EL Pancake: the no show saga (please feed)

Camp Bell · 07-22-2014, 09:23 PM

just looking for input on the verse is all, thanks.

ima be livid if my written's don't get the benefits of checking a veteran
respect my wits cuz you're a total loss after i finish this breakfast dish
the lines i'm peddling is for letting the devil sniff, press for ya reverend
ya whole rep is irrelevant, my references heaven sent by the flow gods
time to exit the premises or get blessings from benedict and pope john
who expected the best to get wrecked this quick? u should've drove off
my feathered pens come wit heckler clips, a connection kit from voltron
warlock, my weapons is deading shit like the hammer that thor rocked
i just came back from a fly by in the jetsons ship, i get too high for yall
mayweather hits to ya chest til my storm stops, ull die enlightened dog
u write, im raw, performing an exorcist on a wiseguy, enticing thoughts
why lie?..ima level 10 pilot on cloud 9, with ground strikes in a titanfall
dont try to play ya fighting song til u ride a wave from poseidons cough
ya rhyming plain an slightly washed, ill swipe ya pride away w/lion claws
y not decline my wage, i'll fire boss, my fly was made from designer cloth
sniper strays took miles of ya life away, my sight display?...the eye of ra
a riot cop couldn't help you fight the charge of inviting my licensed scars
everything i might would draw is higher art, lies u start have a childish plot
it makes sense that you try to rob cuz a price to pay is wat the iron cost
what ive really been trying to say is, im the greatest, tony the tiger soft

07-22-2014, 09:23 PM	#1
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	EL Pancake: the no show saga (please feed) just looking for input on the verse is all, thanks. ima be livid if my written's don't get the benefits of checking a veteran respect my wits cuz you're a total loss after i finish this breakfast dish the lines i'm peddling is for letting the devil sniff, press for ya reverend ya whole rep is irrelevant, my references heaven sent by the flow gods time to exit the premises or get blessings from benedict and pope john who expected the best to get wrecked this quick? u should've drove off my feathered pens come wit heckler clips, a connection kit from voltron warlock, my weapons is deading shit like the hammer that thor rocked i just came back from a fly by in the jetsons ship, i get too high for yall mayweather hits to ya chest til my storm stops, ull die enlightened dog u write, im raw, performing an exorcist on a wiseguy, enticing thoughts why lie?..ima level 10 pilot on cloud 9, with ground strikes in a titanfall dont try to play ya fighting song til u ride a wave from poseidons cough ya rhyming plain an slightly washed, ill swipe ya pride away w/lion claws y not decline my wage, i'll fire boss, my fly was made from designer cloth sniper strays took miles of ya life away, my sight display?...the eye of ra a riot cop couldn't help you fight the charge of inviting my licensed scars everything i might would draw is higher art, lies u start have a childish plot it makes sense that you try to rob cuz a price to pay is wat the iron cost what ive really been trying to say is, im the greatest, tony the tiger soft __________________ get high. write rhymes.