WEEK 3: Dave 1-1 VS INF 1-1 DAVE WINS

UPN Zuch · 10-16-2020, 06:50 PM

Welcome to the NBL

Rules

Line limit

Minimum: 10

Maximum: 16

Verses due 11:59pm EST October 20, 2020 (Tuesday)

Extensions are granted automatically. 24-hour max. MUST BE REQUESTED BY DEADLINE

Good luck, gentlemen
__________________

evaD · 10-17-2020, 11:00 AM

Check

10-12?

Saint · 10-17-2020, 11:31 AM

10s fine...

evaD · 10-17-2020, 11:39 AM

Cool I’ll probably post tomorrow or tonight

UPN Zuch · 10-20-2020, 11:24 PM

I have Dave’s. Where you at @INF

Saint · 10-21-2020, 12:14 AM

Here. Will need a few

Saint · 10-21-2020, 02:17 AM

I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key
Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey
Fuck around. My mafia ties have you hung in sin city
Dog that Vegas Loop put you underground so fast Elon'll get w/ me
Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect
If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps
Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare
Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air
U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go
I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low

evaD · 10-21-2020, 04:11 AM

This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade
If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades
Back for more this season? I guess nobodies above a loss
And since then you’ve come on leaps n bounds but you really shouldn’t fuck the dog
Even when this season ends we can’t be seen as friends
Dave puts the G in Peng... INF puts the D in Men
Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw
Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read
But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head?

Universe · 10-21-2020, 06:48 AM

INF:

"I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key
Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey"

- Gun bar excused for the creativity of this.

"U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go
I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low"

evaD:

"Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw"

- Very nice.

"Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read
But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head?"

- Great closer.

Good battle here between two guys who definitely bring it. INF is solid all around, not many weaknesses but nothing too mind bending either. evaD started kind of slow with some played concepts (going down in history like Monica Lewinsky is a bar I read in 2003-2004 - and that was even done better) but finished really strong with two clever bars that I loved.

Vote - evaD

Wanderer · 10-21-2020, 07:44 AM

Inf

I liked your opener but not much else. I feel like your set ups are forced to be short when reading... like they almost don’t make sense good ideas though and you can still bring it on your day

Dave

Dave this was not your strongest either.
Fuck the dog was funny but a stretch.
D in men was not good
Southpaw and jarring were cool though

I’m gonna go evaD out of preference

Vote Dave

Aero · 10-21-2020, 08:50 AM

Almost stopped reading Dave's verse after the history line. That's actually an insult to my time. Circle left bar was dope. Jarring was cute.

After Inf first bar I was thinking great, another verse I wont get. Vegas loop was cool, 100 reps could've been good but was flex.. mattress could've been good but the wording was bad.

I'm voting tie here. Dont usually do this but I took off 7 points for Dave.

Hush · 10-21-2020, 10:08 AM

Inf get off the drugs bro

Or get a Rosetta Stone

10 years later and u still don’t speak English cmon bro

Vote dave

Ajax · 10-21-2020, 11:58 AM

This was a tough one to call. I actually thought Inf’s concepts were about equal to Dave’s here.. There’s an awkwardness to Inf’s wording, but if he tightens that up, he could be a force, I’d think. Certainly as good as some others that get much more praise on here. The HAL line, Bends, the closer... I could see how those would hit much harder with better wording. As is, it was still a cool little verse.

Dave came worse than the last couple I’ve seen from him. I have no clue what the Peng punch means... and I’ve seen the going down in history done way too many times. But, there were still some solid concepts that were flipped a bit more creatively than Inf’s.. Southpaw, etc.

Dave wins, in a close one.

