Burd 1-3 vs murda sho 2-1 (PICS) - ORC WINS

[Sharp]

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due Thursday, June 11th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread


First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@Burd @Orc @murda sho

[Orc]

ya change my name to Orc

ppl vote against Burd but they're afraid to vote against Orc

n @murda sho this is pics yea?

[murda sho]

yea ima try the pics out bro... and fuck that keep his name as Burd so his dickriders don't recognize him haha

[Orc]

throw a pic up my dude. i will when i get home asap

[Orc]

idk why it's small, i can try resize it or post a diff one if u don't wana use this @murda sho

[murda sho]

[murda sho]

im not sure if this showed up... how many bars we going? @Orc

[Orc]

Yea it worked man let's go 14

[murda sho]

Can you make your pic bigger? @Orc

[Sharp]

@murda sho orc sent me 14

[murda sho]

word up ima either drop late as fuck tonight or tomorrow... I'm shooting for tonight though I'm watching this cavs game and shit

[murda sho]

Originally Posted by Orc

ya change my name to Orc

ppl vote against Burd but they're afraid to vote against Orc

Burden aka Orc

My first pic battle & i'm using you to get these rocks off squirt
I'll have Bur buried so bad it'd look worse than that cheap knock off shirt
You the one with the goons!? I should beat ur ass at that bar cause u lied
Look even your shadow only has your back part of the time
He was a biter, it really sucks cause you're relevant, why jock?
I guess the Hunger Forced u into it so much u start resemblin FryLock
We used to be cool we had peeps loathin how the clips just keep smokin
But I see bro that you were nothing but a bitch in sheep's clothing
You was broke and a stan I gave u confidence now I'm showing you cans
Cause these arms go over the shoulder, while that's just how u pose with ur man
Throw up them hands, you know in reality you'd drop so do not fight
Button his dreams... i'd hope to god he'd do that to his top right
You're such a queer, but I was mistaken while ur in that chair with ur liquor
Cause with my earrings I thought i'd have the biggest square in a picture


Zip Him Up!!

[Orc]

Damnnn boy. The ink you got is some stupid dumb shit
Ironic u screaming 'Zip Em Up!!' & it's all u hear w/ THOSE tattoos in public
U Lime to the death. & I fuck w/ Ron of War, that guy is a vet!
.. it's just reaaaally fucking creepy u got Gods Child on the side of ya neck.
Looking like Taylor Gang & actin' the knowitall are feats of his
But trusttt that Khalifa man dead in seconds just for thinkin' that he a Wiz
This is the lesbian y'all clamour for!? NC's own Mr. Man of War...
He's a Square Peg ina Round Hole. & so is the Fake Earring this faggot wore
U ain't a soldier Sho. Justa frail boy with NO hope in votes.
Shittt even Orc is Blacker Denim, & we ain't talkin' bout our chosen Coats
He takes pics w/ blunts to shock kids here. &&god, it's queer
mannn quit Blowing Smoke -- u do that every time u say you're not Midtier
Ur folks told u bout Employment & now u tryna find shit
But they said Keep an Ear out for Cash. not get a Tatt of the Sign beside it

GANG!

[El Muffin]

I fuck w/ u both. I'll do the honors


Murda
Opener lol nice np
Shadow was cool but pretty nonsensical. What u mean part of the time. Prolly a rhetorical question. .I think u added that for hilarity. I sense it. Not bad
flylock just was worded badly to me. It didn't culminate into anything for me
sheep's clothing was hard af tho
arm over shoulder?
he's not posing like that tbo? Looks like he's brushing that guy. Not arm over shoulder tbh? Am I blind? Concept was fire but I had to like zoom my eyes to mk sure his arm was over his shoulder. .n it isnt?
Button ok
biggest square abv Avg

Cool drop. Off n on but one bar had me like wtf

Sheep's clothing was ether


Orc
zip him up. Ok
err ok so ur alluding to the fact that he has gods child on the side of neck because of Ron errrr no think not
Khalifa was kinda forced to me originally. The more I say it the better it sounds tho. It's Ehhh ok
square peg was creative . I like
blacker denim was pretty cool
not mid tier was nice.
closer bang


Interesting battle.

I think sho did pretty well for his first pic battle. Had its ups n downs.

Orc started off shaky but his last 6 were enough to seal.

Lotb sheep's clothing tho. That was just hard shit.


