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R!canTheoryz 0-1 vs Serious 0-0 RICAN WINS
AOB 1-2 Punch @R!canTheoryz @SeriousRules Due Dates: Bars are due THURSDAY 11:59 PM PST. Voting will end when a clear winner i determined There will be 2 battles a week No extensions, but a 12 hour grace period is available to all. General Rules: 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. Feeding = DQ. Recycling = DQ. Biting = DQ. No freeposting, swaying or bitching. A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a bar. |
Blast from the past watch this bitch get scar'd on camera,
Last time we gave a fuck about a Rican theory S'from tony montana |
Sadly we don't pink slip matches anymore read the personal imma Land on clown,
cuz all we know right after serious is a death note, meaning YOU SHOULD BE BANNED BY NOW !! |
okay flip by serious, since every nameplay on rican has been done. punch was dece/wording was meh though.
rican, your punch was okay w/ the pink slip/death note personal/flip but it didn't really hit that hard & the connection with the punch was meh.. v/ serious, barely. for a better punch. |
v-rican i thought his punch hit harder..the tony line didnt do nothing for me
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Seen a bunch of tony montana/rican flips.. Rican was a bit stretched in his wording but like the attempt on a personal. Both punches lacked sting. Serious was a lil choppy leadin into the punch and Rican was a bit longwinded with his.
i dunno its a tossup really, but i think Rican edges it based on what he was tryin to do with the punch, whereas Serious had it laid out no 'ah ha' moment |
V/Rican
Serious was bland |
v/rican, his was a lil better
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I have to go with Rican here, although tbh I was greatly unimpressed by the creativity of both bars. Serious more so. Rican struggled constructing a clear and concise bar that delivered theatrically. The first line was prolix, leaving his finisher to follow-up on a very choppy setup. No disrespect to either of you.
VOTE = Rican |
thanks guys for the tips im new to this shit so bare with it homies
thanks @R!canTheoryz for the match |
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