dammit, dead man

[Split]

you got a dude all self-conscious of his writing style... :/

[Obey]

I WILL TAKE A DUMP ON YOUR FACE!

[Obey]

Yo tell ya girl she a slut yo pleeazzzze

[dead man]

getting bashful lil nigga????

good...

hike your skirt up motherfucker. we're all friends here.

[Obey]

I thought you hated me, fore reel dough

[dead man]

any day now....

[Obey]

MY NIGGA!

[Split]

Originally Posted by dead man

getting bashful lil nigga????

good...

hike your skirt up motherfucker. we're all friends here.

for real i was talking to trajik the other day like 'does my style kinda seems like dead man's.. cause i dont like how close its been lately'

FEARS CONFIRMED

goodbye Govinda. my ferryman is here, my city awaits, and i shall find a righteous path along the river- or perhaps with the river

[Obey]

I got posts for daaaaaaayz

[dead man]

Originally Posted by Split

for real i was talking to trajik the other day like 'does my style kinda seems like dead man's.. cause i dont like how close its been lately'

FEARS CONFIRMED

goodbye Govinda. my ferryman is here, my city awaits, and i shall find a righteous path along the river- or perhaps with the river

provide examples?

you are not alone my friend. many have tried to fake the funk. whether purposefully or not.

at least you are conscious of this tendency. there is time yet to branch out.

[Obey]

Originally Posted by dead man

provide examples?

you are not alone my friend. many have tried to fake the funk. whether purposefully or not.

at least you are conscious of this tendency. there is time yet to branch out.

dead man hates Black.D he hates himself oLo

[Ox]

lol u guys are quite the interesint bunch

[Obey]

How many guys seriously?

[Obey]

I fucked like 20 in this thread alone

[Obey]

Strika the chinese looking fag stain probably going to the pro's like once, every month jumping on that dirty ass hoe not even getting his dick wet

[Split]

well this is the first 'topical' i wrote, it's not really like any style cuz i did it only based off how ive always written and the music i listen to. it also makes very little sense

Baby boom generation, settled for less than expectations, ghost-wrote the revolution from their tomb, set sanctions on salvation,
And now the duty to beseech supersedes validation,
Ten years of young minds, abandoned and unheard,
Angst incurred, the question posed in turn:

then i guess this is the closest thing to 'my' authentic style i've written in. rather recent

Words that bubble up, but aint worth the come-up,
Too much to stomach, abstract, but hang for a moment.
Writing's a pact of saving sayings. A drive to hold the prose in.
Then drop weight in letters and rhyme components.
Knowing people's unspoken, lonely, and comes without a bonus.
Write it down.

then it started looking suspicious (really recently)

Deja vu comes in twos and ancient falling dreams. Now is never,
It scrawls on the patient's schemes in graphite letters.
It's all for the better. Not for us, for the life we invented.
Cover tucks, sleep tight under the knife of intentions.
Pall Malls and vacant stays, not literal... the phase we delayed,
Cardboard walls. Familiar traipses rearranged. A single match away....
Freedom in death. Facts are facts, burn the path
we all die as rats.

idk. i think i was trying to make statements, then flip them to completely change the meaning, like u do here

Originally Posted by dead man

you're not entitled to a dawn after night. losses are life,
let me recite. because i've never been the talkative type
never started a fight. never introduced my darkness to light

but i always make sure im not reading anyone's verses when im writing, and i try to phrase things naturally, but i think i tried learning from the smoothness of your scheming and ended up jacking your style

i dont even really have a style. i just try and make a story, think up some metaphors, catch the tone i wanna use and then connect all the dots with imagery that matches

i miss NC's days of the mega-active cypher, that was the best shit for practicing

[Obey]

I'm really not going to read that

I know me, you know you PEACE

[PancakeBrah]

I actively try to recreate Black's style in a lot of verses and am proud of it.


LOL FUCK THAT DUDE

[Split]

What if Black completely stole someone's style, murdered him so no one would find out. That would make him....


a dead man

[dead man]

i don't see any kind of plagiaristic sense of 'style' mimicry. i actually liked all of your writing, not just the last one

there's no shame in being influenced by somebody.. its how you develop your own brand

i borrowed mad different elements from people i enjoy reading.. as those people did.. etc.

you good peoples split. carry on..