V/orc

[Wanderer]

Burden aka Orc

My first pic battle & i'm using you to get these rocks off squirt
I'll have Bur buried so bad it'd look worse than that cheap knock off shirt
cool
You the one with the goons!? I should beat ur ass at that bar cause u lied
Look even your shadow only has your back part of the time
when you really break it down it doesn't make sense but was still funny
He was a biter, it really sucks cause you're relevant, why jock?
I guess the Hunger Forced u into it so much u start resemblin FryLock
sorry. The Englishman no comprende
We used to be cool we had peeps loathin how the clips just keep smokin
But I see bro that you were nothing but a bitch in sheep's clothing
cool
You was broke and a stan I gave u confidence now I'm showing you cans
Cause these arms go over the shoulder, while that's just how u pose with ur man
forced, not the bar itself, just the analysis of the pic for a punch
Throw up them hands, you know in reality you'd drop so do not fight
Button his dreams... i'd hope to god he'd do that to his top right
haha I thought this wtf at forgetting to finish dressing yourself
You're such a queer, but I was mistaken while ur in that chair with ur liquor
Cause with my earrings I thought i'd have the biggest square in a picture
ok


Zip Him Up!![/QUOTE]

Vs

Originally Posted by Orc

Damnnn boy. The ink you got is some stupid dumb shit
Ironic u screaming 'Zip Em Up!!' & it's all u hear w/ THOSE tattoos in public
haha cool
U Lime to the death. & I fuck w/ Ron of War, that guy is a vet!
.. it's just reaaaally fucking creepy u got Gods Child on the side of ya neck.
ehh i guess
Looking like Taylor Gang & actin' the knowitall are feats of his
But trusttt that Khalifa man dead in seconds just for thinkin' that he a Wiz
wasn't feeling
This is the lesbian y'all clamour for!? NC's own Mr. Man of War...
He's a Square Peg ina Round Hole. & so is the Fake Earring this faggot wore
same again
U ain't a soldier Sho. Justa frail boy with NO hope in votes.
Shittt even Orc is Blacker Denim, & we ain't talkin' bout our chosen Coats
very nice
He takes pics w/ blunts to shock kids here. &&god, it's queer
mannn quit Blowing Smoke -- u do that every time u say you're not Midtier
cool
Ur folks told u bout Employment & now u tryna find shit
But they said Keep an Ear out for Cash. not get a Tatt of the Sign beside it
lol ok

GANG!

Cool battle guys. When I break it down to what I felt were the hardest I've got 4 bars for each. When I then compare those bars I think There could have been 2 LOTB's with Sheeps Clothing & Blacker Denim. This could definitely go either & I almost didn't wanna vote on this cos it's so close BUT.. I think I preferred Orcs verse by a hair. Execution ever so slightly winning it for the dude

V/Orc

[Amen.]

Best/More effective bars:

My first pic battle & i'm using you to get these rocks off squirt
I'll have Bur buried so bad it'd look worse than that cheap knock off shirt
- Tough, I fucks w/ it...
We used to be cool we had peeps loathin how the clips just keep smokin
But I see bro that you were nothing but a bitch in sheep's clothing
- Dope pic reference. Could have used a better set up, IMO.
You was broke and a stan I gave u confidence now I'm showing you cans
Cause these arms go over the shoulder, while that's just how u pose with ur man
- Don't really see an arm over his shoulder, had there been, it would have been a dope flip/picture reference/gun bar.

Bars that had potential but fell flat, IMO:

You the one with the goons!? I should beat ur ass at that bar cause u lied
Look even your shadow only has your back part of the time
- I think this had potnetial. Execution, IMO was kind of mild, tho.
Throw up them hands, you know in reality you'd drop so do not fight
Button his dreams... i'd hope to god he'd do that to his top right
- Same as last bar, execution a little off/mild.

vs

Best/More effective bars:

This is the lesbian y'all clamour for!? NC's own Mr. Man of War...
He's a Square Peg ina Round Hole. & so is the Fake Earring this faggot wore
- This was pretty cool picture reference.
U ain't a soldier Sho. Justa frail boy with NO hope in votes.
Shittt even Orc is Blacker Denim, & we ain't talkin' bout our chosen Coats
- Lol, again... Dope picture reference and solid flip on it.
He takes pics w/ blunts to shock kids here. &&god, it's queer
mannn quit Blowing Smoke -- u do that every time u say you're not Midtier
- Dope picture reference. Tough bar here & I fucks w/ this. LOTB, IMO.
Ur folks told u bout Employment & now u tryna find shit
But they said Keep an Ear out for Cash. not get a Tatt of the Sign beside it
- This was slick & a dope picture reference.

