ill nik-A 1-0 Vs Lotto Smirk 1-0 - NIKA WINS

Allen Knight · 01-12-2016, 05:42 PM

NBL Season 8
Week 2

Due FRIDAYFriday

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 16 lines
Line limit can increase if both agree

NO biting
NO swaying
NO feeding
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@ill nik-A

@Lotto Smirk docked -2 votes for not voting last week.

ill nik-A · 01-12-2016, 06:54 PM

Welcome!
10

ill nik-A · 01-15-2016, 10:36 AM

10 sent @Allen Knight @Lotto Smirk

Lotto Smirk · 01-16-2016, 12:51 PM

u a king that's past his prime, take ya place & destroy ya fortress
this'll be a heir removal but one that won't sort out your sad receding baldness
u fat & ugly while trust me my body's sportsman slick
for you to get one it'll take more trainers than your weird fetish for Jordan kicks
ya girl so ugly, it must be why u don't fuck her lately
bitch got bulldog features that could star her alongside phill on the pet show w/ dr Katy
got thugs that'll shoot for me so TRUST u don't want that heat bro
cus if nika start I'll lift my arm n the iron'll raise quicker than if I we're magneto
thugs laugh at Nika n after last week to us ya just a big joke
cus u handled bash n ironically u do when dealers mug u off w/ the shit coke

Meh I tried g/l bro

ill nik-A · 01-16-2016, 01:31 PM

Guess u didn’t learn from PM’ing me ya rhymes for some tips
I’m a Bad teacher… but Cameron Diaz musta taught u how to word ur lines like a bitch
I love to fight like I write so why would u wanna test, soldier
been in many scraps… but fuck good punches I’ll beat this wack loser with leftovers
I got 5 hoes in my bed using they mouth to see me freed
The life of a player… u askin Paul Reubens for a hand to compete in the Peewee league
u’re just a delay in the game so why would I bother clown
u got ur head in the clouds & too dumb to notice ya concepts are water down
u think u have a chance at the impossible in text all is right
I’ll wipe the lotto smirk…. & have u share the second prize with the rest of the site

Pinot Grij · 01-16-2016, 03:20 PM

Lotto - decent concepts, but I think you got tripped up by wordiness.

Quote:

ya girl so ugly, it must be why u don't fuck her lately
bitch got bulldog features that could star her alongside phill on the pet show w/ dr Katy
got thugs that'll shoot for me so TRUST u don't want that heat bro
cus if nika start I'll lift my arm n the iron'll raise quicker than if I we're magneto

you could probably carve decent punches out of these, but as they are, they don't hit that hard cuz the wording waters down the heft of the punch.

nik-A - thought the opener coulda been more direct. Scraps/leftovers is cool. Setup on the Pee Wee Herman line was weird - "they mouth to see me freed". Clouds/water down was cool too.

Vote -- nik-A with better execution, more polish.

Unfukwitable · 01-16-2016, 08:03 PM

Nothing

vs.

Guess u didn’t learn from PM’ing me ya rhymes for some tips
I’m a Bad teacher… but Cameron Diaz musta taught u how to word ur lines like a bitch
I got 5 hoes in my bed using they mouth to see me freed
The life of a player… u askin Paul Reubens for a hand to compete in the Peewee league

this was kinda light ones wording just threw his verse for a loop and his opener was bad use of wp, Nik came with some quick fix material but was enough to get the W to me. v/nik-A

Bash · 01-16-2016, 08:47 PM

Magneto

Vs

Opener
Leftovers

V--Ill Nik. Concepts were executed better. Lotto rushed his drop n it showed

Cred · 01-17-2016, 06:07 PM

Magneto was cool

vs

First two punches

Not the best battle, nika did enough jus to slughtly edge this one. Tbh nothing really caught my eye, but i guess niks opener was lotb

Vote ill nika

Saint · 01-17-2016, 07:36 PM

Have nika on this one, lotto's wording let what lines he could've made decent fall flat.. magneto was aiight.. but that reminded me of some Charlie clips shit lol..

nika opener and peewee were good enough to take it..

vote nika

Schadenfreude · 01-17-2016, 07:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

Jordan fetish, magneto

A lot of misses, I almost didn't even quote magneto, cuz I've used the concept before.

Quote:

Originally Posted by ill nik-A

Opener, Paul Reubens, closer

Lazy verse, but still more effective than your opponent's.

