Pen Cap

Wise Wiggles · 12-10-2014, 12:50 AM

It's all a joke, except there's no laughing part
No last regards. Just bad dreams of stabbing dark
While I was treating points like caviar, the sad scene starts
You were at the bars.. In the industry.
In the midst of all the happy hours.. just a pistol found
I miss you. Loud woofers pound.
Please. Lord. Give thee thine bass to smoosh this town
Holding on, when I need to put it down
Booger's sour. Munchie heaven w/sugar clouds
Was all progress. Soothing. So awesome. Coolest.
But the bottle's gruesome. Not real & It's not illusion
I feel so lost and foolish. Like logic's stupid
Pain is just like a back-stabber, I thought I knew it
Says it's gonna kill me. She always draws conclusions
Maybe I should just sell some cigs so the COPS can do it
Losing the only one who gets you? Veins? Fucking sucks.
I want to punch concrete until there is only bloody nubs
That's it, that's all. Find the pen cap. I'm done.
My eyes are red. DABS. And more dabs
Sick of trying to write the dead back
Au revoir, fuck the clock. Time is pressed flat
I like to get dabbed.

Zen · 12-11-2014, 02:59 PM

From 'booger's sour' till the end was great.

Geno · 12-11-2014, 03:14 PM

She alwaya draws conclusions. This concept can be milked. I likec this. Shouldve got on the collab man

Wise Wiggles · 12-11-2014, 07:23 PM

thanks zenny. and word geno should of but at the time I wasn't inspired and you seemed like you wanted to post up soon so I didn't want to hold y'all up. Next time around we can get wicked with something.

She always draws conclusions like her art's to nuisance
I'm a fucking pin-head right now, cept w/ darts, she drew 'em
& threw'em... Always assuming..
Acting like I'm star-gazed & perfumes a love potion,
but IVE HAD HARD DAY BITCH,
know how much sod weighs dripping wet?
I wanna get drunk...You know..?..Fucking toasted
On Molly? Only get into cuts that cause convulsions
Life's a skate?
Should'a seen me when I had the Koston's broke in
Fucking sub-par reality. My subs are brutality
Watts enormous. I quake shit for my uncle who passed away
Don't wanna let me grieve? Smash the brakes..lol
Ever seen DeathProof? What about a human head boom?
Stomach out, just oozing all your red goop
Blah blah lol

YDK · 12-11-2014, 08:52 PM

This was deep man, I know how it is ta lose somebody. We should try an collab on this subject some time...I think it'd be a cool to actually collab on something so personal

dead man · 12-11-2014, 10:50 PM

Sick of trying to write the dead back

Fuck. Can't even tell you how much this stuck with me.

Peace to the wise

Mr. J · 12-12-2014, 01:56 PM

This was smooth as hell, and deep as well
I really enjoy how you write, and the stories you tell
I feel like you really shine when you in your zone
I can't hate on the word usage. Or your flow
this was nice my dude, very nice..keep writing

12-10-2014, 12:50 AM	#1
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	Pen Cap It's all a joke, except there's no laughing part No last regards. Just bad dreams of stabbing dark While I was treating points like caviar, the sad scene starts You were at the bars.. In the industry. In the midst of all the happy hours.. just a pistol found I miss you. Loud woofers pound. Please. Lord. Give thee thine bass to smoosh this town Holding on, when I need to put it down Booger's sour. Munchie heaven w/sugar clouds Was all progress. Soothing. So awesome. Coolest. But the bottle's gruesome. Not real & It's not illusion I feel so lost and foolish. Like logic's stupid Pain is just like a back-stabber, I thought I knew it Says it's gonna kill me. She always draws conclusions Maybe I should just sell some cigs so the COPS can do it Losing the only one who gets you? Veins? Fucking sucks. I want to punch concrete until there is only bloody nubs That's it, that's all. Find the pen cap. I'm done. My eyes are red. DABS. And more dabs Sick of trying to write the dead back Au revoir, fuck the clock. Time is pressed flat I like to get dabbed. __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch" Last edited by Wise Wiggles; 12-10-2014 at 02:52 AM.

12-11-2014, 03:14 PM	#3
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	She alwaya draws conclusions. This concept can be milked. I likec this. Shouldve got on the collab man __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

12-11-2014, 07:23 PM	#4
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	thanks zenny. and word geno should of but at the time I wasn't inspired and you seemed like you wanted to post up soon so I didn't want to hold y'all up. Next time around we can get wicked with something. She always draws conclusions like her art's to nuisance I'm a fucking pin-head right now, cept w/ darts, she drew 'em & threw'em... Always assuming.. Acting like I'm star-gazed & perfumes a love potion, but IVE HAD HARD DAY BITCH, know how much sod weighs dripping wet? I wanna get drunk...You know..?..Fucking toasted On Molly? Only get into cuts that cause convulsions Life's a skate? Should'a seen me when I had the Koston's broke in Fucking sub-par reality. My subs are brutality Watts enormous. I quake shit for my uncle who passed away Don't wanna let me grieve? Smash the brakes..lol Ever seen DeathProof? What about a human head boom? Stomach out, just oozing all your red goop Blah blah lol __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch" Last edited by Wise Wiggles; 12-11-2014 at 08:59 PM.

12-11-2014, 08:52 PM	#5
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,563 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181112	This was deep man, I know how it is ta lose somebody. We should try an collab on this subject some time...I think it'd be a cool to actually collab on something so personal __________________

12-11-2014, 10:50 PM	#6
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	Sick of trying to write the dead back Fuck. Can't even tell you how much this stuck with me. Peace to the wise __________________ Zack Wicks for president

12-11-2014, 02:59 PM	#2
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	From 'booger's sour' till the end was great.

12-12-2014, 01:56 PM	#7
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	This was smooth as hell, and deep as well I really enjoy how you write, and the stories you tell I feel like you really shine when you in your zone I can't hate on the word usage. Or your flow this was nice my dude, very nice..keep writing __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you