Bars that had potential but fell flat, IMO:


Damnnn boy. The ink you got is some stupid dumb shit
Ironic u screaming 'Zip Em Up!!' & it's all u hear w/ THOSE tattoos in public
- Didn't really consider this an insult, could have been a little harsher w/ it.
U Lime to the death. & I fuck w/ Ron of War, that guy is a vet!
.. it's just reaaaally fucking creepy u got Gods Child on the side of ya neck.
- Same as above.
Looking like Taylor Gang & actin' the knowitall are feats of his
But trusttt that Khalifa man dead in seconds just for thinkin' that he a Wiz
- Cal leave a man dead? No wayyyyy. Forced as fuck, IMO.

OVERALL: Pretty solid picture battle, ladies. I think both these niggas did well, here. Murda, for a 1st picture battle, not bad man. But all in all, IMO - Orc takes this. He referenced the picture a lot better and basically did so with ever bar he dropped. Had some bangers, as well. Murda had some bangers, but also had some bars I didn't like as were, Orc's entire verse was pretty much nice even tho he started off slow, but closed out with some fire. Even his potential bars were dope picture references, but he slipped up on executing them. Blowing smoke bar was dope and LOTB for me... Murda's arm over the shoulder bar was dope, had there been an arm over Orc's shoulder. IDK if it's the work desktop but I don't see an arm over his shoulder, so that was just a regular gun bar for me. With that being said...

Orc got it

[8===D~~~~(}:]

Burden aka Orc

My first pic battle & i'm using you to get these rocks off squirt
I'll have Bur buried so bad it'd look worse than that cheap knock off shirt
nice
You the one with the goons!? I should beat ur ass at that bar cause u lied
Look even your shadow only has your back part of the time
ehhhh
He was a biter, it really sucks cause you're relevant, why jock?
I guess the Hunger Forced u into it so much u start resemblin FryLock
lmao yooo I see it
We used to be cool we had peeps loathin how the clips just keep smokin
But I see bro that you were nothing but a bitch in sheep's clothing
good here
You was broke and a stan I gave u confidence now I'm showing you cans
Cause these arms go over the shoulder, while that's just how u pose with ur man
dont see it, fell
Throw up them hands, you know in reality you'd drop so do not fight
Button his dreams... i'd hope to god he'd do that to his top right
ehh not feelin this
You're such a queer, but I was mistaken while ur in that chair with ur liquor
Cause with my earrings I thought i'd have the biggest square in a picture
ok decent


Vs



Damnnn boy. The ink you got is some stupid dumb shit
Ironic u screaming 'Zip Em Up!!' & it's all u hear w/ THOSE tattoos in public
ehh not feelin really
U Lime to the death. & I fuck w/ Ron of War, that guy is a vet!
.. it's just reaaaally fucking creepy u got Gods Child on the side of ya neck.
Not feelin this either
Looking like Taylor Gang & actin' the knowitall are feats of his
But trusttt that Khalifa man dead in seconds just for thinkin' that he a Wiz
i was just thinking bout this wp (cuh leave uh) amen said it wrong. This bar is good to me
This is the lesbian y'all clamour for!? NC's own Mr. Man of War...
He's a Square Peg ina Round Hole. & so is the Fake Earring this faggot wore
decent
U ain't a soldier Sho. Justa frail boy with NO hope in votes.
Shittt even Orc is Blacker Denim, & we ain't talkin' bout our chosen Coats
haha dope
He takes pics w/ blunts to shock kids here. &&god, it's queer
mannn quit Blowing Smoke -- u do that every time u say you're not Midtier
alright good here
Ur folks told u bout Employment & now u tryna find shit
But they said Keep an Ear out for Cash. not get a Tatt of the Sign beside it
pretty good


This battle was cool, I thought murda was gonna have this in the bag while I was halfway done reading Orc's verse but the last portion of his verse was good af.

Murda had: bur buried, frylock, Sheeps clothing
Burd had: blacker denim, mid tier, ear for cash

I have it tied on nice quotes but when it comes to decent lines and misses I have Orc edging it by a bit. If murda would have had one more nice line he would have taken it for me. But for now

Vote: Orc

[Greed]

Burden aka Orc

My first pic battle & i'm using you to get these rocks off squirt
I'll have Bur buried so bad it'd look worse than that cheap knock off shirt
Good start

You the one with the goons!? I should beat ur ass at that bar cause u lied
Look even your shadow only has your back part of the time
Okay

He was a biter, it really sucks cause you're relevant, why jock?
I guess the Hunger Forced u into it so much u start resemblin FryLock
Ehh

We used to be cool we had peeps loathin how the clips just keep smokin
But I see bro that you were nothing but a bitch in sheep's clothing
Ok

You was broke and a stan I gave u confidence now I'm showing you cans
Cause these arms go over the shoulder, while that's just how u pose with ur man
Lol

Throw up them hands, you know in reality you'd drop so do not fight
Button his dreams... i'd hope to god he'd do that to his top right
Heh okay

You're such a queer, but I was mistaken while ur in that chair with ur liquor
Cause with my earrings I thought i'd have the biggest square in a picture
This was cool but it could have been better


Zip Him Up!!

