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Foreva us, neva them.
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![]() NBL Season 8 Week 2 Due FRIDAYFriday Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @murda sho @Denton
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Shonami Surf
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yeah 12
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Shonami Surf
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Might have to drop tomorrow might not so ima just ask for the extension to be safe
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yeah thats cool man, I only just got home after a crazy day. heres my 12 punk..
quit frontin ya freak.. ya punches are weak, yeah ya shit is lame couldn't put a dent on me, even if i split my name for' any bad math for this battle, 33 caps? but ya rattled.. saying your average is mean, but you've lost half of ya battles! so if this murda sho, you'll get murdered cold and i aint using the garden tools when I straight earth this hoe yeah im sick with the wordplay, fuck what these nerds say.. i'll ground ya head so hard, you can tell how the worms taste plus my way is greater, you're so bad people cry fo saviour you literally suck the life out a wrap like the end of a twilight saga ya gun bars are old! now any kid'll gladly stick him you talk about guns but never use them, like military prison |
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Shonami Surf
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I said yo...
Don't front like im worthless, come on Dent u know my punches are perfect While this week's mag has the same content as one of your verses But fight with all of your might don't let me win off of light shit Atleast Trident before I make your life a myth like Poseidon This laptop beef is so funny I won't even slapbox geeks One bow would turn you into a bitch quicker than Black Ops 3 Fuck sparring the glock pop lift his carcas with loud shots Leave his face open in the air like he's gargling mouthwash! Speakin of that if he doesn't settle then the clip would be at his teeth Dental get drilled with the metal like im fixin his cavities So Nik really vouched for you? Well his old ass don't remember it then Ironic you're fake and he's ancient so I can see why denture his friend Zip Him Up!!
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Barrin' Out
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Vs Poseidon Cavities Mouth wash V--Murda. I dont mind simplist bars but they need be more creative or really harsh. Dents verse had a lot of simple concepts that didnt hit hard
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baz∞ka
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Nothing
vs Don't front like im worthless, come on Dent u know my punches are perfect While this week's mag has the same content as one of your verses But fight with all of your might don't let me win off of light shit Atleast Trident before I make your life a myth like Poseidon Fuck sparring the glock pop lift his carcas with loud shots Leave his face open in the air like he's gargling mouthwash! Speakin of that if he doesn't settle then the clip would be at his teeth Dental get drilled with the metal like im fixin his cavities once just came so plain here and the other had a solid verse this was just an easy call here . v/murda
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Denton - concepts were far too simplistic. You'll have to bring more wit to the table than this to do well in the league.
Sho - opener was funny. Trident line was really well executed from setup to punchline. Black Ops 3 line was cool. Mouthwash was ehh. Denture line was cool also. Vote -- murda sho. Not even a fair fight.
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Shot got it, Denton still has that effortless flow and word choice I remember, albeit w/ rusty content... twilight saga might've been your best attempt.
I thought trident was lotb. a few others were cool, all u needed.. vote sho |
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The Biggest
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Trident was crazyyyy, mouth wash i was diggin too from murda. Denton came way too simplistic in this one. He seems to be on the right track though
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Dynomite.. DYNOMITE!!
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Read like some shit typed as u rapped out rap..lol.
Read like a key, a decent key, but not your best work. OVerall Denton come off extremely lazy, I've been lazy myself, so I can't hate, but MURDA SHO. |
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quit frontin ya freak..
ya punches are weak, yeah ya shit is lame couldn't put a dent on me, even if i split my name ---nah--- for' any bad math for this battle, 33 caps? but ya rattled.. saying your average is mean, but you've lost half of ya battles! --lol ok personal-- so if this murda sho, you'll get murdered cold and i aint using the garden tools when I straight earth this hoe -nahhh,--- yeah im sick with the wordplay, fuck what these nerds say.. i'll ground ya head so hard, you can tell how the worms taste --lmfao eh no--- plus my way is greater, you're so bad people cry fo saviour you literally suck the life out a wrap like the end of a twilight saga -nah--- ya gun bars are old! now any kid'll gladly stick him you talk about guns but never use them, like military prison ---meh nah-- vs Don't front like im worthless, come on Dent u know my punches are perfect While this week's mag has the same content as one of your verses -ok- But fight with all of your might don't let me win off of light shit Atleast Trident before I make your life a myth like Poseidon -ok cool- Fuck sparring the glock pop lift his carcas with loud shots Leave his face open in the air like he's gargling mouthwash! -lmfao ok, set up could have been a bit better- Speakin of that if he doesn't settle then the clip would be at his teeth Dental get drilled with the metal like im fixin his cavities -seen this before, not bad tho- vote sho, over all had punches that didnt miss like dent's did |
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Vs Poseidon Cavities Mouth wash V--Murda took this rather easily, dent was either knocking off rust or things have just changed a lot since he was last posting. |
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