Overall ILL NIK-A outclassed the kid.

murda sho · 01-17-2016, 08:59 PM

Nik

Guess u didn’t learn from PM’ing me ya rhymes for some tips
I’m a Bad teacher… but Cameron Diaz musta taught u how to word ur lines like a bitch
I love to fight like I write so why would u wanna test, soldier
been in many scraps… but fuck good punches I’ll beat this wack loser with leftovers

u think u have a chance at the impossible in text all is right
I’ll wipe the lotto smirk…. & have u share the second prize with the rest of the site

Lotto Smirk

ya girl so ugly, it must be why u don't fuck her lately
bitch got bulldog features that could star her alongside phill on the pet show w/ dr Katy

thugs laugh at Nika n after last week to us ya just a big joke
cus u handled bash n ironically u do when dealers mug u off w/ the shit coke

v/ Nik.. man Lotto you completely butchered that Magneto line to the point it was hilarious to read... chill with all those extra words dude you're fuckin up the sting of your punches... Nik started off on fire then kinda cooled down but he had enough for get the win here and his verse was overall better to me also

slech · 01-17-2016, 10:28 PM

u a king that's past his prime, take ya place & destroy ya fortress
this'll be a heir removal but one that won't sort out your sad receding baldness
-cool-
u fat & ugly while trust me my body's sportsman slick
for you to get one it'll take more trainers than your weird fetish for Jordan kicks
-eh ok-
ya girl so ugly, it must be why u don't fuck her lately
bitch got bulldog features that could star her alongside phill on the pet show w/ dr Katy
-haha allright, cool-
got thugs that'll shoot for me so TRUST u don't want that heat bro
cus if nika start I'll lift my arm n the iron'll raise quicker than if I we're magneto
-nah-
thugs laugh at Nika n after last week to us ya just a big joke
cus u handled bash n ironically u do when dealers mug u off w/ the shit coke
-eh--

Guess u didn’t learn from PM’ing me ya rhymes for some tips
I’m a Bad teacher… but Cameron Diaz musta taught u how to word ur lines like a bitch
---lol ok-
I love to fight like I write so why would u wanna test, soldier
been in many scraps… but fuck good punches I’ll beat this wack loser with leftovers
---nah dont like how was this worded-
I got 5 hoes in my bed using they mouth to see me freed
The life of a player… u askin Paul Reubens for a hand to compete in the Peewee league
-decent-
u’re just a delay in the game so why would I bother clown
u got ur head in the clouds & too dumb to notice ya concepts are water down
-dont like this-
u think u have a chance at the impossible in text all is right
I’ll wipe the lotto smirk…. & have u share the second prize with the rest of the site
-lmfao cool-

3-2 on quotes. ill nika taking this with over all more hits than misses.

01-12-2016, 05:42 PM	#1
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	ill nik-A 1-0 Vs Lotto Smirk 1-0 - NIKA WINS NBL Season 8 Week 2 Due FRIDAYFriday Minimum - 10 lines Max - 16 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @ill nik-A @Lotto Smirk docked -2 votes for not voting last week. __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

01-12-2016, 06:54 PM	#2
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	Welcome! 10 __________________ Grumpy old man.

01-15-2016, 10:36 AM	#3
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	10 sent @Allen Knight @Lotto Smirk __________________ Grumpy old man.

01-16-2016, 12:51 PM	#4
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665833	u a king that's past his prime, take ya place & destroy ya fortress this'll be a heir removal but one that won't sort out your sad receding baldness u fat & ugly while trust me my body's sportsman slick for you to get one it'll take more trainers than your weird fetish for Jordan kicks ya girl so ugly, it must be why u don't fuck her lately bitch got bulldog features that could star her alongside phill on the pet show w/ dr Katy got thugs that'll shoot for me so TRUST u don't want that heat bro cus if nika start I'll lift my arm n the iron'll raise quicker than if I we're magneto thugs laugh at Nika n after last week to us ya just a big joke cus u handled bash n ironically u do when dealers mug u off w/ the shit coke Meh I tried g/l bro Last edited by Lotto Smirk; 01-16-2016 at 01:27 PM.

01-16-2016, 01:31 PM	#5
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	Guess u didn’t learn from PM’ing me ya rhymes for some tips I’m a Bad teacher… but Cameron Diaz musta taught u how to word ur lines like a bitch I love to fight like I write so why would u wanna test, soldier been in many scraps… but fuck good punches I’ll beat this wack loser with leftovers I got 5 hoes in my bed using they mouth to see me freed The life of a player… u askin Paul Reubens for a hand to compete in the Peewee league u’re just a delay in the game so why would I bother clown u got ur head in the clouds & too dumb to notice ya concepts are water down u think u have a chance at the impossible in text all is right I’ll wipe the lotto smirk…. & have u share the second prize with the rest of the site __________________ Grumpy old man.

