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Burd 1-3 vs murda sho 2-1 (PICS) - ORC WINS
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For additional Rules refer to rule thread First to 5, win by at least two votes Good luck! @Burd @Orc @murda sho |
ya change my name to Orc
ppl vote against Burd but they're afraid to vote against Orc n @murda sho this is pics yea? |
yea ima try the pics out bro... and fuck that keep his name as Burd so his dickriders don't recognize him haha
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throw a pic up my dude. i will when i get home asap
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idk why it's small, i can try resize it or post a diff one if u don't wana use this @murda sho
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im not sure if this showed up... how many bars we going? @Orc
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Yea it worked man let's go 14
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Can you make your pic bigger? @Orc
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@murda sho orc sent me 14
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word up ima either drop late as fuck tonight or tomorrow... I'm shooting for tonight though I'm watching this cavs game and shit
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Burden aka Orc My first pic battle & i'm using you to get these rocks off squirt I'll have Bur buried so bad it'd look worse than that cheap knock off shirt You the one with the goons!? I should beat ur ass at that bar cause u lied Look even your shadow only has your back part of the time He was a biter, it really sucks cause you're relevant, why jock? I guess the Hunger Forced u into it so much u start resemblin FryLock We used to be cool we had peeps loathin how the clips just keep smokin But I see bro that you were nothing but a bitch in sheep's clothing You was broke and a stan I gave u confidence now I'm showing you cans Cause these arms go over the shoulder, while that's just how u pose with ur man Throw up them hands, you know in reality you'd drop so do not fight Button his dreams... i'd hope to god he'd do that to his top right You're such a queer, but I was mistaken while ur in that chair with ur liquor Cause with my earrings I thought i'd have the biggest square in a picture Zip Him Up!! |
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Damnnn boy. The ink you got is some stupid dumb shit Ironic u screaming 'Zip Em Up!!' & it's all u hear w/ THOSE tattoos in public U Lime to the death. & I fuck w/ Ron of War, that guy is a vet! .. it's just reaaaally fucking creepy u got Gods Child on the side of ya neck. Looking like Taylor Gang & actin' the knowitall are feats of his But trusttt that Khalifa man dead in seconds just for thinkin' that he a Wiz This is the lesbian y'all clamour for!? NC's own Mr. Man of War... He's a Square Peg ina Round Hole. & so is the Fake Earring this faggot wore U ain't a soldier Sho. Justa frail boy with NO hope in votes. Shittt even Orc is Blacker Denim, & we ain't talkin' bout our chosen Coats He takes pics w/ blunts to shock kids here. &&god, it's queer mannn quit Blowing Smoke -- u do that every time u say you're not Midtier Ur folks told u bout Employment & now u tryna find shit But they said Keep an Ear out for Cash. not get a Tatt of the Sign beside it GANG! |
I fuck w/ u both. I'll do the honors
Murda Opener lol nice np Shadow was cool but pretty nonsensical. What u mean part of the time. Prolly a rhetorical question. .I think u added that for hilarity. I sense it. Not bad flylock just was worded badly to me. It didn't culminate into anything for me sheep's clothing was hard af tho arm over shoulder? he's not posing like that tbo? Looks like he's brushing that guy. Not arm over shoulder tbh? Am I blind? Concept was fire but I had to like zoom my eyes to mk sure his arm was over his shoulder. .n it isnt? Button ok biggest square abv Avg Cool drop. Off n on but one bar had me like wtf Sheep's clothing was ether Orc zip him up. Ok err ok so ur alluding to the fact that he has gods child on the side of neck because of Ron errrr no think not Khalifa was kinda forced to me originally. The more I say it the better it sounds tho. It's Ehhh ok square peg was creative . I like blacker denim was pretty cool not mid tier was nice. closer bang Interesting battle. I think sho did pretty well for his first pic battle. Had its ups n downs. Orc started off shaky but his last 6 were enough to seal. Lotb sheep's clothing tho. That was just hard shit. V/orc |
