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CopyPat 09-10-2013 02:12 AM

A Lesson in Scheming
 
Sippin a bud light, thinkin to chug like, who stops to pour? Pickin my butt like poo's clogged, my drawers keep stickin, it sucks like huge dongs in porn when the bitch is the slut type. But who watches porn? That's ridiculous. Some might use lots, I store like a gig of it, unlike you've got: a whore is my significant nut site. New song.. I'm bored, let me listen to stuff like tupac shakur cause I'm livin the thug life. Puked on the board cause I'm sick with the punchlines, my new jot just soars like it was stricken with bug bites.

I’m that fly, it takes a real dick to explain puns, and that’s why I make ya feel like shit when I say one. But that's life... you ain't as near as sick as the great one, so pass by and take ya lyrics with ya, they mad dumb. I smash mics and break ya ears with this when I rap son, I'm that tight, you ain't be hearin this with ya wack drums. I rap like I take this serious but I can't un-derstand guys with fake material like they blast guns...In fact my main experience with this rap stuff is half the guys who make appearances they just act tough. And that sucks, my brain is curious why you mad bruh? Is that what ya favorite lyricist would’ve backed up??

Wise Wiggles 09-10-2013 10:09 AM

I liked it.

Dove Dozer 09-11-2013 02:58 PM

Man. Where do you come up with this shit pat?
You snooze in a hyperbaric chamber sippin on redbull writin this shit. Damn son.

Everytime i read your shit i need to re-write some of my shit better.. lol

Very dope.

Holler

CopyPat 09-14-2013 05:27 PM

I be dope’n like Motrin and Ibuprofen and my style is bolder than Times New Roman. My rhymes is golden, I’m Midas holdin the microphone but twice as cold as ice and snow is. Lightning bolts when typing flows, with strike control just like a cobra.
@Neighbor @Darth Yoda @PancakeBrah @Lars

Neighbor 09-16-2013 10:08 PM

Schemes for days

I love how all your drops unfold like a narrative

Collab soon

Bodey 09-17-2013 02:43 AM

shit's so dope. i loved the last line, it's dropped perfectly.

Puked on the board cause I'm sick with the punchlines, my new jot just soars like it was stricken with bug bites.

I’m that fly, it takes a real dick to explain puns, and that’s why I make ya feel like shit when I say one.

fav section here. it transitioned flawlessly. idk what it is about tonight but i keep gettin inspired to jot some shit down. maybe next time i'll actually take my time before droppin on the open mic. i usually just write what comes to mind and press send. that just gave me an idea for a line right there. so i'll be back with more

thanks for the read

Mr. J 09-17-2013 06:13 PM

I remember the first verse from the cypher I do believe
either that or you dropped it before under another title
regardless it's good work
the second section is what piqued my interest
the ending of that whole thing was the icing on the cake
nice work all around, you have come quite a long way
keep writing

Baron Mynd 09-18-2013 06:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CopyPat (Post 151670)
I be dope’n like Motrin and Ibuprofen and my style is bolder than Times New Roman. My rhymes is golden, I’m Midas holdin the microphone but twice as cold as ice and snow is. Lightning bolts when typing flows, with strike control just like a cobra.
@Neighbor @Darth Yoda @PancakeBrah @Lars

Yeah, that's the shit!

Vulgar 09-18-2013 11:03 AM

Cool stuff Copy, I sort of liked your collab with Certain more than this one though. Just a different style preference.

Keep keyin'

CopyPat 05-19-2014 01:55 AM

lol this is sick scheming

Zen 05-19-2014 02:46 AM

More like dick semen.

Zen 05-19-2014 02:47 AM

But yeah, this was nuts.

Objective 05-22-2014 07:26 PM

Dope shit. Content wise I didn't care for the first few sentences, but it kept building and ended up being pretty cool. Sick schemes as always. Keep dropping!


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