ending story

brokenhal0 · 09-28-2013, 05:09 AM

time to change its over carbonated soda danceing with the cobra
devil sign play the part the pain is poster paint poker plays
yoga stretch the coca lay like chopra but im stepping over

living underneath a boulder to shoulder raise roll the haze bestow us

phaze 4 make more greed leads to cancer need i say more
your fads are played off we got enuff to pay off the madoffs
breaking bad take off love is a shady path trees a shade scorched

my bodys weak my mind is weaker i think im strong
cause my features a bigger illusion for the creature
jewels from a master teacher worth more then basket sneakers

titty squeezer web weaver lemon eater large dreamer big believer
your death threats weaker then geezers cash bets
ill creep then bleed ya after your girl squeeze my weiner

love it like pizza in the hood to hot burn your speaker

the dark wind looms shoot a harpoon threw the shark fin soup
baldwin spoofs coke spoons darwins theory was wrong
crows sing my song hexagons on saturn aladin live with in
but your too busy playing madden

interception shattered reflection
scattered dimensions tatted beer batered fish raw dish im feeling
psychological drinking cosmopolitans with charlatans in sauna pools

call me young puke cause i throw up on your hugs grow up on the scrubs
molly beach showing plenty love for shortys with soggy cheeks

penny earned for the henny burn feedi germ catch the freddy burn
thats elm street son my dreams is felt deep grilled cheese and tomato soup
i ate her ooops its playable non debatable to save a scoop

Wise Wiggles · 09-28-2013, 05:54 AM

Sick
Peep this

zygote · 09-28-2013, 01:24 PM

Good turn of phrase, I enjoy your interesting style and often unique word choice. The kind of condescending/aggressive tone was really great too, it gave the writing a nice position.

09-28-2013, 05:09 AM	#1
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 523 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	ending story time to change its over carbonated soda danceing with the cobra devil sign play the part the pain is poster paint poker plays yoga stretch the coca lay like chopra but im stepping over living underneath a boulder to shoulder raise roll the haze bestow us phaze 4 make more greed leads to cancer need i say more your fads are played off we got enuff to pay off the madoffs breaking bad take off love is a shady path trees a shade scorched my bodys weak my mind is weaker i think im strong cause my features a bigger illusion for the creature jewels from a master teacher worth more then basket sneakers titty squeezer web weaver lemon eater large dreamer big believer your death threats weaker then geezers cash bets ill creep then bleed ya after your girl squeeze my weiner love it like pizza in the hood to hot burn your speaker the dark wind looms shoot a harpoon threw the shark fin soup baldwin spoofs coke spoons darwins theory was wrong crows sing my song hexagons on saturn aladin live with in but your too busy playing madden interception shattered reflection scattered dimensions tatted beer batered fish raw dish im feeling psychological drinking cosmopolitans with charlatans in sauna pools call me young puke cause i throw up on your hugs grow up on the scrubs molly beach showing plenty love for shortys with soggy cheeks penny earned for the henny burn feedi germ catch the freddy burn thats elm street son my dreams is felt deep grilled cheese and tomato soup i ate her ooops its playable non debatable to save a scoop Last edited by brokenhal0; 09-28-2013 at 05:55 AM.

09-28-2013, 01:24 PM	#3
zygote Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 501 Battle Record: 33-12 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Art of Writing League (3x) Rep Power: 737828	Good turn of phrase, I enjoy your interesting style and often unique word choice. The kind of condescending/aggressive tone was really great too, it gave the writing a nice position.