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Just Write 09-29-2013 10:11 AM

kiss the scotch
 
No will to search, for a heart killed at birth
Give my body to death, leave my will to hurt
The real disperse, in the midst of frauds
Life fades further when I kiss the scotch
I insist to pause........ for those gone away
I miss you guys, that's not wrong to say
Shape my soul, the pain has taken hold
I write about death because I wait to go
Time is essence, will it end in my direction?
Ill leave behind my music to remind the questioned
Watch yourself, no one else will stop for help
The stream is mainly for those to rot in wealth
So spend your dreams, buy things not meant to see
I'm already at the gates... so hand your sins to me

Split 09-29-2013 10:18 AM

time IS essence. good.

zygote 09-29-2013 10:27 AM

That time is essence line is really cool I agree. Especially when you consider the cliche phrase time is of the essence. Your statement is more of like a comment on spacetime. The only thing I didn't understand is the kiss the scotch, looked it up on the internet but nothing really. Perhaps it is a phrase about alcoholism? Comparing addiction to a kind of unrequited love? For such a concise writing this really had a lot of substance. Just great lines and turn of phrase.

Zen 09-29-2013 12:09 PM

Jw this was dope as fuck. Forreal. Short and straight to the point but each line held a lot of meaning. Nice multis to start it off as well. I really did enjoy this shit we gotta get that collab going soon man.

Dove Dozer 09-30-2013 03:55 PM

Dope lines fam. I thought this was one of my favs of you. Real dope.


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