Eyespaz 2-2 vs Lotto Smirk 1-1 - LOTTO WINS

Sharp · 06-02-2015, 01:34 AM

Netcees Battle League Season VIII

Rules

Due Dates:

Verses are due Thursday, June 4th 2015 11:59 PM PST. and will be open until the following Sunday
Battles that lack votes may close later.
One sided battles may get closed early.
Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

Minimum of 10, maximum of 16
If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first

For additional Rules refer to rule thread

First to 5, win by at least two votes
Good luck!
@eyespaz @Lotto Smirk

iSpaz · 06-02-2015, 02:05 AM

yeahhh mayn

Lotto Smirk · 06-02-2015, 02:31 AM

How many u wanna go?

iSpaz · 06-02-2015, 01:25 PM

I'm cool with 10

iSpaz · 06-03-2015, 04:56 PM

Let's get it started.

I'm just bein me. Fuckin beast that be chokin kids.
So the ONLY way I'd change a Lot is giving out black eyes and a broken rib.
I make it rain on hoes. My foes could get covered in dirt er somethin.
Cause I'm rakin in bread.. while you still in that hump pile wit ur cousin.
Your a mess. Tryna come up next but you already lost son.
And if you EVER try to clean up, "aisle" just mop you up like one.
Your girl fine. Easy dime and them hos know I'm a bully.
I bring that thunder, cats.. but no lion when shock her pussy.
I should kill this faggot. Them lame bars have it, cause we cant take anymore.
It's embarrassing how you washed up.. esp when it's just ur limbs driftin to shore.

Lotto Smirk · 06-04-2015, 06:17 PM

All your wins from no shows pfft

Ranked in top half pfft,no show wins got ya t think that ya potent
You should be mid tier, at the fact you'll be 2-3 just cuz I showed up & posted

Ya lame g,verses suck literally hurting people brother
So if eye drops .. They be needed to stop the irratation if I have to read another
Nbl better now,attacking me? my boys got my back I'll warn ya
So we up in the ante,raping that bitch why ya uncle tied up in the corner
Dodging top cats that's just fact, guess sharp got you undercover
Not come into contact wi a dope head, since welfare took you from ya mother
ya x is disease ridden, new hoes will feel shit quick
if a girl want spastic.. She gon need medical advice just to deal with it

Over

8===D~~~~(}: · 06-04-2015, 08:12 PM

Let's get it started.

I'm just bein me. Fuckin beast that be chokin kids.
So the ONLY way I'd change a Lot is giving out black eyes and a broken rib.
ehh I think wording ruined the potential of this
I make it rain on hoes. My foes could get covered in dirt er somethin.
Cause I'm rakin in bread.. while you still in that hump pile wit ur cousin.
lol pretty cool
Your a mess. Tryna come up next but you already lost son.
And if you EVER try to clean up, "aisle" just mop you up like one.
i don't think u needed quotations, this is decent
Your girl fine. Easy dime and them hos know I'm a bully.
I bring that thunder, cats.. but no lion when shock her pussy.
nah wording on the second line screwed.
I should kill this faggot. Them lame bars have it, cause we cant take anymore.
It's embarrassing how you washed up.. esp when it's just ur limbs driftin to shore.
decent here

you've got the concept going here but your wording and execution is what's hurting you. If you get that down packed I think your bars will come out much better. Decent verse but I've seen better from you guy.

Vs

All your wins from no shows pfft

Ranked in top half pfft,no show wins got ya t think that ya potent
You should be mid tier, at the fact you'll be 2-3 just cuz I showed up & posted
nah not feelin this
Ya lame g,verses suck literally hurting people brother
So if eye drops .. They be needed to stop the irratation if I have to read another
nice I liked this
Nbl better now,attacking me? my boys got my back I'll warn ya
So we up in the ante,raping that bitch why ya uncle tied up in the corner
nah didn't like this
Dodging top cats that's just fact, guess sharp got you undercover
Not come into contact wi a dope head, since welfare took you from ya mother
ehh decent at best
ya x is disease ridden, new hoes will feel shit quick
if a girl want spastic.. She gon need medical advice just to t deal with it
alright pretty clever wp

Lotto you have the potential to bring dope shit each week cause u come up with some good stuff but then add a bunch of bad lines in the mix which hurt your verse.

This is a hell of a close battle, but I've got Lotto winning this by a hair having top 2 lines of the battle IMO. Could go either way.

Vote: Lotto Smirk

Greed · 06-04-2015, 08:35 PM

I'm just bein me. Fuckin beast that be chokin kids.
So the ONLY way I'd change a Lot is giving out black eyes and a broken rib.
Cool

I make it rain on hoes. My foes could get covered in dirt er somethin.
Cause I'm rakin in bread.. while you still in that hump pile wit ur cousin.
Ehh

Your a mess. Tryna come up next but you already lost son.
And if you EVER try to clean up, "aisle" just mop you up like one.
Ok

Your girl fine. Easy dime and them hos know I'm a bully.
I bring that thunder, cats.. but no lion when shock her pussy.
Could have been better.

