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Clayray 08-18-2013 02:55 AM

Throwaways
 
I'm second guessin my adolescents, yeah its in question
Because in my past my fuckin father was not present
So refreshin to see where I'm at now in life & I'm not stressin
Smoke good weed, known to keep a pound or two
Got packs to move, and Bitches? Yeah I found a few
& Where I'm from shottas will blast your face
Kid 9 years old with a gun half his age
It was a 4-5, this ain't yo average place
A world where you can't even day dream
Watched a nigga pull out 2 9's an shoot 8 teens
but we whippin over the stove, as the fumes hit the skys
I use to sell 3.14's .. that's the formula for pie
I'm warning all you guys don't take it as no surprise
I'm here to rise and formulate the plot for your demise
Got ya girls hangin off my wood like she bout to be crucified
Who am I? Sickest nigga with illest lyrics
I'm meek mill witha megaphone imma so make sure you hear this.

Fuck this an fuck that, kick raps till your spinal cords rips out your back.

Peace

Clayray 08-18-2013 02:20 PM

Up

Certain 08-18-2013 02:35 PM

No one is going to respond until you feed a few yourself. Do that, and I'll drop you a few lines.

Mr. J 08-18-2013 05:12 PM

Just put it together and make a track I suppoze

PancakeBrah 08-18-2013 06:02 PM

I didn't like this.

dead man 08-18-2013 06:09 PM

Kid 9 years old with a gun half his age

A world where you can't even day dream

I use to sell 3.14's .. that's the formula for pie


all these lines were dope imo. you have a natural skill for clever rhyming. your style content-wise will not be popular with many topical cats who frequent the OM but i thought this was pretty sick personally.

thanks man

Pakistani Hand Cannon 08-22-2013 11:15 AM

on some thoaway shit i thought this was live

couple cool lines...nothing i really disliked

thats about it

#1

Exis 08-22-2013 03:08 PM

Got packs to move, and Bitches? Yeah I found a few
& Where I'm from shottas will blast your face
Kid 9 years old with a gun half his age
It was a 4-5, this ain't yo average place
A world where you can't even day dream
Watched a nigga pull out 2 9's an shoot 8 teens
but we whippin over the stove, as the fumes hit the skys
I use to sell 3.14's .. that's the formula for pie

^^Slick.

Keep doin' you man.


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