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Sippin a bud light, thinkin to chug like, who stops to pour? Pickin my butt like poo's clogged, my drawers keep stickin, it sucks like huge dongs in porn when the bitch is the slut type. But who watches porn? That's ridiculous. Some might use lots, I store like a gig of it, unlike you've got: a whore is my significant nut site. New song.. I'm bored, let me listen to stuff like tupac shakur cause I'm livin the thug life. Puked on the board cause I'm sick with the punchlines, my new jot just soars like it was stricken with bug bites.
I’m that fly, it takes a real dick to explain puns, and that’s why I make ya feel like shit when I say one. But that's life... you ain't as near as sick as the great one, so pass by and take ya lyrics with ya, they mad dumb. I smash mics and break ya ears with this when I rap son, I'm that tight, you ain't be hearin this with ya wack drums. I rap like I take this serious but I can't un-derstand guys with fake material like they blast guns...In fact my main experience with this rap stuff is half the guys who make appearances they just act tough. And that sucks, my brain is curious why you mad bruh? Is that what ya favorite lyricist would’ve backed up??
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I liked it.
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Man. Where do you come up with this shit pat?
You snooze in a hyperbaric chamber sippin on redbull writin this shit. Damn son. Everytime i read your shit i need to re-write some of my shit better.. lol Very dope. Holler
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I be dope’n like Motrin and Ibuprofen and my style is bolder than Times New Roman. My rhymes is golden, I’m Midas holdin the microphone but twice as cold as ice and snow is. Lightning bolts when typing flows, with strike control just like a cobra.
@Neighbor @Darth Yoda @PancakeBrah @Lars
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Schemes for days
I love how all your drops unfold like a narrative Collab soon
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shit's so dope. i loved the last line, it's dropped perfectly.
Puked on the board cause I'm sick with the punchlines, my new jot just soars like it was stricken with bug bites. I’m that fly, it takes a real dick to explain puns, and that’s why I make ya feel like shit when I say one. fav section here. it transitioned flawlessly. idk what it is about tonight but i keep gettin inspired to jot some shit down. maybe next time i'll actually take my time before droppin on the open mic. i usually just write what comes to mind and press send. that just gave me an idea for a line right there. so i'll be back with more thanks for the read |
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I remember the first verse from the cypher I do believe
either that or you dropped it before under another title regardless it's good work the second section is what piqued my interest the ending of that whole thing was the icing on the cake nice work all around, you have come quite a long way keep writing
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Cool stuff Copy, I sort of liked your collab with Certain more than this one though. Just a different style preference.
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lol this is sick scheming
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More like dick semen.
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But yeah, this was nuts.
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Dope shit. Content wise I didn't care for the first few sentences, but it kept building and ended up being pretty cool. Sick schemes as always. Keep dropping!
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