM

Kid 9 years old with a gun half his age

A world where you can't even day dream

I use to sell 3.14's .. that's the formula for pie

all these lines were dope imo. you have a natural skill for clever rhyming. your style content-wise will not be popular with many topical cats who frequent the OM but i thought this was pretty sick personally.

thanks man

Pakistani Hand Cannon · 08-22-2013, 11:15 AM

on some thoaway shit i thought this was live

couple cool lines...nothing i really disliked

thats about it

#1

Exis · 08-22-2013, 03:08 PM

Got packs to move, and Bitches? Yeah I found a few
& Where I'm from shottas will blast your face
Kid 9 years old with a gun half his age
It was a 4-5, this ain't yo average place
A world where you can't even day dream
Watched a nigga pull out 2 9's an shoot 8 teens
but we whippin over the stove, as the fumes hit the skys
I use to sell 3.14's .. that's the formula for pie

^^Slick.

Keep doin' you man.

08-18-2013, 02:35 PM	#3
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	No one is going to respond until you feed a few yourself. Do that, and I'll drop you a few lines. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

08-18-2013, 05:12 PM	#4
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	Just put it together and make a track I suppoze __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

08-18-2013, 06:02 PM	#5
PancakeBrah SOBER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,480 Battle Record: 2-5 Champed - AOWL Season 2 Rep Power: 85899407	I didn't like this. __________________ Netcees 2025 Revivalist Movement Founder

08-18-2013, 06:09 PM	#6
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	Kid 9 years old with a gun half his age A world where you can't even day dream I use to sell 3.14's .. that's the formula for pie all these lines were dope imo. you have a natural skill for clever rhyming. your style content-wise will not be popular with many topical cats who frequent the OM but i thought this was pretty sick personally. thanks man __________________ Zack Wicks for president

08-18-2013, 02:55 AM	#1
Clayray 6ft of Seperation Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 1,541 Battle Record: 3-5 Champed - Faggot of the Year (2015) Rep Power: 0	Throwaways I'm second guessin my adolescents, yeah its in question Because in my past my fuckin father was not present So refreshin to see where I'm at now in life & I'm not stressin Smoke good weed, known to keep a pound or two Got packs to move, and Bitches? Yeah I found a few & Where I'm from shottas will blast your face Kid 9 years old with a gun half his age It was a 4-5, this ain't yo average place A world where you can't even day dream Watched a nigga pull out 2 9's an shoot 8 teens but we whippin over the stove, as the fumes hit the skys I use to sell 3.14's .. that's the formula for pie I'm warning all you guys don't take it as no surprise I'm here to rise and formulate the plot for your demise Got ya girls hangin off my wood like she bout to be crucified Who am I? Sickest nigga with illest lyrics I'm meek mill witha megaphone imma so make sure you hear this. Fuck this an fuck that, kick raps till your spinal cords rips out your back. Peace

08-18-2013, 02:20 PM	#2
Clayray 6ft of Seperation Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 1,541 Battle Record: 3-5 Champed - Faggot of the Year (2015) Rep Power: 0	Up

08-22-2013, 11:15 AM	#7
Pakistani Hand Cannon Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 1,230 Rep Power: 5303583	on some thoaway shit i thought this was live couple cool lines...nothing i really disliked thats about it #1

08-22-2013, 03:08 PM	#8
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Got packs to move, and Bitches? Yeah I found a few & Where I'm from shottas will blast your face Kid 9 years old with a gun half his age It was a 4-5, this ain't yo average place A world where you can't even day dream Watched a nigga pull out 2 9's an shoot 8 teens but we whippin over the stove, as the fumes hit the skys I use to sell 3.14's .. that's the formula for pie ^^Slick. Keep doin' you man.