I should kill this faggot. Them lame bars have it, cause we cant take anymore.
It's embarrassing how you washed up.. esp when it's just ur limbs driftin to shore.
Alright

Ranked in top half pfft,no show wins got ya t think that ya potent
You should be mid tier, at the fact you'll be 2-3 just cuz I showed up & posted
Okay

Ya lame g,verses suck literally hurting people brother
So if eye drops .. They be needed to stop the irratation if I have to read another
Lolol

Nbl better now,attacking me? my boys got my back I'll warn ya
So we up in the ante,raping that bitch why ya uncle tied up in the corner
Haha slick

Dodging top cats that's just fact, guess sharp got you undercover
Not come into contact wi a dope head, since welfare took you from ya mother
Cold blooded

ya x is disease ridden, new hoes will feel shit quick
if a girl want spastic.. She gon need medical advice just to deal with it
Not so much

This was a cool battle but lotto got this one.

ill nik-A · 06-05-2015, 07:14 PM

Lotto was more consistent here the eye drop was good, contact w a dope head was too...

Eye man, need to be more clever, a lot had potential but not good enough, wording killed it

I got lotto

fraze · 06-05-2015, 10:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by eyespaz

I'm just bein me. Fuckin beast that be chokin kids.
So the ONLY way I'd change a Lot is giving out black eyes and a broken rib.
this is aight
I make it rain on hoes. My foes could get covered in dirt er somethin.
Cause I'm rakin in bread.. while you still in that hump pile wit ur cousin.
meh
Your a mess. Tryna come up next but you already lost son.
And if you EVER try to clean up, "aisle" just mop you up like one.
cool but the punch is light
Your girl fine. Easy dime and them hos know I'm a bully.
I bring that thunder, cats.. but no lion when shock her pussy.
bad wording and forced
I should kill this faggot. Them lame bars have it, cause we cant take anymore.
It's embarrassing how you washed up.. esp when it's just ur limbs driftin to shore.
needed to set this up better

Quote:

Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk

All your wins from no shows pfft

Ranked in top half pfft,no show wins got ya t think that ya potent
You should be mid tier, at the fact you'll be 2-3 just cuz I showed up & posted
ok personal, but no wp
Ya lame g,verses suck literally hurting people brother
So if eye drops .. They be needed to stop the irratation if I have to read another
could have been cool but this isn't worded at all
Nbl better now,attacking me? my boys got my back I'll warn ya
So we up in the ante,raping that bitch why ya uncle tied up in the corner
ok
Dodging top cats that's just fact, guess sharp got you undercover
Not come into contact wi a dope head, since welfare took you from ya mother
bad wording ok concept
ya x is disease ridden, new hoes will feel shit quick
if a girl want spastic.. She gon need medical advice just to deal with it
no
Over

This is a close one. Both had a few good concepts, but also had bad misses on wording that made punches ineffective. Spaz's best bar was 'aisle' , but that wasn't a hard hitting punch. Lotto had better concepts overall, but a few of them weren't worded to hit both ways, which makes them feel forced. Despite that, I still have to give him credit for a better verse. However both showed some creative lines so props to you both.

Vote Lotto Smirk

Destroyer · 06-06-2015, 10:11 AM

eyes opener was ok really the only decent bar
everything else was either mad simple or played
lotto had more than enough to win eye drops was decent, ante was Lolz

v/lotto

06-02-2015, 02:05 AM	#2
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161234	yeahhh mayn __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw

06-02-2015, 01:25 PM	#4
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161234	I'm cool with 10 __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw

06-03-2015, 04:56 PM	#5
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161234	Let's get it started. I'm just bein me. Fuckin beast that be chokin kids. So the ONLY way I'd change a Lot is giving out black eyes and a broken rib. I make it rain on hoes. My foes could get covered in dirt er somethin. Cause I'm rakin in bread.. while you still in that hump pile wit ur cousin. Your a mess. Tryna come up next but you already lost son. And if you EVER try to clean up, "aisle" just mop you up like one. Your girl fine. Easy dime and them hos know I'm a bully. I bring that thunder, cats.. but no lion when shock her pussy. I should kill this faggot. Them lame bars have it, cause we cant take anymore. It's embarrassing how you washed up.. esp when it's just ur limbs driftin to shore. __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw

06-04-2015, 06:17 PM	#6
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665833	All your wins from no shows pfft Ranked in top half pfft,no show wins got ya t think that ya potent You should be mid tier, at the fact you'll be 2-3 just cuz I showed up & posted Ya lame g,verses suck literally hurting people brother So if eye drops .. They be needed to stop the irratation if I have to read another Nbl better now,attacking me? my boys got my back I'll warn ya So we up in the ante,raping that bitch why ya uncle tied up in the corner Dodging top cats that's just fact, guess sharp got you undercover Not come into contact wi a dope head, since welfare took you from ya mother ya x is disease ridden, new hoes will feel shit quick if a girl want spastic.. She gon need medical advice just to deal with it Over Last edited by Lotto Smirk; 06-04-2015 at 08:03 PM.