Smod of War · 10-21-2020, 02:38 PM

I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key
Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey
I didn’t see this movie so I did some reachsearch, results came back - NOT FOUND, in other words I still don’t get it
Fuck around. My mafia ties have you hung in sin city
Dog that Vegas Loop put you underground so fast Elon'll get w/ me
I don’t get this one either man, forgive me
Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect
If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps
pass
Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare
Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air
this one is gonna be a no for me
U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go
I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low
the mattress? You’re dissing his bed? I’m starting to think maybe it’s just me..

Vs

This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade
If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades
wouldn’t it be the opposite? Doesn’t add up
Back for more this season? I guess nobodies above a loss
And since then you’ve come on leaps n bounds but you really shouldn’t fuck the dog
im not familiar with the topic at hand
Even when this season ends we can’t be seen as friends
Dave puts the G in Peng... INF puts the D in Men
there isn’t a D in the word men, ok gigs up we deserve to know wtf is going on in this battle
Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw
finally, I was beginning to think this was some sort of sick joke. Nice bar
Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read
But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head?
huge reach, place this bar on the same shelf as the pickled heads

This was honestly a very tough read and difficult battle to vote on. Didn’t quite enjoy much and it all came down to one good line in this entire battle. Gonna go ahead and vote for Dave.

Dave

TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO · 10-21-2020, 05:18 PM

Elon

Vs

Southpaw
Jarring

Closer than I expected. Not the best from you guys but serviceable.

Vote Dave

Adverse · 10-21-2020, 05:20 PM

This battle had a lot of potential on paper but neither of you guys seemed at full strength here

The HAL bar to start your verse Inf was dope but then You got redundant and I really didn’t feel much else. Could tell this one was rushed tbh mattress was the only other maybe okay bar

Dave came a cut below his usual as well tbh which yes off weeks happen But I just didn’t enjoy much some generic lines then Southpaw was dope and the rest was low tier though d in men got a chuckle out of me

Think I’ll lean more towards David as his misses weren’t as bad

V/Davey

iSpaz · 10-21-2020, 09:32 PM

Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw

vs.

Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect
If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps

v/dave. i've seen fire shit from both before idkk.

Mac · 10-22-2020, 02:51 PM

I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key
Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey
cooll i get this

Fuck around. My mafia ties have you hung in sin city
Dog that Vegas Loop put you underground so fast Elon'll get w/ me
okk

Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect
If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps
lol stretched

Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare
Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air
mild

U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go
I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low
i like thi

vs.

This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade
If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades
lol

Back for more this season? I guess nobodies above a loss
And since then you’ve come on leaps n bounds but you really shouldn’t fuck the dog
eh

Even when this season ends we can’t be seen as friends
Dave puts the G in Peng... INF puts the D in Men
yoo i dont get this dave

Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw
cool

Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read
But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head?
decent

inf had some good ideas but couldve used a better execution.. but dave has the edge here being more direct and consistent in the wording. love for both, inf and dave. v/dave

dave maybe you should have said he loves the D of Dave and that would have been fireeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

or maybe not

UserName · 10-23-2020, 05:42 PM

Inf -

I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key
Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey
Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare
Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air

Cool. Nothing really grand/super dope. Opener was good, Bends has some wording issues but the concept is fire, so I gave it to you.

Dave -

This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade
If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades
Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw

Same as Inf, really. One good bar, in the opener, and one that needs a slight reword to really reach full potential.

Close battle honestly. I'm gonna give it to Dave SLIGHTLY due to wording. This really could go either way, though.

V - Dave

Blue Bayou · 10-23-2020, 07:03 PM

I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key
Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey
delivered a bit clunky but man this concept is fireee....dope out of the box nameplay tbh, i really like it for a gun bar
Fuck around. My mafia ties have you hung in sin city
Dog that Vegas Loop put you underground so fast Elon'll get w/ me
love this concept...wouldve preferred if he was from there tbh but fresh idea i think is creative.. wording was good enough here
Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect
If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps
dece swag here and i appreciate the original concept.. really dont like the multi setup/wording but concept still cool
Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare
Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air
fuck this is creative.. alot going on here but the bends concept tying into the setup worked, a bit all over the place but i can appreciate this concept being tough to pull off...this is cool to me
U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go
I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low
ehhh nah not feeling this one personally

