release the realest nigga.

KennyCerealBowl · 05-25-2013, 02:56 AM

I think this my best drop here.

Fuck a brain I need a major hit
A fucking chain that could make an angel blink
It ain't the same a label only listens
To the ignorant, that rants on materialistic
stupid shit how about some material in your music bitch.
Listen to the soul and transmit those into the radio
and let your flow go honor roll, like a royal cee-lo
Match, reload my track i'm bout take more shots
Than peter griffin, read most of these wack verses
Facepalm'd, worthless, so those jewels mean nothing, versus
Me? C'mon you not that retarded, shit on me? Plz I woudnt be close to farted/
And this is just the pre, the caution, so take notes and take precaution/

Geno · 05-25-2013, 08:34 AM

stupid shithow about some material in your music bitch.

That was hard as fuck to me. Maybe it was the timing, but shit came off ill

Witty · 05-25-2013, 11:44 AM

Definitely your best drop, much better and easier when it comes to reading, flowed well...some of the slant rhymes were questionable and the wording was slightly awkward at times, but this is definitely a step forward, solid little piece for the most part.

I'd like to see you write to a topic, but if that isn't your thing then its all good. Keep writing man.

KennyCerealBowl · 05-25-2013, 12:04 PM

Topical? Got it. Yo can you point out the slant rhymes you thought were questionable? i need to improve on that sht

EndSane · 05-25-2013, 01:11 PM

Not speaking for witty but the slant rhymes hes referring to is

Major hit
Angel blink...im not sure but this wasnt bad...not sure if its ur best work I have seen but better other things I have read...Agree with Witty about actual subject matter tho cause if not ur drops run together tbh...Not bad, seems ur improving with every drop tho

Natural · 05-25-2013, 02:44 PM

Dopest shit up in this bitch. You gon give genocide a run for his $ soon kid

Pfft

KennyCerealBowl · 05-25-2013, 05:40 PM

Sarcasm?

KennyCerealBowl · 05-25-2013, 05:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by EndSane

Not speaking for witty but the slant rhymes hes referring to is

Major hit
Angel blink...im not sure but this wasnt bad...not sure if its ur best work I have seen but better other things I have read...Agree with Witty about actual subject matter tho cause if not ur drops run together tbh...Not bad, seems ur improving with every drop tho

Oh yeah i knew that one could come off weird Its just the other rhyme words I was thinking woudn't make sense
but ill improve that the more i write

Ghost1 · 05-26-2013, 03:31 PM

The realest nigga unleashed!

05-25-2013, 02:56 AM	#1
KennyCerealBowl Do what is right. Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 769 Rep Power: 954121	release the realest nigga. I think this my best drop here. Fuck a brain I need a major hit A fucking chain that could make an angel blink It ain't the same a label only listens To the ignorant, that rants on materialistic stupid shit how about some material in your music bitch. Listen to the soul and transmit those into the radio and let your flow go honor roll, like a royal cee-lo Match, reload my track i'm bout take more shots Than peter griffin, read most of these wack verses Facepalm'd, worthless, so those jewels mean nothing, versus Me? C'mon you not that retarded, shit on me? Plz I woudnt be close to farted/ And this is just the pre, the caution, so take notes and take precaution/

05-25-2013, 08:34 AM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	stupid shithow about some material in your music bitch. That was hard as fuck to me. Maybe it was the timing, but shit came off ill __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

05-25-2013, 11:44 AM	#3
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	Definitely your best drop, much better and easier when it comes to reading, flowed well...some of the slant rhymes were questionable and the wording was slightly awkward at times, but this is definitely a step forward, solid little piece for the most part. I'd like to see you write to a topic, but if that isn't your thing then its all good. Keep writing man. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

05-25-2013, 01:11 PM	#5
EndSane Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 88 Battle Record: 0-1 Champed Challenge Week I Challenge Week II Challenge Week III Challenge Week IV Challenge Week V Challenge Week VI Challenge Week VII Challenge Week VIII Challenge Week IX Challenge Week X Rep Power: 38	Not speaking for witty but the slant rhymes hes referring to is Major hit Angel blink...im not sure but this wasnt bad...not sure if its ur best work I have seen but better other things I have read...Agree with Witty about actual subject matter tho cause if not ur drops run together tbh...Not bad, seems ur improving with every drop tho __________________ Delirious Nomads

05-25-2013, 12:04 PM	#4
KennyCerealBowl Do what is right. Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 769 Rep Power: 954121	Topical? Got it. Yo can you point out the slant rhymes you thought were questionable? i need to improve on that sht

05-25-2013, 02:44 PM	#6
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	Dopest shit up in this bitch. You gon give genocide a run for his $ soon kid Pfft

05-25-2013, 05:40 PM	#7
KennyCerealBowl Do what is right. Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 769 Rep Power: 954121	Sarcasm?