Burden aka Orc
My first pic battle & i'm using you to get these rocks off squirt I'll have Bur buried so bad it'd look worse than that cheap knock off shirt cool You the one with the goons!? I should beat ur ass at that bar cause u lied Look even your shadow only has your back part of the time when you really break it down it doesn't make sense but was still funny He was a biter, it really sucks cause you're relevant, why jock? I guess the Hunger Forced u into it so much u start resemblin FryLock sorry. The Englishman no comprende We used to be cool we had peeps loathin how the clips just keep smokin But I see bro that you were nothing but a bitch in sheep's clothing cool You was broke and a stan I gave u confidence now I'm showing you cans Cause these arms go over the shoulder, while that's just how u pose with ur man forced, not the bar itself, just the analysis of the pic for a punch Throw up them hands, you know in reality you'd drop so do not fight Button his dreams... i'd hope to god he'd do that to his top right haha I thought this wtf at forgetting to finish dressing yourself You're such a queer, but I was mistaken while ur in that chair with ur liquor Cause with my earrings I thought i'd have the biggest square in a picture ok Zip Him Up!![/QUOTE] Vs Quote:
V/Orc |
Best/More effective bars:
My first pic battle & i'm using you to get these rocks off squirt I'll have Bur buried so bad it'd look worse than that cheap knock off shirt - Tough, I fucks w/ it... We used to be cool we had peeps loathin how the clips just keep smokin But I see bro that you were nothing but a bitch in sheep's clothing - Dope pic reference. Could have used a better set up, IMO. You was broke and a stan I gave u confidence now I'm showing you cans Cause these arms go over the shoulder, while that's just how u pose with ur man - Don't really see an arm over his shoulder, had there been, it would have been a dope flip/picture reference/gun bar. Bars that had potential but fell flat, IMO: You the one with the goons!? I should beat ur ass at that bar cause u lied Look even your shadow only has your back part of the time - I think this had potnetial. Execution, IMO was kind of mild, tho. Throw up them hands, you know in reality you'd drop so do not fight Button his dreams... i'd hope to god he'd do that to his top right - Same as last bar, execution a little off/mild. vs Best/More effective bars: This is the lesbian y'all clamour for!? NC's own Mr. Man of War... He's a Square Peg ina Round Hole. & so is the Fake Earring this faggot wore - This was pretty cool picture reference. U ain't a soldier Sho. Justa frail boy with NO hope in votes. Shittt even Orc is Blacker Denim, & we ain't talkin' bout our chosen Coats - Lol, again... Dope picture reference and solid flip on it. He takes pics w/ blunts to shock kids here. &&god, it's queer mannn quit Blowing Smoke -- u do that every time u say you're not Midtier - Dope picture reference. Tough bar here & I fucks w/ this. LOTB, IMO. Ur folks told u bout Employment & now u tryna find shit But they said Keep an Ear out for Cash. not get a Tatt of the Sign beside it - This was slick & a dope picture reference. Bars that had potential but fell flat, IMO: Damnnn boy. The ink you got is some stupid dumb shit Ironic u screaming 'Zip Em Up!!' & it's all u hear w/ THOSE tattoos in public - Didn't really consider this an insult, could have been a little harsher w/ it. U Lime to the death. & I fuck w/ Ron of War, that guy is a vet! .. it's just reaaaally fucking creepy u got Gods Child on the side of ya neck. - Same as above. Looking like Taylor Gang & actin' the knowitall are feats of his But trusttt that Khalifa man dead in seconds just for thinkin' that he a Wiz - Cal leave a man dead? No wayyyyy. Forced as fuck, IMO. OVERALL: Pretty solid picture battle, ladies. I think both these niggas did well, here. Murda, for a 1st picture battle, not bad man. But all in all, IMO - Orc takes this. He