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GKillaZ vs Atomic - {Atomic wins}
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@GKillaZ @MAINESPITZ |
alright checking in, ill go 10-14. lemme know how many your going.
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mainespitz - I see your the "long bar" champ, so here we go...
maine,spitz the same shit every battle nd its a mystery, saddest in the history so you cant get all mad and pissed at me... when your punches miss his fist resists this friction like static electricity your literacy is literally shit to me.. whole style is in a fatigued state ironic your name is MS, cuz now that condition is the same as your leagues fate hiphop aint dead it lives in the north I ask do you know what those words are about? spitz be like NO! then tries to convince us its located in a part furthest south cuz your an opposite.. catch his type in the hood claiming to be a hyperbeast likely would turn into a game of hide nd go seek but you wouldnt find em for weeks shit he works his shitty verse like a shape shifter wit a great gift for failing we all can see Mains verses outer is space your spitz just high off that Ale, E, n Technology iight, just keyed this shit up. your turn!.. *starts clock* |
ur verses are simple, my verses leave voters mind fucked,
so watch this kid fade.. it'll be the only way he gets a lineUP. smash & rip ya, only fuckin fags would feel ya, i'd have to reference wu-tang for you to be a masta, killa. my disses are straight to the point- your rhymes SUCK, kid thinks he's the #1 pick, & i'd rather have rondo settin mine up. buck clips at this fucked bitch.. leave the homo scraped, it's ironic to see G-Force his lines when they hold no weight! to stay w/ my lines? believe u'd need a stencil, b.. so watch me drop G quick, w/o going on spending spree. ...fucking die. |
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v/ maine |
maine,spitz the same shit every battle nd its a mystery, saddest in the history
so you cant get all mad and pissed at me... when your punches miss his fist resists this friction like static electricity nah your literacy is literally shit to me.. whole style is in a fatigued state ironic your name is MS, cuz now that condition is the same as your leagues fate ehh hiphop aint dead it lives in the north I ask do you know what those words are about? spitz be like NO! then tries to convince us its located in a part furthest south ehh cuz your an opposite.. catch his type in the hood claiming to be a hyperbeast likely would turn into a game of hide nd go seek but you wouldnt find em for weeks coo shit he works his shitty verse like a shape shifter wit a great gift for failing we all can see Mains verses outer is space your spitz just high off that Ale, E, n Technology nah ur verses are simple, my verses leave voters mind fucked, so watch this kid fade.. it'll be the only way he gets a lineUP. coo smash & rip ya, only fuckin fags would feel ya, i'd have to reference wu-tang for you to be a masta, killa. okay my disses are straight to the point- your rhymes SUCK, kid thinks he's the #1 pick, & i'd rather have rondo settin mine up. ehh buck clips at this fucked bitch.. leave the homo scraped, it's ironic to see G-Force his lines when they hold no weight! okay to stay w/ my lines? believe u'd need a stencil, b.. so watch me drop G quick, w/o going on spending spree. decent vote-mainespitz, wasnt really feeling gkillaz verse that much, He had like one decent line but that was about it...maine had a couple cool punches and brought enough for the win |
this battle was pretty one sided to me, I thought spitz usually comes a little nicer, but did what he had to do to win here.
gkillaz don't center ur verse like that... it's a distraction. Plus, all of your lines were very statementish and none of them really left a sting. I had MAINSPITZ w/ his last 2 bars hitting for me, so I'd quote those 2 out of the entire battle. mvgt: MAINSPITZ, good battle.. |
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Fucking dead at Antonio banderas
Maine won this one eZ tbh |
GKillaZ is bad.
bleh V/ Atom |
THANKS DOGG I APPRECIATE THE SOLID BREAKDOWN
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Lol I agree w above
gkillaz I never read u before but don't do the long bar again, u were focusing on rhyming n ur content lacked bc of it... Only decent bar was ur closer n it came off as a reach The ms line had potential but instead of punching u just made a statement n rhymed Atomic ur flow was better, verse was more concise n effective giving you the w... Some decent nameplate, and a few jabs, nothing stellar but Def enough to easily take this imo vote - atomic |
true, I always focus on mad rhymes. thats what Rap is all about. I hate punchlines that barley rhyme. I love multi's . if he took the W . then congrats . the better man won. Clearly I need to get over my multi's no one cares for em here.
good battle MS |
Gg son
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