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White Earl
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Love's blind -so is ass, his lust finds no relax
Reddish blonde hair bitch, a bloodshot golden lab Cuffed -propped, she folds in half, he buldges -blood is flowing fast Knowing that, her cage's locked with a key no one has Sultry, trashed, they both have had to much to drink, its comforting Asks him what's been on his mind, but gives a fuck of what he thinks A lovely pink between her legs, the sweetest flesh A set of lips that doesn't speak, they just suggest a plead for sex An equal test, the liquers poured, forbidden porn Diseases of a hidden sort, to walk away -or kiss a whore Flirting with a vicious force, permission born Twisted -torn, fifty -fifty, he submits or its abort Noticing a distance forms she moans a little filthier He filters words, with a clear sense of thought -notices the filth is her Builds his nerve to walk away, otherwise the dog would stay The traps been set, balls been played, but this bitch is off the chain
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Arm the Homeless
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Nice little short piece here. After reading this from you I couldn't help but think that your style is like a crazy version of how Jay Z raps with the pauses and what not. Jigga fan? Idk. I might just be stoned lol. What I mean by that is that your flow is always excellent but your words are much more complex and tougher to pull off imo. All in all, this was a good drop.
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Dope drop as usual.
''Noticing a distance forms she moans a little filthier He filters words, with a clear sense of thought -notices the filth is her Builds his nerve to walk away, otherwise the dog would stay The traps been set, balls been played, but this bitch is off the chain.'' ^Enjoyed this shit the most. Very well written, keep it up.
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