referenced the picture a lot better and basically did so with ever bar he dropped. Had some bangers, as well. Murda had some bangers, but also had some bars I didn't like as were, Orc's entire verse was pretty much nice even tho he started off slow, but closed out with some fire. Even his potential bars were dope picture references, but he slipped up on executing them. Blowing smoke bar was dope and LOTB for me... Murda's arm over the shoulder bar was dope, had there been an arm over Orc's shoulder. IDK if it's the work desktop but I don't see an arm over his shoulder, so that was just a regular gun bar for me. With that being said... Orc got it |
Burden aka Orc
My first pic battle & i'm using you to get these rocks off squirt I'll have Bur buried so bad it'd look worse than that cheap knock off shirt nice You the one with the goons!? I should beat ur ass at that bar cause u lied Look even your shadow only has your back part of the time ehhhh He was a biter, it really sucks cause you're relevant, why jock? I guess the Hunger Forced u into it so much u start resemblin FryLock lmao yooo I see it We used to be cool we had peeps loathin how the clips just keep smokin But I see bro that you were nothing but a bitch in sheep's clothing good here You was broke and a stan I gave u confidence now I'm showing you cans Cause these arms go over the shoulder, while that's just how u pose with ur man dont see it, fell Throw up them hands, you know in reality you'd drop so do not fight Button his dreams... i'd hope to god he'd do that to his top right ehh not feelin this You're such a queer, but I was mistaken while ur in that chair with ur liquor Cause with my earrings I thought i'd have the biggest square in a picture ok decent Vs Damnnn boy. The ink you got is some stupid dumb shit Ironic u screaming 'Zip Em Up!!' & it's all u hear w/ THOSE tattoos in public ehh not feelin really U Lime to the death. & I fuck w/ Ron of War, that guy is a vet! .. it's just reaaaally fucking creepy u got Gods Child on the side of ya neck. Not feelin this either Looking like Taylor Gang & actin' the knowitall are feats of his But trusttt that Khalifa man dead in seconds just for thinkin' that he a Wiz i was just thinking bout this wp (cuh leave uh) amen said it wrong. This bar is good to me This is the lesbian y'all clamour for!? NC's own Mr. Man of War... He's a Square Peg ina Round Hole. & so is the Fake Earring this faggot wore decent U ain't a soldier Sho. Justa frail boy with NO hope in votes. Shittt even Orc is Blacker Denim, & we ain't talkin' bout our chosen Coats haha dope He takes pics w/ blunts to shock kids here. &&god, it's queer mannn quit Blowing Smoke -- u do that every time u say you're not Midtier alright good here Ur folks told u bout Employment & now u tryna find shit But they said Keep an Ear out for Cash. not get a Tatt of the Sign beside it pretty good This battle was cool, I thought murda was gonna have this in the bag while I was halfway done reading Orc's verse but the last portion of his verse was good af. Murda had: bur buried, frylock, Sheeps clothing Burd had: blacker denim, mid tier, ear for cash I have it tied on nice quotes but when it comes to decent lines and misses I have Orc edging it by a bit. If murda would have had one more nice line he would have taken it for me. But for now Vote: Orc |
Burden aka Orc
My first pic battle & i'm using you to get these rocks off squirt I'll have Bur buried so bad it'd look worse than that cheap knock off shirt Good start You the one with the goons!? I should beat ur ass at that bar cause u lied Look even your shadow only has your back part of the time Okay He was a biter, it really sucks cause you're relevant, why jock? I guess the Hunger Forced u into it so much u start resemblin FryLock Ehh We used to be cool we had peeps loathin how the clips just keep smokin But I see bro that you were nothing but a bitch in sheep's clothing Ok You was broke and a stan I gave u confidence now I'm showing you cans Cause these arms go over the shoulder, while that's just how u pose with ur man Lol Throw up them hands, you know in reality you'd drop so do not fight Button his dreams... i'd hope to god he'd do that to his top right Heh okay You're such a queer, but I was mistaken