R!canTheoryz 0-1 vs Serious 0-0 RICAN WINS

Defiant · 06-03-2013, 03:05 PM

AOB 1-2 Punch

Rules

Due Dates:
Bars are due THURSDAY 11:59 PM PST.
Voting will end when a clear winner i determined
There will be 2 battles a week
No extensions, but a 12 hour grace period is available to all.

General Rules:
1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a bar.

@R!canTheoryz @Serious

Spoken · 06-03-2013, 03:20 PM

Blast from the past watch this bitch get scar'd on camera,
Last time we gave a fuck about a Rican theory S'from tony montana

R!canTheoryz · 06-06-2013, 03:48 PM

Sadly we don't pink slip matches anymore read the personal imma Land on clown,
cuz all we know right after serious is a death note, meaning YOU SHOULD BE BANNED BY NOW !!

Atomic · 06-08-2013, 06:49 AM

okay flip by serious, since every nameplay on rican has been done. punch was dece/wording was meh though.

rican, your punch was okay w/ the pink slip/death note personal/flip but it didn't really hit that hard & the connection with the punch was meh..

v/ serious, barely. for a better punch.

FGR · 06-08-2013, 02:24 PM

v-rican i thought his punch hit harder..the tony line didnt do nothing for me

Utmost · 06-08-2013, 09:06 PM

Seen a bunch of tony montana/rican flips.. Rican was a bit stretched in his wording but like the attempt on a personal. Both punches lacked sting. Serious was a lil choppy leadin into the punch and Rican was a bit longwinded with his.

i dunno its a tossup really, but i think Rican edges it based on what he was tryin to do with the punch, whereas Serious had it laid out no 'ah ha' moment

SiK · 06-08-2013, 10:35 PM

V/Rican

Serious was bland

Allen Knight · 06-09-2013, 05:58 PM

v/rican, his was a lil better

BROKE LESNAR · 06-09-2013, 06:31 PM

I have to go with Rican here, although tbh I was greatly unimpressed by the creativity of both bars. Serious more so. Rican struggled constructing a clear and concise bar that delivered theatrically. The first line was prolix, leaving his finisher to follow-up on a very choppy setup. No disrespect to either of you.

VOTE = Rican

Spoken · 06-09-2013, 09:00 PM

thanks guys for the tips im new to this shit so bare with it homies

thanks @R!canTheoryz for the match

06-03-2013, 03:05 PM	#1
Defiant Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,121 Battle Record: 31-50 Champed - Time to Kill I Rep Power: 6442247	R!canTheoryz 0-1 vs Serious 0-0 RICAN WINS AOB 1-2 Punch Rules Due Dates: Bars are due THURSDAY 11:59 PM PST. Voting will end when a clear winner i determined There will be 2 battles a week No extensions, but a 12 hour grace period is available to all. General Rules: 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. Feeding = DQ. Recycling = DQ. Biting = DQ. No freeposting, swaying or bitching. A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a bar. @R!canTheoryz @Serious

06-03-2013, 03:20 PM	#2
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	Blast from the past watch this bitch get scar'd on camera, Last time we gave a fuck about a Rican theory S'from tony montana __________________ WP Po'ethics

06-09-2013, 05:58 PM	#8
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	v/rican, his was a lil better __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

06-09-2013, 09:00 PM	#10
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	thanks guys for the tips im new to this shit so bare with it homies thanks @R!canTheoryz for the match __________________ WP Po'ethics

06-06-2013, 03:48 PM	#3
R!canTheoryz Bullying Yall Bitches. Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Not That Far Posts: 1,289 Battle Record: 9-22 Rep Power: 5738548	Sadly we don't pink slip matches anymore read the personal imma Land on clown, cuz all we know right after serious is a death note, meaning YOU SHOULD BE BANNED BY NOW !!

06-08-2013, 06:49 AM	#4
Atomic official hypedaddy. Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 951 Battle Record: 11-12 Champed - Sickeningly White Night VI - Longbar Heavyweight Belt (0x) - Shortbar Featherweight Belt (0x) Rep Power: 0	okay flip by serious, since every nameplay on rican has been done. punch was dece/wording was meh though. rican, your punch was okay w/ the pink slip/death note personal/flip but it didn't really hit that hard & the connection with the punch was meh.. v/ serious, barely. for a better punch.

06-08-2013, 02:24 PM	#5
FGR Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 564 Battle Record: 16-17 Rep Power: 8596598	v-rican i thought his punch hit harder..the tony line didnt do nothing for me

06-08-2013, 09:06 PM	#6
Utmost Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 322 Battle Record: 13-19 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 4320636	Seen a bunch of tony montana/rican flips.. Rican was a bit stretched in his wording but like the attempt on a personal. Both punches lacked sting. Serious was a lil choppy leadin into the punch and Rican was a bit longwinded with his. i dunno its a tossup really, but i think Rican edges it based on what he was tryin to do with the punch, whereas Serious had it laid out no 'ah ha' moment

06-08-2013, 10:35 PM	#7
SiK Sergeant Slaughter Join Date: Mar 1986 Posts: 1,913 Battle Record: 13-4 Rep Power: 3648788	V/Rican Serious was bland

06-09-2013, 06:31 PM	#9
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760964	I have to go with Rican here, although tbh I was greatly unimpressed by the creativity of both bars. Serious more so. Rican struggled constructing a clear and concise bar that delivered theatrically. The first line was prolix, leaving his finisher to follow-up on a very choppy setup. No disrespect to either of you. VOTE = Rican