Lotto Smirk vs Sharp - Lotto WINS

[Orc]

NBL Season 9


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@Sharp @Lotto Smirk

[Lotto Smirk]

Sup bro... 10

[Sharp]

Oh shit we never have battled have we?

Let's go big bro

[Lotto Smirk]

Sent 10 to orc

[Sharp]

Will post tonight

[Lotto Smirk]

No sharp nameplays @Orc

This ex-host no competitor, face the facts your wack kid
if u ever bossed the league it's only as a mod posting mags & matches
sharp had a girl once then changed his name out of shame
n tuck away a nine after finding out the tranny bitch had done the same
Let of lead anyone w/ him dead, My gun never misses
bullets'll scale his family's face n have them prepped for sleeping w/ the fishes
rookie of the year.. for years, never post a verse that be slick
if sharp think he's blowing up then he's more delusional than that hijacker in Egypt
u ain't clever n it shows, lately ur text more than worthless
it lacks witty lines unlike the tag tourney when he clearly wrote ur verses

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

play hide n seek w/ body parts if he try and play god
hide cable under the floor so good it'll put neat sparkys out there day job

This put you over the top vs Cable? Bro...


You robbed Cable last week. Wouldn't blame him if dude left
the battle showed your style's just wanting... a name you can flip to death
I'd know. You're battling your fuckin editor n now the truth's hurting
Trust, it ain't a compliment when dudes say you have Sharp wording
That fake gutta style worked last season but now its just dead ish
Think you barely missed the period? By now your verses MUST be pregnant
You can't compete here. Or even use punctuation. By now the fun's gone
I'm serious bro. How the fuck are you a text battle Walk-On and Run-On???
Smirk is ONLY nameflips and current events. I'm just being honest
They say no news is good news... Unless you're Lotto diggin for a concept


I'm baaaaaaaaaaack

[SHECK WES]

No sharp nameplays @Orc

This ex-host no competitor, face the facts your wack kid
if u ever bossed the league it's only as a mod posting mags & matches
alright not bad
sharp had a girl once then changed his name out of shame
n tuck away a nine after finding out the tranny bitch had done the same
oh shit this is nice!
Let of lead anyone w/ him dead, My gun never misses
bullets'll scale his family's face n have them prepped for sleeping w/ the fishes
meh, wording hurt the potential of this
rookie of the year.. for years, never post a verse that be slick
if sharp think he's blowing up then he's more delusional than that hijacker in Egypt
alright cool
u ain't clever n it shows, lately ur text more than worthless
it lacks witty lines unlike the tag tourney when he clearly wrote ur verses
hmm ok


Vs


You robbed Cable last week. Wouldn't blame him if dude left
the battle showed your style's just wanting... a name you can flip to death
solid personal
I'd know. You're battling your fuckin editor n now the truth's hurting
Trust, it ain't a compliment when dudes say you have Sharp wording
ok
That fake gutta style worked last season but now its just dead ish
Think you barely missed the period? By now your verses MUST be pregnant
noooooo big no
You can't compete here. Or even use punctuation. By now the fun's gone
I'm serious bro. How the fuck are you a text battle Walk-On and Run-On???
hmm decent here
Smirk is ONLY nameflips and current events. I'm just being honest
They say no news is good news... Unless you're Lotto diggin for a concept
ehh idk about this one

I got lotto having only 1 clear miss and 1 iffy line. I have sharp having 2 clear misses and 1 iffy line. Lotto came a lot better than last week I feel and it paid off. Sharp seems like he may be a bit rusty here, his only good ones were the personals IMO. I think sharp will bounce back next week for sure but I got lotto getting the W in this one.

Vote Lotto

[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

Opener, tuck Nine, hijacker & closer.

Nice drop only weak line was the fishscale joint, pretty good verse thru out tho. That's the thing when u write u're dope, Bro.

Originally Posted by Sharp

Opener, Sharp wording & closer.

Good verse, almost all personals, which I'm a fan of..lol. Problem was u didn't flip them creatively enough. Very harsh, but the somewhat simple flips didn't land as heavy as they could.

Overall LOTTO SMIRK got it, Sharp's prob out of practice, but Lotto did his thang.