06-05-2015, 07:14 PM	#9
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	Lotto was more consistent here the eye drop was good, contact w a dope head was too... Eye man, need to be more clever, a lot had potential but not good enough, wording killed it I got lotto __________________ Grumpy old man.

06-02-2015, 02:31 AM	#3
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665833	How many u wanna go?

06-04-2015, 08:12 PM	#7
8===D~~~~(}: Banned Join Date: Mar 2015 Posts: 1,335 Battle Record: 0-1000 Champed - Mustache C-C-Combo Breaker - No Man Cleft Behind (x79) - Clefts & Rights II - Grand Cleft Larceny - Cleft 4 Dead V Rep Power: 0	Let's get it started. I'm just bein me. Fuckin beast that be chokin kids. So the ONLY way I'd change a Lot is giving out black eyes and a broken rib. ehh I think wording ruined the potential of this I make it rain on hoes. My foes could get covered in dirt er somethin. Cause I'm rakin in bread.. while you still in that hump pile wit ur cousin. lol pretty cool Your a mess. Tryna come up next but you already lost son. And if you EVER try to clean up, "aisle" just mop you up like one. i don't think u needed quotations, this is decent Your girl fine. Easy dime and them hos know I'm a bully. I bring that thunder, cats.. but no lion when shock her pussy. nah wording on the second line screwed. I should kill this faggot. Them lame bars have it, cause we cant take anymore. It's embarrassing how you washed up.. esp when it's just ur limbs driftin to shore. decent here you've got the concept going here but your wording and execution is what's hurting you. If you get that down packed I think your bars will come out much better. Decent verse but I've seen better from you guy. Vs All your wins from no shows pfft Ranked in top half pfft,no show wins got ya t think that ya potent You should be mid tier, at the fact you'll be 2-3 just cuz I showed up & posted nah not feelin this Ya lame g,verses suck literally hurting people brother So if eye drops .. They be needed to stop the irratation if I have to read another nice I liked this Nbl better now,attacking me? my boys got my back I'll warn ya So we up in the ante,raping that bitch why ya uncle tied up in the corner nah didn't like this Dodging top cats that's just fact, guess sharp got you undercover Not come into contact wi a dope head, since welfare took you from ya mother ehh decent at best ya x is disease ridden, new hoes will feel shit quick if a girl want spastic.. She gon need medical advice just to t deal with it alright pretty clever wp Lotto you have the potential to bring dope shit each week cause u come up with some good stuff but then add a bunch of bad lines in the mix which hurt your verse. This is a hell of a close battle, but I've got Lotto winning this by a hair having top 2 lines of the battle IMO. Could go either way. Vote: Lotto Smirk

06-04-2015, 08:35 PM	#8
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	I'm just bein me. Fuckin beast that be chokin kids. So the ONLY way I'd change a Lot is giving out black eyes and a broken rib. Cool I make it rain on hoes. My foes could get covered in dirt er somethin. Cause I'm rakin in bread.. while you still in that hump pile wit ur cousin. Ehh Your a mess. Tryna come up next but you already lost son. And if you EVER try to clean up, "aisle" just mop you up like one. Ok Your girl fine. Easy dime and them hos know I'm a bully. I bring that thunder, cats.. but no lion when shock her pussy. Could have been better. I should kill this faggot. Them lame bars have it, cause we cant take anymore. It's embarrassing how you washed up.. esp when it's just ur limbs driftin to shore. Alright Ranked in top half pfft,no show wins got ya t think that ya potent You should be mid tier, at the fact you'll be 2-3 just cuz I showed up & posted Okay Ya lame g,verses suck literally hurting people brother So if eye drops .. They be needed to stop the irratation if I have to read another Lolol Nbl better now,attacking me? my boys got my back I'll warn ya So we up in the ante,raping that bitch why ya uncle tied up in the corner Haha slick Dodging top cats that's just fact, guess sharp got you undercover Not come into contact wi a dope head, since welfare took you from ya mother Cold blooded ya x is disease ridden, new hoes will feel shit quick if a girl want spastic.. She gon need medical advice just to deal with it Not so much This was a cool battle but lotto got this one.