peter rose

brokenhal0 · 11-28-2015, 07:10 PM

I watch in ways strange apart of the days paint
start your part of the days change pick apart
the same frame your heart takes the load
i escape the moans groans of waves that's slow

cling to extremes occult more hits then peter rose
make you eat your toes eat the souls like kruger
i give them homes enslavement zones pushed in a
thorn bush more kush it smell like some pond scum

dharma robbin egg blue cloud spit the truth out
44 mag knock the back of your tooth out
you milhouse in itchy and scratchy scratchin and itchin
like a kitten it gets cloudy when these owls hunting your pigeons

dont fight it let it go accept that witch you see infront
creator of deceiving dust free another lead em up
see a sucker we beat em up i see the suspect
he exists with in my thought mind its a complex
no contest cook your eggs and fry your omelettes

critical man at the moment division expands
your existence gets banned it will expand
like distant rivers and lands glyphs pictures in sand
laughing at death while he pissed in his pants

shakin higher pitch walk a isle blissed my style shift
death in his wish millennium kiss wild skips a frame
risk your dame thinking a dame to risk exchanged for a quainter gift
putrid mist flowers point to me and say hey! take a sniff

i peep your color break the beaker boil point
i dont try to escape within others never a fuck follow boy
alloy in the macaroni and cheese peeped your hive in back of the Bee's
capture the greed bathing on rocks capture degrees
invisible maps lead me back to the scene....

Exis · 11-29-2015, 12:51 AM

Hate that I'm sayin' this but you should write this in paragraph format...it flows so much better like that, I copied this & read it that way...shit was nice man.

Tbh didn't really feel the opener, thought word usage was off, the rest was str8 tho...very enjoyable.

Stay upwards.

Wise Wiggles · 11-30-2015, 11:04 AM

Ugh. Raw. Awesome. Thanks.

11-28-2015, 07:10 PM	#1
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 523 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	peter rose I watch in ways strange apart of the days paint start your part of the days change pick apart the same frame your heart takes the load i escape the moans groans of waves that's slow cling to extremes occult more hits then peter rose make you eat your toes eat the souls like kruger i give them homes enslavement zones pushed in a thorn bush more kush it smell like some pond scum dharma robbin egg blue cloud spit the truth out 44 mag knock the back of your tooth out you milhouse in itchy and scratchy scratchin and itchin like a kitten it gets cloudy when these owls hunting your pigeons dont fight it let it go accept that witch you see infront creator of deceiving dust free another lead em up see a sucker we beat em up i see the suspect he exists with in my thought mind its a complex no contest cook your eggs and fry your omelettes critical man at the moment division expands your existence gets banned it will expand like distant rivers and lands glyphs pictures in sand laughing at death while he pissed in his pants shakin higher pitch walk a isle blissed my style shift death in his wish millennium kiss wild skips a frame risk your dame thinking a dame to risk exchanged for a quainter gift putrid mist flowers point to me and say hey! take a sniff i peep your color break the beaker boil point i dont try to escape within others never a fuck follow boy alloy in the macaroni and cheese peeped your hive in back of the Bee's capture the greed bathing on rocks capture degrees invisible maps lead me back to the scene.... Last edited by brokenhal0; 10-14-2019 at 07:34 AM.

11-30-2015, 11:04 AM	#3
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Ugh. Raw. Awesome. Thanks. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

11-29-2015, 12:51 AM	#2
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Hate that I'm sayin' this but you should write this in paragraph format...it flows so much better like that, I copied this & read it that way...shit was nice man. Tbh didn't really feel the opener, thought word usage was off, the rest was str8 tho...very enjoyable. Stay upwards.