something's missing

Pharaohs Army · 12-27-2014, 04:36 AM

i've been thinking there's something missing
i've ben on a journey and somewhere along the way
i must have missed it
and every time i think i find it,
i no longer trust the mission
i need the guts to start a transition
it's a matter of time it's not a decision
afraid of failure is not a position
procrastination was never my vision but(it)remains my heaviest symptom
a playwright who never played right
syntactical manipulation the emptiest wisdom
please don't tell me you hate life
ask a rich person to choose between money
and Time they'd take Time
tell me to stop making rhymes
and i'll just take the ones i made and proceed to work on saying them nice.
yes,that's right.
i donno what i said it for because this is not a metaphor this ain't about life.
this is Probably about mics i'll See you on the other side

Mr. J · 12-27-2014, 03:24 PM

This was interesting for what it was
and what it was I never caught on to that
then I thought, 'yea...like I give a fuck
all I know is that it makes me want to rap'
then I saw your sig, in my mind I was like whaaaaat
we was needing a homer and now your up to bat...
the flow was cool, a little more works a plus
keep up the nice work and maybe I'll holla back

12-27-2014, 04:36 AM	#1
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	something's missing i've been thinking there's something missing i've ben on a journey and somewhere along the way i must have missed it and every time i think i find it, i no longer trust the mission i need the guts to start a transition it's a matter of time it's not a decision afraid of failure is not a position procrastination was never my vision but(it)remains my heaviest symptom a playwright who never played right syntactical manipulation the emptiest wisdom please don't tell me you hate life ask a rich person to choose between money and Time they'd take Time tell me to stop making rhymes and i'll just take the ones i made and proceed to work on saying them nice. yes,that's right. i donno what i said it for because this is not a metaphor this ain't about life. this is Probably about mics i'll See you on the other side Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 12-27-2014 at 04:46 AM.

12-27-2014, 03:24 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	This was interesting for what it was and what it was I never caught on to that then I thought, 'yea...like I give a fuck all I know is that it makes me want to rap' then I saw your sig, in my mind I was like whaaaaat we was needing a homer and now your up to bat... the flow was cool, a little more works a plus keep up the nice work and maybe I'll holla back __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you