Vs

This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade
If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades
lol i think this is jokes to me
Back for more this season? I guess nobodies above a loss
And since then you’ve come on leaps n bounds but you really shouldn’t fuck the dog
ehhh nah, appreciate the originality but im not a fan of the concept
Even when this season ends we can’t be seen as friends
Dave puts the G in Peng... INF puts the D in Men
lolish, this was dece
Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws
I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw
fuck this is fire... dope bar and great concept
Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read
But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head?
nice this is pretty cool.. false teeth or something along those lines i think wouldve been a bit more effective then "pickling" a head.. but this is my kindve bar i like the wit here

Feel bad for INF to be honest i think he has some great concepts here that are being missed... That opening Dave nameplay is fire to me, very creative and original... Hyperloop idea was awesome and delivered well, Bench Warm flex was jokes and good swag, and the bends while a bit all over the place is dope af conceptually
Dave opener was funny to me, i guess ppl dont like humor anymore.. Southpaw was dope af, prob lotb tho personally INF's opening nameplay matches it... Jarring cool too i like the idea

Yeah i'm going against the grain here I think INF did just enough to take this, in a battle that i think is a lot better then it's getting credit for....props to both

Vote INF

10-17-2020, 11:00 AM	#2
evaD Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 695 Battle Record: 19-10 Champed - BA Show And Prove - Summer Classic XI Rep Power: 4156647	Check 10-12? __________________

10-17-2020, 11:39 AM	#4
evaD Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 695 Battle Record: 19-10 Champed - BA Show And Prove - Summer Classic XI Rep Power: 4156647	Cool I’ll probably post tomorrow or tonight __________________

10-21-2020, 02:17 AM	#7
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey Fuck around. My mafia ties have you hung in sin city Dog that Vegas Loop put you underground so fast Elon'll get w/ me Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low Last edited by Saint; 10-21-2020 at 03:30 AM.

10-21-2020, 04:11 AM	#8
evaD Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 695 Battle Record: 19-10 Champed - BA Show And Prove - Summer Classic XI Rep Power: 4156647	This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades Back for more this season? I guess nobodies above a loss And since then you’ve come on leaps n bounds but you really shouldn’t fuck the dog Even when this season ends we can’t be seen as friends Dave puts the G in Peng... INF puts the D in Men Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head? __________________

10-21-2020, 06:48 AM	#9
Universe Everything's Connected Join Date: Nov 2017 Location: Niagara Falls, Canada Posts: 1,001 Battle Record: 19-8 Champed - Guerrilla Writing League(2x) - GWL Picture challenge(2x) - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 10178706	INF: "I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey" - Gun bar excused for the creativity of this. "U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low" evaD: "Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw" - Very nice. "Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head?" - Great closer. Good battle here between two guys who definitely bring it. INF is solid all around, not many weaknesses but nothing too mind bending either. evaD started kind of slow with some played concepts (going down in history like Monica Lewinsky is a bar I read in 2003-2004 - and that was even done better) but finished really strong with two clever bars that I loved. Vote - evaD __________________ ..Passed the Present and Future..

10-17-2020, 11:31 AM	#3
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	10s fine...

