GKillaZ vs Atomic - {Atomic wins}

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Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Tuesday,
  June 25th, 2013 at 11:59 PM PST.
• Voting ends Friday June 28th at 11:59 PM PST.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are normally 24 hours
  (unless requested otherwise, that is),
  can be no longer than 36 hours
  and have to be granted by your opponent.

Line Limit:

• Min. = 10 lines
• Max. = 16 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.

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• Must vote on 5 battles and post your links.
• Post the links in the thread titled "Week 7 Voting Links".
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  You will not like the punishment, so just vote so you
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General Rules:

• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
  linking to your opponent's picture or posting it
  means you will disqualified.
• A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
• If your opponent doesn't check in,
  you still have to post a verse.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
  must match the 1st person's line amount.

@GKillaZ @MAINESPITZ

[GKillaZ]

alright checking in, ill go 10-14. lemme know how many your going.

[Atomic]

10

[GKillaZ]

mainespitz - I see your the "long bar" champ, so here we go...

maine,spitz the same shit every battle nd its a mystery, saddest in the history
so you cant get all mad and pissed at me...
when your punches miss his fist resists this friction like static electricity
your literacy is literally shit to me.. whole style is in a fatigued state
ironic your name is MS, cuz now that condition is the same as your leagues fate
hiphop aint dead it lives in the north I ask do you know what those words are about?
spitz be like NO! then tries to convince us its located in a part furthest south
cuz your an opposite.. catch his type in the hood claiming to be a hyperbeast
likely would turn into a game of hide nd go seek but you wouldnt find em for weeks
shit he works his shitty verse like a shape shifter wit a great gift for failing we all can see
Mains verses outer is space your spitz just high off that Ale, E, n Technology

iight, just keyed this shit up. your turn!.. *starts clock*

[Atomic]

ur verses are simple, my verses leave voters mind fucked,
so watch this kid fade.. it'll be the only way he gets a lineUP.
smash & rip ya, only fuckin fags would feel ya,
i'd have to reference wu-tang for you to be a masta, killa.
my disses are straight to the point- your rhymes SUCK,
kid thinks he's the #1 pick, & i'd rather have rondo settin mine up.
buck clips at this fucked bitch.. leave the homo scraped,
it's ironic to see G-Force his lines when they hold no weight!
to stay w/ my lines? believe u'd need a stencil, b..
so watch me drop G quick, w/o going on spending spree.


...fucking die.

[Split]

Originally Posted by GKillaZ

mainespitz - I see your the "long bar" champ, so here we go...

maine,spitz the same shit every battle nd its a mystery, saddest in the history
so you cant get all mad and pissed at me...
when your punches miss his fist resists this friction like static electricity
your literacy is literally shit to me.. whole style is in a fatigued state
ironic your name is MS, cuz now that condition is the same as your leagues fate
hiphop aint dead it lives in the north I ask do you know what those words are about?
spitz be like NO! then tries to convince us its located in a part furthest south
cuz your an opposite.. catch his type in the hood claiming to be a hyperbeast
likely would turn into a game of hide nd go seek but you wouldnt find em for weeks
shit he works his shitty verse like a shape shifter wit a great gift for failing we all can see
Mains verses outer is space your spitz just high off that Ale, E, n Technology

iight, just keyed this shit up. your turn!.. *starts clock*

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closest bar was the last one. ruined it with delivery. look at your punches, and think "how is this attacking my opponent" and "what does this line literally mean" bc the connections are awful

god save ur fucking soul if i ever catch u centering a verse again

Originally Posted by MAINESPITZ

ur verses are simple, my verses leave voters mind fucked,
so watch this kid fade.. it'll be the only way he gets a lineUP.
smash & rip ya, only fuckin fags would feel ya,
i'd have to reference wu-tang for you to be a masta, killa.
my disses are straight to the point- your rhymes SUCK,
kid thinks he's the #1 pick, & i'd rather have rondo settin mine up.
buck clips at this fucked bitch.. leave the homo scraped,
it's ironic to see G-Force his lines when they hold no weight!
to stay w/ my lines? believe u'd need a stencil, b..
so watch me drop G quick, w/o going on spending spree
...fucking die.

