| Split |
02-13-2013 12:57 PM |
well this is the first 'topical' i wrote, it's not really like any style cuz i did it only based off how ive always written and the music i listen to. it also makes very little sense
Quote:
Baby boom generation, settled for less than expectations, ghost-wrote the revolution from their tomb, set sanctions on salvation,
And now the duty to beseech supersedes validation,
Ten years of young minds, abandoned and unheard,
Angst incurred, the question posed in turn:
|
then i guess this is the closest thing to 'my' authentic style i've written in. rather recent
Quote:
Words that bubble up, but aint worth the come-up,
Too much to stomach, abstract, but hang for a moment.
Writing's a pact of saving sayings. A drive to hold the prose in.
Then drop weight in letters and rhyme components.
Knowing people's unspoken, lonely, and comes without a bonus.
Write it down.
|
then it started looking suspicious (really recently)
Quote:
Deja vu comes in twos and ancient falling dreams. Now is never,
It scrawls on the patient's schemes in graphite letters.
It's all for the better. Not for us, for the life we invented.
Cover tucks, sleep tight under the knife of intentions.
Pall Malls and vacant stays, not literal... the phase we delayed,
Cardboard walls. Familiar traipses rearranged. A single match away....
Freedom in death. Facts are facts, burn the path
we all die as rats.
|
idk. i think i was trying to make statements, then flip them to completely change the meaning, like u do here
Quote:
Originally Posted by dead man
you're not entitled to a dawn after night. losses are life,
let me recite. because i've never been the talkative type
never started a fight. never introduced my darkness to light
|
but i always make sure im not reading anyone's verses when im writing, and i try to phrase things naturally, but i think i tried learning from the smoothness of your scheming and ended up jacking your style
i dont even really have a style. i just try and make a story, think up some metaphors, catch the tone i wanna use and then connect all the dots with imagery that matches
i miss NC's days of the mega-active cypher, that was the best shit for practicing |
