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Wise Wiggles 12-10-2014 12:50 AM

Pen Cap
 
It's all a joke, except there's no laughing part
No last regards. Just bad dreams of stabbing dark
While I was treating points like caviar, the sad scene starts
You were at the bars.. In the industry.
In the midst of all the happy hours.. just a pistol found
I miss you. Loud woofers pound.
Please. Lord. Give thee thine bass to smoosh this town
Holding on, when I need to put it down
Booger's sour. Munchie heaven w/sugar clouds
Was all progress. Soothing. So awesome. Coolest.
But the bottle's gruesome. Not real & It's not illusion
I feel so lost and foolish. Like logic's stupid
Pain is just like a back-stabber, I thought I knew it
Says it's gonna kill me. She always draws conclusions
Maybe I should just sell some cigs so the COPS can do it
Losing the only one who gets you? Veins? Fucking sucks.
I want to punch concrete until there is only bloody nubs
That's it, that's all. Find the pen cap. I'm done.
My eyes are red. DABS. And more dabs
Sick of trying to write the dead back
Au revoir, fuck the clock. Time is pressed flat
I like to get dabbed.

Zen 12-11-2014 02:59 PM

From 'booger's sour' till the end was great.

Geno 12-11-2014 03:14 PM

She alwaya draws conclusions. This concept can be milked. I likec this. Shouldve got on the collab man

Wise Wiggles 12-11-2014 07:23 PM

thanks zenny. and word geno should of but at the time I wasn't inspired and you seemed like you wanted to post up soon so I didn't want to hold y'all up. Next time around we can get wicked with something.

She always draws conclusions like her art's to nuisance
I'm a fucking pin-head right now, cept w/ darts, she drew 'em
& threw'em... Always assuming..
Acting like I'm star-gazed & perfumes a love potion,
but IVE HAD HARD DAY BITCH,
know how much sod weighs dripping wet?
I wanna get drunk...You know..?..Fucking toasted
On Molly? Only get into cuts that cause convulsions
Life's a skate?
Should'a seen me when I had the Koston's broke in
Fucking sub-par reality. My subs are brutality
Watts enormous. I quake shit for my uncle who passed away
Don't wanna let me grieve? Smash the brakes..lol
Ever seen DeathProof? What about a human head boom?
Stomach out, just oozing all your red goop
Blah blah lol

YDK 12-11-2014 08:52 PM

This was deep man, I know how it is ta lose somebody. We should try an collab on this subject some time...I think it'd be a cool to actually collab on something so personal

dead man 12-11-2014 10:50 PM

Sick of trying to write the dead back

Fuck. Can't even tell you how much this stuck with me.

Peace to the wise

Mr. J 12-12-2014 01:56 PM

This was smooth as hell, and deep as well
I really enjoy how you write, and the stories you tell
I feel like you really shine when you in your zone
I can't hate on the word usage. Or your flow
this was nice my dude, very nice..keep writing


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