[JShazo]

vote lotto - more consistent w/ the punches, less misses. sharp was decent as well, just had a few more misses.

highlights: nine tucked vs sharp wording

vote lotto smirk

[Joe Boston]

Lotto


This ex-host no competitor, face the facts your wack kid
if u ever bossed the league it's only as a mod posting mags & matches
Ok personal hit

sharp had a girl once then changed his name out of shame
n tuck away a nine after finding out the tranny bitch had done the same
Lol nice flip

Let of lead anyone w/ him dead, My gun never misses
bullets'll scale his family's face n have them prepped for sleeping w/ the fishes
Played

rookie of the year.. for years, never post a verse that be slick
if sharp think he's blowing up then he's more delusional than that hijacker in Egypt
Good reference couldve been polished better

u ain't clever n it shows, lately ur text more than worthless
it lacks witty lines unlike the tag tourney when he clearly wrote ur verses
Ok personal not hard hitting

Sharp



You robbed Cable last week. Wouldn't blame him if dude left
the battle showed your style's just wanting... a name you can flip to death
This personal was ok not much impact to it though

I'd know. You're battling your fuckin editor n now the truth's hurting
Trust, it ain't a compliment when dudes say you have Sharp wording
Ok but still no sting factor comes off as,a basic hit

That fake gutta style worked last season but now its just dead ish
Think you barely missed the period? By now your verses MUST be pregnant
No

You can't compete here. Or even use punctuation. By now the fun's gone
I'm serious bro. How the fuck are you a text battle Walk-On and Run-On???
Ok

Smirk is ONLY nameflips and current events. I'm just being honest
They say no news is good news... Unless you're Lotto diggin for a concept
Nah


Sharp had some mild personals but to me they really had no sting factor. Lotto had his opener and the nine concept which were both decent flips.

V/Lotto

[Toil]

Lotto: tranny, sleep with the fishes
Sharp: opener, closer

Hmm I've got this one quite close. I actually think Sharp came slightly more consistent overall so going to go against the grain.

Vote = Sharp

[Destroyer]

holy shit
I'm glad I signed out
having said that...

lotto had tuck a 9 and almost highjacker, except dude wasn't a highjacker he was a suicide bomber, so nevermind on that one

sharp had opener, sharp wording, run-on, and closer

v/sharp

[Useless]

sharp had a girl once then changed his name out of shame
n tuck away a nine after finding out the tranny bitch had done the same
u ain't clever n it shows, lately ur text more than worthless
it lacks witty lines unlike the tag tourney when he clearly wrote ur verses

--- these were almosts, but ur verse had no quotables. U had some aite lines u just need to work on ur wording and creativity, getting the max effect with ur concept. Ur verses always feel rushed.


Vs.


You robbed Cable last week. Wouldn't blame him if dude left
the battle showed your style's just wanting... a name you can flip to death
--- aite personal, not that harsh tho.........
That fake gutta style worked last season but now its just dead ish
Think you barely missed the period? By now your verses MUST be pregnant
--- I really don't wanna like this line becuz of what it is. But I like the double meaning for "missed the period" here. Never seen it used in that context...........
Smirk is ONLY nameflips and current events. I'm just being honest
They say no news is good news... Unless you're Lotto diggin for a concept
--- LOTB





Overall: I think sharp edged it. Both had a cpl bad bars but sharp had lotb with the closer and he had the better hits imo. He barely won tho lol and lookin at the votes he might not win.



V. Sharp

[Hush]

I think lotto got this one

[King]

u ain't clever n it shows, lately ur text more than worthless
it lacks witty lines unlike the tag tourney when he clearly wrote ur verses

vs

I'd know. You're battling your fuckin editor n now the truth's hurting
Trust, it ain't a compliment when dudes say you have Sharp wording
Smirk is ONLY nameflips and current events. I'm just being honest
They say no news is good news... Unless you're Lotto diggin for a concept

wasnt feeling much from lotto. sharp had a couple punches connect and better attempts overall imo.

vote Sharp

[Barcotic]

opener
tuck away a 9
closer

vs

opener
missed the period

decent battle, kind of hard to call tbh. lotto's wording n rhyme schemes were lacking but he definitely had some cool concepts. sharp was bit more personal but some lacked impact due to lotto not dropping a single nameflip n only one news related line, also I'm not big on self np iunno but I see another surprising outcome here

v/lotto

[Kenny the OG]

I'd know. You're battling your fuckin editor n now the truth's hurting
Trust, it ain't a compliment when dudes say you have Sharp wording
..
Smirk is ONLY nameflips and current events. I'm just being honest
They say no news is good news... Unless you're Lotto diggin for a concept

Vs

u ain't clever n it shows, lately ur text more than worthless
it lacks witty lines unlike the tag tourney when he clearly wrote ur verses

Vt- sharp

[Cashius]

Witty

Vs.

Opener
News


Not a great showing from either but I got Sharp on more quotables and just a more polished verse. Lotto's wording is weird to me.

Sharp.

[Artifice]

Lotto: opener was decent, tranny line was cool, closer was pretty good

Sharp: had the opener and closer. sharp's wording line was cool but it feels like both a diss on him and yourself, i get where u were coming from but i feel it reads a little ambiguous to be a solid hit.

personally i like sharp's style better, but i felt like lotto's execution gives him the slight edge here...

v/ lotto