ok, lotta played bars. g-force was nice. decent, certainly enough to merk here


v/ maine

[Analyst]

maine,spitz the same shit every battle nd its a mystery, saddest in the history
so you cant get all mad and pissed at me...
when your punches miss his fist resists this friction like static electricity
nah
your literacy is literally shit to me.. whole style is in a fatigued state
ironic your name is MS, cuz now that condition is the same as your leagues fate
ehh
hiphop aint dead it lives in the north I ask do you know what those words are about?
spitz be like NO! then tries to convince us its located in a part furthest south
ehh
cuz your an opposite.. catch his type in the hood claiming to be a hyperbeast
likely would turn into a game of hide nd go seek but you wouldnt find em for weeks
coo
shit he works his shitty verse like a shape shifter wit a great gift for failing we all can see
Mains verses outer is space your spitz just high off that Ale, E, n Technology
nah


ur verses are simple, my verses leave voters mind fucked,
so watch this kid fade.. it'll be the only way he gets a lineUP.
coo
smash & rip ya, only fuckin fags would feel ya,
i'd have to reference wu-tang for you to be a masta, killa.
okay
my disses are straight to the point- your rhymes SUCK,
kid thinks he's the #1 pick, & i'd rather have rondo settin mine up.
ehh
buck clips at this fucked bitch.. leave the homo scraped,
it's ironic to see G-Force his lines when they hold no weight!
okay
to stay w/ my lines? believe u'd need a stencil, b..
so watch me drop G quick, w/o going on spending spree.
decent


vote-mainespitz, wasnt really feeling gkillaz verse that much, He had like one decent line but that was about it...maine had a couple cool punches and brought enough for the win

[Xnub]

this battle was pretty one sided to me, I thought spitz usually comes a little nicer, but did what he had to do to win here.

gkillaz don't center ur verse like that... it's a distraction. Plus, all of your lines were very statementish and none of them really left a sting.

I had MAINSPITZ w/ his last 2 bars hitting for me, so I'd quote those 2 out of the entire battle.

mvgt: MAINSPITZ, good battle..

[Flow]

Originally Posted by GKillaZ

mainespitz - I see your the "long bar" champ, so here we go...

maine,spitz the same shit every battle nd its a mystery, saddest in the history
so you cant get all mad and pissed at me...
when your punches miss his fist resists this friction like static electricity
too much filler no punch
your literacy is literally shit to me.. whole style is in a fatigued state
ironic your name is MS, cuz now that condition is the same as your leagues fate
doesn't really work his leagues fate is antibodies that will attack it self? giving off sporadic symptoms? nah man
hiphop aint dead it lives in the north I ask do you know what those words are about?
spitz be like NO! then tries to convince us its located in a part furthest south
has he? is this a personal?
cuz your an opposite.. catch his type in the hood claiming to be a hyperbeast
likely would turn into a game of hide nd go seek but you wouldnt find em for weeks
urgh poor wording no punch
shit he works his shitty verse like a shape shifter wit a great gift for failing we all can see
Mains verses outer is space your spitz just high off that Ale, E, n Technology
what the fuck was this garbage man, YOUR BETTER THEN THIS

iight, just keyed this shit up. your turn!.. *starts clock*

Originally Posted by Atomic

ur verses are simple, my verses leave voters mind fucked,
so watch this kid fade.. it'll be the only way he gets a lineUP.
meh
smash & rip ya, only fuckin fags would feel ya,
i'd have to reference wu-tang for you to be a masta, killa.
[B]simple name flip bit statement thoughB]
my disses are straight to the point- your rhymes SUCK,
kid thinks he's the #1 pick, & i'd rather have rondo settin mine up.
game set and match
buck clips at this fucked bitch.. leave the homo scraped,
it's ironic to see G-Force his lines when they hold no weight!
LOTB
to stay w/ my lines? believe u'd need a stencil, b..
so watch me drop G quick, w/o going on spending spree.


...fucking die.

Vote Maine he only needed a weak punch to take it, GKilla was feeble as shit

[Hush]

Fucking dead at Antonio banderas


Maine won this one eZ tbh

GKillaZ is bad.

bleh

V/ Atom

[Atomic]

THANKS DOGG I APPRECIATE THE SOLID BREAKDOWN

Lol I agree w above
gkillaz I never read u before but don't do the long bar again, u were focusing on rhyming n ur content lacked bc of it... Only decent bar was ur closer n it came off as a reach
The ms line had potential but instead of punching u just made a statement n rhymed

Atomic ur flow was better, verse was more concise n effective giving you the w... Some decent nameplate, and a few jabs, nothing stellar but Def enough to easily take this imo


vote - atomic

[GKillaZ]

true, I always focus on mad rhymes. thats what Rap is all about. I hate punchlines that barley rhyme. I love multi's . if he took the W . then congrats . the better man won. Clearly I need to get over my multi's no one cares for em here.

good battle MS

[Atomic]

Gg son