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Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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what do you feel, when you simply apply the sentience?
besides wall pinning. the drizzling fire sessions momentary silence, pin drop in an empty room padded wall. effervescent, and sensual feeling your feminine voice telegraph vibrations through many a noise millenias not enough time to fix things we destroyed i feel violated. pass me the void barely observant. just an impressionable boy unpacking post traumatical memory noise your electrical currents, blend into words ready to work, to have me possessed, like your serveant invested, alluring. the rest is concerning subway network connecting my brain muscle memory. where her head would lay tapping longing lust in this mental frame karma sucks & its seems that way cause i feel she turns the other cheek when i plead my case you chisel streaked your name on my torso i call them the oujia board hormones you summon them like youre playing a game heart strings tug at your loves centerpiece commanding nerve endings to all rise like a judge entering the ultimate meaning, what so many fear meeting the puppeteer to this compulsory feeling surgeon who writes cursive in different languages, slurring in the OR tugging fleshy strings with insatiable thirsting like water to rivers, drought cleansing downpour crowned thorn. your love was the last remaining oasis outsourced
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11-04-2020, 12:33 AM
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living
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 3,485
Battle Record: 33-18
Accomplishments - Hall of Fame
Champed - AOWL Season 1
- Art of Writing League
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- Write Week V
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heart strings tug at your loves centerpiece
commanding nerve endings to all rise like a judge entering eeeeeeee fiercely beautiful, as eng would say. i'm beat down otherwise i would say something more helpful thanks
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11-04-2020, 09:44 AM
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Everything's Connected
Join Date: Nov 2017
Location: Niagara Falls, Canada
Posts: 1,001
Battle Record: 19-8
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Well done, bb.
http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=145420 Sign up, you two^^ ... big baby vs. dead man for topical supremacy... Then the winner can face me. :)
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11-04-2020, 12:28 PM
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rhyme capsule.
Join Date: Sep 2018
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excellent writing. feels very carefully phrased but the language is playful. themes drip through the progression of the piece. subtle in places, hard to miss in others.
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11-18-2020, 01:49 AM
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¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Join Date: Feb 2015
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I loved this
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11-22-2020, 08:53 AM
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Join Date: Jan 2013
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your electrical currents, blend into words
ready to work, to have me possessed, like your serveant invested, alluring. the rest is concerning ^Your choice of words and structure is captivating af, you pack a shitload into few words and bring a train of meaning along with it Like Split Eight said: I loved this
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