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KennyCerealBowl 05-25-2013 02:56 AM

release the realest nigga.
 
I think this my best drop here.

Fuck a brain I need a major hit
A fucking chain that could make an angel blink
It ain't the same a label only listens
To the ignorant, that rants on materialistic
stupid shit how about some material in your music bitch.
Listen to the soul and transmit those into the radio
and let your flow go honor roll, like a royal cee-lo
Match, reload my track i'm bout take more shots
Than peter griffin, read most of these wack verses
Facepalm'd, worthless, so those jewels mean nothing, versus
Me? C'mon you not that retarded, shit on me? Plz I woudnt be close to farted/
And this is just the pre, the caution, so take notes and take precaution/

Geno 05-25-2013 08:34 AM

stupid shithow about some material in your music bitch.

That was hard as fuck to me. Maybe it was the timing, but shit came off ill

Witty 05-25-2013 11:44 AM

Definitely your best drop, much better and easier when it comes to reading, flowed well...some of the slant rhymes were questionable and the wording was slightly awkward at times, but this is definitely a step forward, solid little piece for the most part.

I'd like to see you write to a topic, but if that isn't your thing then its all good. Keep writing man.

KennyCerealBowl 05-25-2013 12:04 PM

Topical? Got it. Yo can you point out the slant rhymes you thought were questionable? i need to improve on that sht

EndSane 05-25-2013 01:11 PM

Not speaking for witty but the slant rhymes hes referring to is

Major hit
Angel blink...im not sure but this wasnt bad...not sure if its ur best work I have seen but better other things I have read...Agree with Witty about actual subject matter tho cause if not ur drops run together tbh...Not bad, seems ur improving with every drop tho

Natural 05-25-2013 02:44 PM

Dopest shit up in this bitch. You gon give genocide a run for his $ soon kid















































Pfft

KennyCerealBowl 05-25-2013 05:40 PM

Sarcasm?

KennyCerealBowl 05-25-2013 05:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by EndSane (Post 63370)
Not speaking for witty but the slant rhymes hes referring to is

Major hit
Angel blink...im not sure but this wasnt bad...not sure if its ur best work I have seen but better other things I have read...Agree with Witty about actual subject matter tho cause if not ur drops run together tbh...Not bad, seems ur improving with every drop tho

Oh yeah i knew that one could come off weird Its just the other rhyme words I was thinking woudn't make sense
but ill improve that the more i write

Ghost1 05-26-2013 03:31 PM

The realest nigga unleashed!


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