_____ vs Unfukwitable - UNFUK WINS

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Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 11th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@_____ @Unfukwitable

[Greed]

10

[Unfukwitable]

checkmate.

[Greed]

Fucking war? Bish you wont score a point in this game
Underscore is not only in my favor.... its litterally my name
Think you a soldier Beetle Bailey? Believing you clever really slayed me
Take the wit out of your name and it describes how every female treat you daily
All yo broads is elephants and all yo songs irrelevant
Unfuckings believable as lil waynes the president
My lines is hella nectar, and my beats are hella mean
Altho I never doubted u'd cellar record when chances are thats the only place they'd ever be
Ask my ncgs if they wanna see a dead body.. lead em to the spot you at
.. They be like damn son whered you find this like a hot new track

[Unfukwitable]

GAME TIME!
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tryna call my girl a slut machine? I'll buck the thing, now he's slumbering,
KFC style!; over breast a biscuit'll make 'Gree Z' til he's left w/ a couple wings.
He's all on Karaoke's dick, this shit is queer madness!,
For men usually the box is the downfall, But in ur case it was that Kare package.
this suckas style is non-original, never read no dope writs from'ya,
so it makes sense that ur name is _______ , u're just'a mark w/ no signature.
he can't stomach the pressure; fuck them gay quotes that he spits;
funny he needs the Heimlich b4 he raps, But he loves to choke on a dick.
He's lyrically fatigued, this kid ain't winnin w/ bogus written;
Unless this fags using a selfie stick, he's unable to snap & go the distance!.
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shovel✔
body bag✔
hearse✔

[Unfukwitable]

_____ aka Greed

[8===D~~~~(}:]

Fucking war? Bish you wont score a point in this game
Underscore is not only in my favor.... its litterally my name
nah man
Think you a soldier Beetle Bailey? Believing you clever really slayed me
Take the wit out of your name and it describes how every female treat you daily
ok decent
All yo broads is elephants and all yo songs irrelevant
Unfuckings believable as lil waynes the president
nah
My lines is hella nectar, and my beats are hella mean
Altho I never doubted u'd cellar record when chances are thats the only place they'd ever be
alright
Ask my ncgs if they wanna see a dead body.. lead em to the spot you at
.. They be like damn son whered you find this like a hot new track
nah man


Vs


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tryna call my girl a slut machine? I'll buck the thing, now he's slumbering,
KFC style!; over breast a biscuit'll make 'Gree Z' til he's left w/ a couple wings.
this sounded good until you forced the nameplay, decent at best
He's all on Karaoke's dick, this shit is queer madness!,
For men usually the box is the downfall, But in ur case it was that Kare package.
lol nice I liked this a lot
this suckas style is non-original, never read no dope writs from'ya,
so it makes sense that ur name is _______ , u're just'a mark w/ no signature.
alright
he can't stomach the pressure; fuck them gay quotes that he spits;
funny he needs the Heimlich b4 he raps, But he loves to choke on a dick.
nah
He's lyrically fatigued, this kid ain't winnin w/ bogus written;
Unless this fags using a selfie stick, he's unable to snap & go the distance!.
ehh this is meh

I see unfuk topping this with one extra quote. His good lines were much better than Greed's IMO, greed I feel you came a lot better when you battled me last week, thought you were gonna win tbh, but this week you lacked concepts and execution my boy. Unfuckable wins this.

Vote: unfuk
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[Bust]

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Wit out was cool I liked it
Cellar ok,

Really that's all I liked from ur verse rest was bland to me

Unfuk

Opener was cool till I thought no body says over breast they say over ass or pussy or bitches
Kare package was fire
Closer ok

Iunno I got blank here I just felt un didn't execute his bars to the full potential it's very close but I got blank barely

Vote ---------

[Sn00p]

Fucking war? Bish you wont score a point in this game
Underscore is not only in my favor.... its litterally my name
^this is decent, but self nameplays have to be really dope to hit
Think you a soldier Beetle Bailey? Believing you clever really slayed me
Take the wit out of your name and it describes how every female treat you daily
^the idea is there, but this coulda been flipped much better. smth like, "take the wit outta ur name to make it match what every girl's been calling u for years". and maybe have another connection w/ the "take wit out". like take wit out, dumb or take wit out, brain out or smth. but u see where i'm going w/ this. i kinda feel like this w/ a lotta ur bars. like, they could be so dope becuz u got concepts and u know how to formulate them, but u never go the extra mile to make it into the top punch of the week it cud'a been. oh well. this was still decent
All yo broads is elephants and all yo songs irrelevant
Unfuckings believable as lil waynes the president
^again, kinda lazy
My lines is hella nectar, and my beats are hella mean
Altho I never doubted u'd cellar record when chances are thats the only place they'd ever be
^this cud'a been better too, but it's solid still
Ask my ncgs if they wanna see a dead body.. lead em to the spot you at
.. They be like damn son whered you find this like a hot new track
^punchline connection is decent. but why would they ask where u found it when u just fucking showed em. lol. again. this isn't even a horrible line, but u cud'a done much more w/ it, and it feels kinda lazy

vs.

