kiss the scotch

Just Write · 09-29-2013, 10:11 AM

No will to search, for a heart killed at birth
Give my body to death, leave my will to hurt
The real disperse, in the midst of frauds
Life fades further when I kiss the scotch
I insist to pause........ for those gone away
I miss you guys, that's not wrong to say
Shape my soul, the pain has taken hold
I write about death because I wait to go
Time is essence, will it end in my direction?
Ill leave behind my music to remind the questioned
Watch yourself, no one else will stop for help
The stream is mainly for those to rot in wealth
So spend your dreams, buy things not meant to see
I'm already at the gates... so hand your sins to me

Split · 09-29-2013, 10:18 AM

time IS essence. good.

zygote · 09-29-2013, 10:27 AM

That time is essence line is really cool I agree. Especially when you consider the cliche phrase time is of the essence. Your statement is more of like a comment on spacetime. The only thing I didn't understand is the kiss the scotch, looked it up on the internet but nothing really. Perhaps it is a phrase about alcoholism? Comparing addiction to a kind of unrequited love? For such a concise writing this really had a lot of substance. Just great lines and turn of phrase.

Zen · 09-29-2013, 12:09 PM

Jw this was dope as fuck. Forreal. Short and straight to the point but each line held a lot of meaning. Nice multis to start it off as well. I really did enjoy this shit we gotta get that collab going soon man.

Dove Dozer · 09-30-2013, 03:55 PM

Dope lines fam. I thought this was one of my favs of you. Real dope.

09-29-2013, 10:11 AM	#1
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	kiss the scotch No will to search, for a heart killed at birth Give my body to death, leave my will to hurt The real disperse, in the midst of frauds Life fades further when I kiss the scotch I insist to pause........ for those gone away I miss you guys, that's not wrong to say Shape my soul, the pain has taken hold I write about death because I wait to go Time is essence, will it end in my direction? Ill leave behind my music to remind the questioned Watch yourself, no one else will stop for help The stream is mainly for those to rot in wealth So spend your dreams, buy things not meant to see I'm already at the gates... so hand your sins to me __________________

09-29-2013, 10:18 AM	#2
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899398	time IS essence. good. __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com

09-30-2013, 03:55 PM	#5
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	Dope lines fam. I thought this was one of my favs of you. Real dope. __________________

09-29-2013, 10:27 AM	#3
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 501 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737828	That time is essence line is really cool I agree. Especially when you consider the cliche phrase time is of the essence. Your statement is more of like a comment on spacetime. The only thing I didn't understand is the kiss the scotch, looked it up on the internet but nothing really. Perhaps it is a phrase about alcoholism? Comparing addiction to a kind of unrequited love? For such a concise writing this really had a lot of substance. Just great lines and turn of phrase.

09-29-2013, 12:09 PM	#4
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Jw this was dope as fuck. Forreal. Short and straight to the point but each line held a lot of meaning. Nice multis to start it off as well. I really did enjoy this shit we gotta get that collab going soon man.