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release the realest nigga.
I think this my best drop here.
Fuck a brain I need a major hit A fucking chain that could make an angel blink It ain't the same a label only listens To the ignorant, that rants on materialistic stupid shit how about some material in your music bitch. Listen to the soul and transmit those into the radio and let your flow go honor roll, like a royal cee-lo Match, reload my track i'm bout take more shots Than peter griffin, read most of these wack verses Facepalm'd, worthless, so those jewels mean nothing, versus Me? C'mon you not that retarded, shit on me? Plz I woudnt be close to farted/ And this is just the pre, the caution, so take notes and take precaution/ |
stupid shithow about some material in your music bitch.
That was hard as fuck to me. Maybe it was the timing, but shit came off ill |
Definitely your best drop, much better and easier when it comes to reading, flowed well...some of the slant rhymes were questionable and the wording was slightly awkward at times, but this is definitely a step forward, solid little piece for the most part.
I'd like to see you write to a topic, but if that isn't your thing then its all good. Keep writing man. |
Topical? Got it. Yo can you point out the slant rhymes you thought were questionable? i need to improve on that sht
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Not speaking for witty but the slant rhymes hes referring to is
Major hit Angel blink...im not sure but this wasnt bad...not sure if its ur best work I have seen but better other things I have read...Agree with Witty about actual subject matter tho cause if not ur drops run together tbh...Not bad, seems ur improving with every drop tho |
Dopest shit up in this bitch. You gon give genocide a run for his $ soon kid
Pfft |
Sarcasm?
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but ill improve that the more i write |
The realest nigga unleashed!
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