while ur in that chair with ur liquor Cause with my earrings I thought i'd have the biggest square in a picture This was cool but it could have been better Zip Him Up!! ________________ "I see these rap sites prevailin, got a nigga's life unveilin But I can sight the jealous i'm too on point like Vikings helmets" Zip Em Up! Damnnn boy. The ink you got is some stupid dumb shit Ironic u screaming 'Zip Em Up!!' & it's all u hear w/ THOSE tattoos in public Im not sure i get the exact meaning but its okay either way i think of it U Lime to the death. & I fuck w/ Ron of War, that guy is a vet! .. it's just reaaaally fucking creepy u got Gods Child on the side of ya neck. Ehh Looking like Taylor Gang & actin' the knowitall are feats of his But trusttt that Khalifa man dead in seconds just for thinkin' that he a Wiz I think this was a good idea.. assuming its cuh leave a man.. This is the lesbian y'all clamour for!? NC's own Mr. Man of War... He's a Square Peg ina Round Hole. & so is the Fake Earring this faggot wore Hahaha U ain't a soldier Sho. Justa frail boy with NO hope in votes. Shittt even Orc is Blacker Denim, & we ain't talkin' bout our chosen Coats Slick He takes pics w/ blunts to shock kids here. &&god, it's queer mannn quit Blowing Smoke -- u do that every time u say you're not Midtier You snapping now Ur folks told u bout Employment & now u tryna find shit But they said Keep an Ear out for Cash. not get a Tatt of the Sign beside it Meh Burd picked up in the middle. Didnt appreciate some of the preemptive/defensive lines from sho they seemed lazy. I got Orc |
My first pic battle & i'm using you to get these rocks off squirt
I'll have Bur buried so bad it'd look worse than that cheap knock off shirt ^i used a bur bury line before, so this didn't hit as hard to me. but not a bad line You the one with the goons!? I should beat ur ass at that bar cause u lied Look even your shadow only has your back part of the time ^lol cool. mb flip it w/ halfway or smth? becuz the time part doesnt rlllly make sense He was a biter, it really sucks cause you're relevant, why jock? I guess the Hunger Forced u into it so much u start resemblin FryLock ^aite We used to be cool we had peeps loathin how the clips just keep smokin But I see bro that you were nothing but a bitch in sheep's clothing ^lol word You was broke and a stan I gave u confidence now I'm showing you cans Cause these arms go over the shoulder, while that's just how u pose with ur man ^nice Throw up them hands, you know in reality you'd drop so do not fight Button his dreams... i'd hope to god he'd do that to his top right ^aite You're such a queer, but I was mistaken while ur in that chair with ur liquor Cause with my earrings I thought i'd have the biggest square in a picture ^okay. good wording, good concept. but it's ur pic. still pretty solid closer vs. Damnnn boy. The ink you got is some stupid dumb shit Ironic u screaming 'Zip Em Up!!' & it's all u hear w/ THOSE tattoos in public ^aite coo U Lime to the death. & I fuck w/ Ron of War, that guy is a vet! .. it's just reaaaally fucking creepy u got Gods Child on the side of ya neck. ^kiiinda statementish. but worded well enough to work Looking like Taylor Gang & actin' the knowitall are feats of his But trusttt that Khalifa man dead in seconds just for thinkin' that he a Wiz ^aite. can def make that work This is the lesbian y'all clamour for!? NC's own Mr. Man of War... He's a Square Peg ina Round Hole. & so is the Fake Earring this faggot wore ^aite cool U ain't a soldier Sho. Justa frail boy with NO hope in votes. Shittt even Orc is Blacker Denim, & we ain't talkin' bout our chosen Coats ^pretty cool He takes pics w/ blunts to shock kids here. &&god, it's queer mannn quit Blowing Smoke -- u do that every time u say you're not Midtier ^aite word Ur folks told u bout Employment & now u tryna find shit But they said Keep an Ear out for Cash. not get a Tatt of the Sign beside it ^cool well. this is def closer than the votes show. & cuz of that i kinda wanna vote for murda, becuz this isn't one-sided at all. but orc was just a little bit more polished & consistent. but yea. murda def put up a good verse & made this close. so props to both. v/orc |
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