10-21-2020, 12:14 AM	#6
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	Here. Will need a few

10-21-2020, 07:44 AM	#10
Wanderer Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: England Posts: 589 Battle Record: 24-33 Champed - NPL Roast Rep Power: 7457541	Inf I liked your opener but not much else. I feel like your set ups are forced to be short when reading... like they almost don’t make sense good ideas though and you can still bring it on your day Dave Dave this was not your strongest either. Fuck the dog was funny but a stretch. D in men was not good Southpaw and jarring were cool though I’m gonna go evaD out of preference Vote Dave

10-21-2020, 08:50 AM	#11
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,826 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Almost stopped reading Dave's verse after the history line. That's actually an insult to my time. Circle left bar was dope. Jarring was cute. After Inf first bar I was thinking great, another verse I wont get. Vegas loop was cool, 100 reps could've been good but was flex.. mattress could've been good but the wording was bad. I'm voting tie here. Dont usually do this but I took off 7 points for Dave. __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

10-21-2020, 10:08 AM	#12
Hush NJ Devil Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,036 Battle Record: Who Cares Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Rep Power: 84181420	Inf get off the drugs bro Or get a Rosetta Stone 10 years later and u still don’t speak English cmon bro Vote dave __________________ Bed stuy fly Bushwick sick East ny walk

10-21-2020, 11:58 AM	#13
Ajax Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 5-4 Rep Power: 95150	This was a tough one to call. I actually thought Inf’s concepts were about equal to Dave’s here.. There’s an awkwardness to Inf’s wording, but if he tightens that up, he could be a force, I’d think. Certainly as good as some others that get much more praise on here. The HAL line, Bends, the closer... I could see how those would hit much harder with better wording. As is, it was still a cool little verse. Dave came worse than the last couple I’ve seen from him. I have no clue what the Peng punch means... and I’ve seen the going down in history done way too many times. But, there were still some solid concepts that were flipped a bit more creatively than Inf’s.. Southpaw, etc. Dave wins, in a close one. __________________ https://soundcloud.com/ajaxinstrumentals

10-21-2020, 02:38 PM	#14
Smod of War My avatar is a man, urGAY Join Date: Aug 2018 Posts: 373 Battle Record: 2-5 Rep Power: 1718007	I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey *I didn’t see this movie so I did some reachsearch, results came back - NOT FOUND, in other words I still don’t get it* Fuck around. My mafia ties have you hung in sin city Dog that Vegas Loop put you underground so fast Elon'll get w/ me I don’t get this one either man, forgive me Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps pass Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air this one is gonna be a no for me U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low the mattress? You’re dissing his bed? I’m starting to think maybe it’s just me.. Vs This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades wouldn’t it be the opposite? Doesn’t add up Back for more this season? I guess nobodies above a loss And since then you’ve come on leaps n bounds but you really shouldn’t fuck the dog im not familiar with the topic at hand Even when this season ends we can’t be seen as friends Dave puts the G in Peng... INF puts the D in Men there isn’t a D in the word men, ok gigs up we deserve to know wtf is going on in this battle Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw finally, I was beginning to think this was some sort of sick joke. Nice bar Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head? huge reach, place this bar on the same shelf as the pickled heads This was honestly a very tough read and difficult battle to vote on. Didn’t quite enjoy much and it all came down to one good line in this entire battle. Gonna go ahead and vote for Dave. Dave

10-21-2020, 05:18 PM	#15
TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO I <3 girls an good at sex Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 149 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 132754	Elon Vs Southpaw Jarring Closer than I expected. Not the best from you guys but serviceable. Vote Dave __________________ They think I’m dope and I Cedar Point

10-21-2020, 05:20 PM	#16
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	This battle had a lot of potential on paper but neither of you guys seemed at full strength here The HAL bar to start your verse Inf was dope but then You got redundant and I really didn’t feel much else. Could tell this one was rushed tbh mattress was the only other maybe okay bar Dave came a cut below his usual as well tbh which yes off weeks happen But I just didn’t enjoy much some generic lines then Southpaw was dope and the rest was low tier though d in men got a chuckle out of me Think I’ll lean more towards David as his misses weren’t as bad V/Davey

10-21-2020, 09:32 PM	#17
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161234	Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw vs. Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps v/dave. i've seen fire shit from both before idkk. __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw

