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Old 12-22-2016, 03:24 AM   #1
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Season 7

Verses are due Tuesday 12/27 at 11:59 PST. EXT 12/28 11:59 PST

Voting ends Sunday 12/31 at 11:59 PST

Verses may not exceed 48 lines

Voting on 3 battles is required. If you win and don't vote the requirement you will not receive a victory. If you lose and don't vote the requirement, you will receive a one-week suspension.

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Good luck to both participants. @Razah @MMLP
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Old 12-22-2016, 03:45 AM   #2
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Old 12-22-2016, 02:14 PM   #3
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Old 12-30-2016, 12:59 AM   #4
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Pleasantly amused, I felt the room was full of love
But it grew dim, & now I could take a swim in this pool of blood
I memorized the cards that you gave, I was lost in the game
Figured it was curiosity and not deceit that I saw in your face
I was sadly mistaken- My flawless heart's blemished with pain
The thoughts of calling your bluff are now replenished by rage
It was a pastime we all admired, we were longing for more
Until the wrong move would cause the cards to fall to the floor
I suddenly lost it, my heart burst like you hollowed the chambers
I've never felt fury, at this moment I was swallowed by anger
I'm now a vessel for madness, I wish I could shatter your spine
Still I went on a rampage, a blow to your chest & your dagger is mine
Your accomplice was frozen- My cards.. he was dying to know
I still remember the size of your eyes as I was slicing his throat
I'm like a lion you woke- I'll deliver a cut so precise it won't spatter
Here's my final question to you, "What's it like to die by your own dagger?"

Fucking cheaters.
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