tryna call my girl a slut machine? I'll buck the thing, now he's slumbering,
KFC style!; over breast a biscuit'll make 'Gree Z' til he's left w/ a couple wings.
^lots of connections. sometimes this works rly well (see neigh's new style), but sometimes it just comes out as messy. in this instance, i think the line would'a benefitted from being more concise and just focusing on the wp. still decent tho
He's all on Karaoke's dick, this shit is queer madness!,
For men usually the box is the downfall, But in ur case it was that Kare package.
^cool
this suckas style is non-original, never read no dope writs from'ya,
so it makes sense that ur name is _______ , u're just'a mark w/ no signature.
^okay. cud'a done more w/ it
he can't stomach the pressure; fuck them gay quotes that he spits;
funny he needs the Heimlich b4 he raps, But he loves to choke on a dick.
^kinda decent, but need heimlich before he raps doesnt rly make that much sense
He's lyrically fatigued, this kid ain't winnin w/ bogus written;
Unless this fags using a selfie stick, he's unable to snap & go the distance!.
^this coulda been really dope. was still decent. but the idea is dope and the flip itself was only solid.

well, kare package was the lotb imo and the best standout. apart from that u both had some nice ideas that needed that little bit of work to be quotes. like, there were a lotta lines which had concepts that made me go, damn, this is a dope idea. but then the flip didn't live up to the potential. so yea. i know u can do it. just don't get lazy lol. anyways. i got unfuk here. like i said, he had the lotb that stood out over the rest of the lines. & that's what decided it for me. close battle, so props to both.
v/unfuk

[murda sho]

Unfuk

tryna call my girl a slut machine? I'll buck the thing, now he's slumbering,
KFC style!; over breast a biscuit'll make 'Gree Z' til he's left w/ a couple wings.
He's all on Karaoke's dick, this shit is queer madness!,
For men usually the box is the downfall, But in ur case it was that Kare PACKAGE.

He's lyrically fatigued, this kid ain't winnin w/ bogus written;
Unless this fags using a selfie stick, he's unable to SNAP & go the distance!.


_______

Think you a soldier Beetle Bailey? Believing you clever really slayed me
Take the wit out of YOUR name and it describes how every female treat you daily

My lines is hella nectar, and my beats are hella mean
Altho I never doubted u'd cellar record when chances are thats the only place they'd ever be


v/ Unfuk... just edged it here but both verses had the same measure of power with the punches Unfuk just had more that connected

[~RustyGunZ~]

Snap and go

Vs

Idgi

Vote unfuk

[Lotto Smirk]

tryna call my girl a slut machine? I'll buck the thing, now he's slumbering,
KFC style!; over breast a biscuit'll make 'Gree Z' til he's left w/ a couple wings.
He's all on Karaoke's dick, this shit is queer madness!,
For men usually the box is the downfall, But in ur case it was that Kare PACKAGE.
He's lyrically fatigued, this kid ain't winnin w/ bogus written;
Unless this fags using a selfie stick, he's unable to SNAP & go the distance!.

vs

Think you a soldier Beetle Bailey? Believing you clever really slayed me
Take the wit out of YOUR name and it describes how every female treat you daily

Kare package and snap & go took this for me i think un could of come alot harder but he did enough to take this

vote - unfukwitable

[john hensley]

Think you a soldier Beetle Bailey? Believing you clever really slayed me
Take the wit out of YOUR name and it describes how every female treat you daily
My lines is hella nectar, and my beats are hella mean
Altho I never doubted u'd cellar record when chances are thats the only place they'd ever be

Vs.


He's all on Karaoke's dick, this shit is queer madness!,
For men usually the box is the downfall, But in ur case it was that Kare package.
He's lyrically fatigued, this kid ain't winnin w/ bogus written;
Unless this fags using a selfie stick, he's unable to snap & go the distance!.


This isle closer to me than the votes say but still got unfuckwitable winning. Underscore got lazy with a few lines but his rhyme schem was solid and the unfuckable line was jokes.

Still, unfuk was a little more consistent.

[Destroyer]

wit out your name

vs

Kare package, closer

greed kinda fell flat. cellar record? fuck outta here

v/unfuk