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Clayray 09-02-2014 02:41 AM

Space invader lasers
 
I'm a mad scientist when I write this shit.
Got the grip of a Tyson fist with a power punch of a Bison hit.
Now pause while I light this piff .. *lighter sparks*
Coming hard for first like a noob when they try to shift
Pulling the bar higher with Masaii for my spotter as I pry n' lift. (no homo)
As my dying wish, bags family dies and he cries a bit
Finds some bricks & then proceeds to promptly tie his wrist
Jumps into the ocean water screaming "ima bitch, netcees is my life & I'll die for this!"
But I admit, I'll take a side of a crack hit for supper
You lames don't belong here like a scalp of a black ratchet mother
It's the backpackin brother who's had one too many McChickens
Spent less time outside and more of it in a kitchen
But I'll still take ya girl like "ay boo boo, come get in on this picnic you missin"

Kin 09-02-2014 11:45 AM

Got the grip of a Tyson fist with a power punch of a Bison hit.
dope

As my dying wish, bags family dies and he cries a bit
Finds some bricks & then proceeds to promptly tie his wrist
-oh thiz a diss???

Jumps into the ocean water screaming "ima bitch, netcees is my life & I'll die for this!"
- kinda funny

too me the 1st 2 bars were the nicest....as far as turnin' it into a diss I dunno...

But still a good lil' read

Inno 09-03-2014 08:01 PM

Jesus u mentioned masaii in your verse.

Autowack yo. Also. Dude how could you rhyme one
Syllable words like there aren't more syllabled words yo?

But word I didn't actually read this. Just saw masaii name.

Good read.

Ego 09-03-2014 09:44 PM

Yo profit we got beef like 2 cows and 1 leaf,
Stop it you damn theif, you stole those rhymes from chief keef,
You're not a rapper, you're a whipper snapper
never seen a caliber/never seen a gun
You have no caliber, you amateur, none
Step to me and is like committing suicide while wanting to be alive
Which to me is something like homicide, hows your commas? can you still divide
By 1 without ending up with zero, Your names profit IT SHOULD BE ZERO
But just to let you know, My names Ego, Aka E5o

Inno 09-03-2014 10:50 PM

Yo this nigga rhymed whipper snapper tho!!!


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