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Clayray · 09-02-2014, 02:41 AM

I'm a mad scientist when I write this shit.
Got the grip of a Tyson fist with a power punch of a Bison hit.
Now pause while I light this piff .. *lighter sparks*
Coming hard for first like a noob when they try to shift
Pulling the bar higher with Masaii for my spotter as I pry n' lift. (no homo)
As my dying wish, bags family dies and he cries a bit
Finds some bricks & then proceeds to promptly tie his wrist
Jumps into the ocean water screaming "ima bitch, netcees is my life & I'll die for this!"
But I admit, I'll take a side of a crack hit for supper
You lames don't belong here like a scalp of a black ratchet mother
It's the backpackin brother who's had one too many McChickens
Spent less time outside and more of it in a kitchen
But I'll still take ya girl like "ay boo boo, come get in on this picnic you missin"

Kin · 09-02-2014, 11:45 AM

Got the grip of a Tyson fist with a power punch of a Bison hit.
dope

As my dying wish, bags family dies and he cries a bit
Finds some bricks & then proceeds to promptly tie his wrist
-oh thiz a diss???

Jumps into the ocean water screaming "ima bitch, netcees is my life & I'll die for this!"
- kinda funny

too me the 1st 2 bars were the nicest....as far as turnin' it into a diss I dunno...

But still a good lil' read

Inno · 09-03-2014, 08:01 PM

Jesus u mentioned masaii in your verse.

Autowack yo. Also. Dude how could you rhyme one
Syllable words like there aren't more syllabled words yo?

But word I didn't actually read this. Just saw masaii name.

Good read.

Ego · 09-03-2014, 09:44 PM

Yo profit we got beef like 2 cows and 1 leaf,
Stop it you damn theif, you stole those rhymes from chief keef,
You're not a rapper, you're a whipper snapper
never seen a caliber/never seen a gun
You have no caliber, you amateur, none
Step to me and is like committing suicide while wanting to be alive
Which to me is something like homicide, hows your commas? can you still divide
By 1 without ending up with zero, Your names profit IT SHOULD BE ZERO
But just to let you know, My names Ego, Aka E5o

Inno · 09-03-2014, 10:50 PM

Yo this nigga rhymed whipper snapper tho!!!

09-02-2014, 02:41 AM	#1
Clayray 6ft of Seperation Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 1,541 Battle Record: 3-5 Champed - Faggot of the Year (2015) Rep Power: 0	Space invader lasers I'm a mad scientist when I write this shit. Got the grip of a Tyson fist with a power punch of a Bison hit. Now pause while I light this piff .. lighter sparks Coming hard for first like a noob when they try to shift Pulling the bar higher with Masaii for my spotter as I pry n' lift. (no homo) As my dying wish, bags family dies and he cries a bit Finds some bricks & then proceeds to promptly tie his wrist Jumps into the ocean water screaming "ima bitch, netcees is my life & I'll die for this!" But I admit, I'll take a side of a crack hit for supper You lames don't belong here like a scalp of a black ratchet mother It's the backpackin brother who's had one too many McChickens Spent less time outside and more of it in a kitchen But I'll still take ya girl like "ay boo boo, come get in on this picnic you missin"

09-02-2014, 11:45 AM	#2
Kin Kill.It.Nonstop Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 666 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 662201	Got the grip of a Tyson fist with a power punch of a Bison hit. dope As my dying wish, bags family dies and he cries a bit Finds some bricks & then proceeds to promptly tie his wrist -oh thiz a diss??? Jumps into the ocean water screaming "ima bitch, netcees is my life & I'll die for this!" - kinda funny too me the 1st 2 bars were the nicest....as far as turnin' it into a diss I dunno... But still a good lil' read

09-03-2014, 08:01 PM	#3
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,024 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Jesus u mentioned masaii in your verse. Autowack yo. Also. Dude how could you rhyme one Syllable words like there aren't more syllabled words yo? But word I didn't actually read this. Just saw masaii name. Good read.

09-03-2014, 09:44 PM	#4
Ego EϛO Join Date: Sep 2014 Location: Yo momma room Posts: 11 Rep Power: 0	Yo profit we got beef like 2 cows and 1 leaf, Stop it you damn theif, you stole those rhymes from chief keef, You're not a rapper, you're a whipper snapper never seen a caliber/never seen a gun You have no caliber, you amateur, none Step to me and is like committing suicide while wanting to be alive Which to me is something like homicide, hows your commas? can you still divide By 1 without ending up with zero, Your names profit IT SHOULD BE ZERO But just to let you know, My names Ego, Aka E5o

09-03-2014, 10:50 PM	#5
Inno Ad mini tator Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 10,024 Battle Record: 26-54 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - Black August - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 85899403	Yo this nigga rhymed whipper snapper tho!!!