________________
"I see these rap sites prevailin, got a nigga's life unveilin
But I can sight the jealous i'm too on point like Vikings helmets"

Zip Em Up!




Damnnn boy. The ink you got is some stupid dumb shit
Ironic u screaming 'Zip Em Up!!' & it's all u hear w/ THOSE tattoos in public
Im not sure i get the exact meaning but its okay either way i think of it

U Lime to the death. & I fuck w/ Ron of War, that guy is a vet!
.. it's just reaaaally fucking creepy u got Gods Child on the side of ya neck.
Ehh

Looking like Taylor Gang & actin' the knowitall are feats of his
But trusttt that Khalifa man dead in seconds just for thinkin' that he a Wiz
I think this was a good idea.. assuming its cuh leave a man..

This is the lesbian y'all clamour for!? NC's own Mr. Man of War...
He's a Square Peg ina Round Hole. & so is the Fake Earring this faggot wore
Hahaha

U ain't a soldier Sho. Justa frail boy with NO hope in votes.
Shittt even Orc is Blacker Denim, & we ain't talkin' bout our chosen Coats
Slick

He takes pics w/ blunts to shock kids here. &&god, it's queer
mannn quit Blowing Smoke -- u do that every time u say you're not Midtier
You snapping now

Ur folks told u bout Employment & now u tryna find shit
But they said Keep an Ear out for Cash. not get a Tatt of the Sign beside it
Meh


Burd picked up in the middle. Didnt appreciate some of the preemptive/defensive lines from sho they seemed lazy.

I got Orc

[Sn00p]

My first pic battle & i'm using you to get these rocks off squirt
I'll have Bur buried so bad it'd look worse than that cheap knock off shirt
^i used a bur bury line before, so this didn't hit as hard to me. but not a bad line
You the one with the goons!? I should beat ur ass at that bar cause u lied
Look even your shadow only has your back part of the time
^lol cool. mb flip it w/ halfway or smth? becuz the time part doesnt rlllly make sense
He was a biter, it really sucks cause you're relevant, why jock?
I guess the Hunger Forced u into it so much u start resemblin FryLock
^aite
We used to be cool we had peeps loathin how the clips just keep smokin
But I see bro that you were nothing but a bitch in sheep's clothing
^lol word
You was broke and a stan I gave u confidence now I'm showing you cans
Cause these arms go over the shoulder, while that's just how u pose with ur man
^nice
Throw up them hands, you know in reality you'd drop so do not fight
Button his dreams... i'd hope to god he'd do that to his top right
^aite
You're such a queer, but I was mistaken while ur in that chair with ur liquor
Cause with my earrings I thought i'd have the biggest square in a picture
^okay. good wording, good concept. but it's ur pic. still pretty solid closer

vs.

Damnnn boy. The ink you got is some stupid dumb shit
Ironic u screaming 'Zip Em Up!!' & it's all u hear w/ THOSE tattoos in public
^aite coo
U Lime to the death. & I fuck w/ Ron of War, that guy is a vet!
.. it's just reaaaally fucking creepy u got Gods Child on the side of ya neck.
^kiiinda statementish. but worded well enough to work
Looking like Taylor Gang & actin' the knowitall are feats of his
But trusttt that Khalifa man dead in seconds just for thinkin' that he a Wiz
^aite. can def make that work
This is the lesbian y'all clamour for!? NC's own Mr. Man of War...
He's a Square Peg ina Round Hole. & so is the Fake Earring this faggot wore
^aite cool
U ain't a soldier Sho. Justa frail boy with NO hope in votes.
Shittt even Orc is Blacker Denim, & we ain't talkin' bout our chosen Coats
^pretty cool
He takes pics w/ blunts to shock kids here. &&god, it's queer
mannn quit Blowing Smoke -- u do that every time u say you're not Midtier
^aite word
Ur folks told u bout Employment & now u tryna find shit
But they said Keep an Ear out for Cash. not get a Tatt of the Sign beside it
^cool

well. this is def closer than the votes show. & cuz of that i kinda wanna vote for murda, becuz this isn't one-sided at all. but orc was just a little bit more polished & consistent. but yea. murda def put up a good verse & made this close. so props to both.
v/orc