01-16-2016, 08:03 PM	#7
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	Nothing vs. Guess u didn’t learn from PM’ing me ya rhymes for some tips I’m a Bad teacher… but Cameron Diaz musta taught u how to word ur lines like a bitch I got 5 hoes in my bed using they mouth to see me freed The life of a player… u askin Paul Reubens for a hand to compete in the Peewee league this was kinda light ones wording just threw his verse for a loop and his opener was bad use of wp, Nik came with some quick fix material but was enough to get the W to me. v/nik-A __________________ WICKeD

01-16-2016, 08:47 PM	#8
Bash Barrin' Out Join Date: Nov 2014 Posts: 577 Battle Record: 16-15 Champed - Fight Night 5 Rep Power: 13649171	Magneto Vs Opener Leftovers V--Ill Nik. Concepts were executed better. Lotto rushed his drop n it showed __________________ "You thinkin what im thinkin?" - Danson "Aim for the bushes?" -Highsmith

01-17-2016, 06:07 PM	#9
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899383	Magneto was cool vs First two punches Not the best battle, nika did enough jus to slughtly edge this one. Tbh nothing really caught my eye, but i guess niks opener was lotb Vote ill nika

01-17-2016, 07:36 PM	#10
Saint Scream Join Date: Jun 2015 Posts: 3,251 Battle Record: 63-35 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Picture Roast - Battle Royale Tournament - NBL Pic Roast - Netcees Battle League - NBL Season 11 - HoT Roast - BAL Roast - Tag Team Tourney - NBL Barcotic Cypher - SOL Pic Roast - BA Tag - XXXtentacion Roast - 1-2 LR Champ Rep Power: 22535868	Have nika on this one, lotto's wording let what lines he could've made decent fall flat.. magneto was aiight.. but that reminded me of some Charlie clips shit lol.. nika opener and peewee were good enough to take it.. vote nika

01-17-2016, 08:59 PM	#12
murda sho Shonami Surf Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,069 Battle Record: 24-16 Champed - Bad Blood II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV - 1-2 Punch League - Shadow Boxing Rep Power: 42758482	Nik Guess u didn’t learn from PM’ing me ya rhymes for some tips I’m a Bad teacher… but Cameron Diaz musta taught u how to word ur lines like a bitch I love to fight like I write so why would u wanna test, soldier been in many scraps… but fuck good punches I’ll beat this wack loser with leftovers u think u have a chance at the impossible in text all is right I’ll wipe the lotto smirk…. & have u share the second prize with the rest of the site Lotto Smirk ya girl so ugly, it must be why u don't fuck her lately bitch got bulldog features that could star her alongside phill on the pet show w/ dr Katy thugs laugh at Nika n after last week to us ya just a big joke cus u handled bash n ironically u do when dealers mug u off w/ the shit coke v/ Nik.. man Lotto you completely butchered that Magneto line to the point it was hilarious to read... chill with all those extra words dude you're fuckin up the sting of your punches... Nik started off on fire then kinda cooled down but he had enough for get the win here and his verse was overall better to me also __________________ "aim impeccable if I miss somebody I aint seen em in a while"

01-17-2016, 10:28 PM	#13
slech > Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 150 Battle Record: 1-3 Rep Power: 3807832	u a king that's past his prime, take ya place & destroy ya fortress this'll be a heir removal but one that won't sort out your sad receding baldness -cool- u fat & ugly while trust me my body's sportsman slick for you to get one it'll take more trainers than your weird fetish for Jordan kicks -eh ok- ya girl so ugly, it must be why u don't fuck her lately bitch got bulldog features that could star her alongside phill on the pet show w/ dr Katy -haha allright, cool- got thugs that'll shoot for me so TRUST u don't want that heat bro cus if nika start I'll lift my arm n the iron'll raise quicker than if I we're magneto -nah- thugs laugh at Nika n after last week to us ya just a big joke cus u handled bash n ironically u do when dealers mug u off w/ the shit coke -eh-- Guess u didn’t learn from PM’ing me ya rhymes for some tips I’m a Bad teacher… but Cameron Diaz musta taught u how to word ur lines like a bitch ---lol ok- I love to fight like I write so why would u wanna test, soldier been in many scraps… but fuck good punches I’ll beat this wack loser with leftovers ---nah dont like how was this worded- I got 5 hoes in my bed using they mouth to see me freed The life of a player… u askin Paul Reubens for a hand to compete in the Peewee league -decent- u’re just a delay in the game so why would I bother clown u got ur head in the clouds & too dumb to notice ya concepts are water down -dont like this- u think u have a chance at the impossible in text all is right I’ll wipe the lotto smirk…. & have u share the second prize with the rest of the site -lmfao cool- 3-2 on quotes. ill nika taking this with over all more hits than misses.