10-22-2020, 02:51 PM	#18
Mac Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 480 Battle Record: 7-12 Rep Power: 1856622	I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey cooll i get this Fuck around. My mafia ties have you hung in sin city Dog that Vegas Loop put you underground so fast Elon'll get w/ me okk Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps lol stretched Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air mild U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low i like thi vs. This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades lol Back for more this season? I guess nobodies above a loss And since then you’ve come on leaps n bounds but you really shouldn’t fuck the dog eh Even when this season ends we can’t be seen as friends Dave puts the G in Peng... INF puts the D in Men yoo i dont get this dave Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw cool Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head? decent inf had some good ideas but couldve used a better execution.. but dave has the edge here being more direct and consistent in the wording. love for both, inf and dave. v/dave dave maybe you should have said he loves the D of Dave and that would have been fireeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee or maybe not

10-23-2020, 05:42 PM	#19
UserName K I N G Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 685 Battle Record: 15-10 Rep Power: 3228865	Inf - I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air Cool. Nothing really grand/super dope. Opener was good, Bends has some wording issues but the concept is fire, so I gave it to you. Dave - This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw Same as Inf, really. One good bar, in the opener, and one that needs a slight reword to really reach full potential. Close battle honestly. I'm gonna give it to Dave SLIGHTLY due to wording. This really could go either way, though. V - Dave __________________ First Class

10-23-2020, 07:03 PM	#20
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,098 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502335	I'm closing the door on your NC run. Place lock & key Headshot. "Sorry Dave" u'll only see a red dot, HAL in Space Odyssey delivered a bit clunky but man this concept is fireee....dope out of the box nameplay tbh, i really like it for a gun bar Fuck around. My mafia ties have you hung in sin city Dog that Vegas Loop put you underground so fast Elon'll get w/ me love this concept...wouldve preferred if he was from there tbh but fresh idea i think is creative.. wording was good enough here Never1 to watch from the sidelines. Rank? Zuch's suspect If I ever left the Bench Warm, I just pressed your max for onehunnid reps dece swag here and i appreciate the original concept.. really dont like the multi setup/wording but concept still cool Had your girl w/ 1leg to her ear, fuck then sucked it bare Died from the Bends.. after throat was in deep pressure & came up for air fuck this is creative.. alot going on here but the bends concept tying into the setup worked, a bit all over the place but i can appreciate this concept being tough to pull off...this is cool to me U suspicious, slung her phone. My guy i just bust & go I Dip Quick. You lay in the mattress part thinking how u sunk so low ehhh nah not feeling this one personally Vs This is a mismatch; ur shits trash, I’ll be remembered as one you can’t fade If INF going down in history its cuz his Professor said he’d bump up his grades lol i think this is jokes to me Back for more this season? I guess nobodies above a loss And since then you’ve come on leaps n bounds but you really shouldn’t fuck the dog ehhh nah, appreciate the originality but im not a fan of the concept Even when this season ends we can’t be seen as friends Dave puts the G in Peng... INF puts the D in Men lolish, this was dece Your whole squad is soft dog you can’t play with the outlaws I’ll have ya circle left in bags like you’re training for a southpaw fuck this is fire... dope bar and great concept Your rhymes are the most jarring shit I’ve ever read But I can be jarring too; how else am I gonna pickle your severed head? nice this is pretty cool.. false teeth or something along those lines i think wouldve been a bit more effective then "pickling" a head.. but this is my kindve bar i like the wit here Feel bad for INF to be honest i think he has some great concepts here that are being missed... That opening Dave nameplay is fire to me, very creative and original... Hyperloop idea was awesome and delivered well, Bench Warm flex was jokes and good swag, and the bends while a bit all over the place is dope af conceptually Dave opener was funny to me, i guess ppl dont like humor anymore.. Southpaw was dope af, prob lotb tho personally INF's opening nameplay matches it... Jarring cool too i like the idea Yeah i'm going against the grain here I think INF did just enough to take this, in a battle that i think is a lot better then it's getting credit for....props to both Vote INF