radish salad

brokenhal0 · 02-05-2014, 03:17 AM

the end is near everybody gettin soft
Illuminati killin minds with gender bender thoughts
Pentecost lost in a thought complex of complex thoughts
thoughts hexed by a tetragramton source convex a hard angle
i fucks with scared angels getting numbers under gods table
stake burns i like the smell of ashes in a gray urn painkiller
strange squirms vicodin liquid heron and a tapeworm
watch the maggots grow up and fly you can count on me
to keep the roses alive in the coldest of skies
alligators thats tuff skin pork rinds fried flavors son my crunch thin
draco wars im thinkin low realm crunchtime high space paradise
start with the stuffed dimes spark with the grudge lines
watch my light like the latern in the dark walkin in caves under graveyards
smooth like linoleum floors bboy's break on
the same tune i heard it's like livin next to a church
you way gone end up in the dirt with your tight shirt cape on
i hate on myself for losers just take it easy buddy dont get me stupid
light grows thin psycho grin make the rhinos wince
my totems a gat logans run pythons is jacked get broken son
puzzles in the dark completed patterns adapted action time
cripple ya faction pass that kid some syringes...
this another fentanyl anthem how i pass on my visions
crack sales to the cromagnum your not sleepin yet
like a vet in war who knows no anwsers just ambush
mothers battleing cancers wanting to become some masculine champions
take care of them crooked men tell lies that lay until you look at them

Wise Wiggles · 02-05-2014, 09:59 AM

i fucks with scared angels getting numbers under gods table
stake burns i like the smell of ashes in a gray urn painkiller
strange squirms vicodin liquid heron and a tapeworm
watch the maggots grow up and fly you can count on me
to keep the roses alive

- sick, always a pleasure

CopyPat · 02-05-2014, 04:39 PM

you have a really interesting and unique style.. i can't quite put my finger on it. its a bit all over the place, its very aggressive, its in your face. its laid out to read very quickly. i have read alot of ur shit but never really known what to say. alot of it seems a bit random to be honest.

i hate on myself for losers just take it easy buddy dont get me stupid
light grows thin psycho spin make the rhinos wince

just one example but there were lots of lines where i just went huh?? like i have no idea what ur trying to say, or if it even makes sense??

i do enjoy your vocab for the most part, not that its super impressive but its definitely original, i can see why whys likes ur stuff, u two are kindof similar in the feel of ur content for the most part. whys is just way more polished though, your stuff seems really raw. maybe rushed a little. if you do audio i would looooove to hear it though, that would maybe translate all of this a little better and help make it feel a little more finished. text wise like i said it just seems a bit unfocused to me

stay up though, ur style is pretty different man, always cool to see something different

02-05-2014, 03:17 AM	#1
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 493 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 455117	radish salad the end is near everybody gettin soft Illuminati killin minds with gender bender thoughts Pentecost lost in a thought complex of complex thoughts thoughts hexed by a tetragramton source convex a hard angle i fucks with scared angels getting numbers under gods table stake burns i like the smell of ashes in a gray urn painkiller strange squirms vicodin liquid heron and a tapeworm watch the maggots grow up and fly you can count on me to keep the roses alive in the coldest of skies alligators thats tuff skin pork rinds fried flavors son my crunch thin draco wars im thinkin low realm crunchtime high space paradise start with the stuffed dimes spark with the grudge lines watch my light like the latern in the dark walkin in caves under graveyards smooth like linoleum floors bboy's break on the same tune i heard it's like livin next to a church you way gone end up in the dirt with your tight shirt cape on i hate on myself for losers just take it easy buddy dont get me stupid light grows thin psycho grin make the rhinos wince my totems a gat logans run pythons is jacked get broken son puzzles in the dark completed patterns adapted action time cripple ya faction pass that kid some syringes... this another fentanyl anthem how i pass on my visions crack sales to the cromagnum your not sleepin yet like a vet in war who knows no anwsers just ambush mothers battleing cancers wanting to become some masculine champions take care of them crooked men tell lies that lay until you look at them Last edited by brokenhal0; 11-08-2014 at 06:37 AM.

02-05-2014, 09:59 AM	#2
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,507 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788019	i fucks with scared angels getting numbers under gods table stake burns i like the smell of ashes in a gray urn painkiller strange squirms vicodin liquid heron and a tapeworm watch the maggots grow up and fly you can count on me to keep the roses alive - sick, always a pleasure __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

02-05-2014, 04:39 PM	#3
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742222	you have a really interesting and unique style.. i can't quite put my finger on it. its a bit all over the place, its very aggressive, its in your face. its laid out to read very quickly. i have read alot of ur shit but never really known what to say. alot of it seems a bit random to be honest. i hate on myself for losers just take it easy buddy dont get me stupid light grows thin psycho spin make the rhinos wince just one example but there were lots of lines where i just went huh?? like i have no idea what ur trying to say, or if it even makes sense?? i do enjoy your vocab for the most part, not that its super impressive but its definitely original, i can see why whys likes ur stuff, u two are kindof similar in the feel of ur content for the most part. whys is just way more polished though, your stuff seems really raw. maybe rushed a little. if you do audio i would looooove to hear it though, that would maybe translate all of this a little better and help make it feel a little more finished. text wise like i said it just seems a bit unfocused to me stay up though, ur style is pretty different man, always cool to see something different __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.