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Pharaohs Army 12-27-2014 04:36 AM

something's missing
 
i've been thinking there's something missing
i've ben on a journey and somewhere along the way
i must have missed it
and every time i think i find it,
i no longer trust the mission
i need the guts to start a transition
it's a matter of time it's not a decision
afraid of failure is not a position
procrastination was never my vision but(it)remains my heaviest symptom
a playwright who never played right
syntactical manipulation the emptiest wisdom
please don't tell me you hate life
ask a rich person to choose between money
and Time they'd take Time
tell me to stop making rhymes
and i'll just take the ones i made and proceed to work on saying them nice.
yes,that's right.
i donno what i said it for because this is not a metaphor this ain't about life.
this is Probably about mics i'll See you on the other side

Mr. J 12-27-2014 03:24 PM

This was interesting for what it was
and what it was I never caught on to that
then I thought, 'yea...like I give a fuck
all I know is that it makes me want to rap'
then I saw your sig, in my mind I was like whaaaaat
we was needing a homer and now your up to bat...
the flow was cool, a little more works a plus
keep up the nice work and maybe I'll holla back


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